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Foreign: 147 Days, Act 1 Modern Savages Cover

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Really, scary start. TY for your support and your extreme patience if you've brought one of the Beta books please drop me a note and I'll send you a free copy of the Ebook. 
What's this thing about?
The year is 2716 and after centuries of roaming the depths of extrastellar space, the United Earth Defense Force try to reconnect with their human origins on Earth, but the planet and its denizens are much changes. War has left its mark on the fragile ecosystem, extraterrestrial alliances are constantly tested, while the ambitious Human League vie to wrench control of the Earth’s government from the Allied Defense Force. Will the UEDF be able to come home or are they simply too foreign?
That and I like drawing planes, but I've never gotten he chance to. Sorry, these don't transform into anything. No monsters either or superheroes, just a space war drama fueled by the human condition.
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DebtheAuthor's avatar
I added your book to Goodreads. I hope I got all the info corrrect! www.goodreads.com/book/show/26…
ariotstorm's avatar
Thank you for the review. I keep trying with it. The first book recently got into the hands of an editor so its out of Beta with a lot of changes from the version that you read. The second book goes into much more detail; and, hopefully, about things that people really want to know. If you are willing, I would love a review of the second. I could send you a PDF of it.
DebtheAuthor's avatar
I keep forgetting I have a DeviantArt, but wow! I would love to, if you're still offering after 2 months. lol
ariotstorm's avatar
Hi Hi, I'm sorry for the long silence. I've been working like a beast! Although I'm still producing Foreign, it's dying slowly, I think, and maybe that's for the best. I very much took your review to heart and I've since learned not to strive to be more than I am. Thank you very much for your time and your consideration. I'm sorry it I wasted any of it.
DebtheAuthor's avatar
Well, I clearly haven't been on here in about the same amount of time, so no worries. hahaha Sorry to hear about Foreign, though. :(
MagiKinchi's avatar
Woa... This is a 'departure' from the norm! Looks and sounds very interesting! :clap:
Nice work. And i'm working on your video interview, that i did on you this pass weekend from Eternal Con 2014.
NStevenHarris's avatar
Hey lady!!  Is the Beta book the small book that came in the black plastic sleeve?
ariotstorm's avatar
Nope! It's the full fledged act 1 of the novel which I print and bind at home in a hardcover and as an ebook. That little book is an except from way down the road in the story. The book will never get that perverse, lol. But it is for adults. Are you going to Wizard World Philly?
NStevenHarris's avatar
Oh ok.  No I will be at Wizard Philly this year.  My daughter's recital is the same week, plus I will be performing at the recital as well with some dads.  We are being called the Dancing Dads.  This will the 3rd time doing this Dancing Dad performance.
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I will not*.   Got to proof read what I write better.
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