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Poolside - Chapter Two

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Published: March 10, 2015
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4/18/20

Has it really been 5 years since I illustrated Louder's Poolside?  It has! I'm glad that this comic has mysteriously evaded deletion by the good folks at DA.  I mean, how come they can delete an account but not the files associated with it? It's certainly not a perfect system.  But never fear!  If they catch up with Poolside, all 6 chapters are currently posted in my free comic gallery at Changing Comics!  And the video versions can be found in my video library!

And there's more!  I have been in daily contact with Mr. Louder, and there are more collaborations on the horizon! 


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And now, the original description:


Presenting Poolside Chapter Two!  My continuing collaboration with the Great Louder!  As in the first chapter, I have tried to keep this very close to the original, using much of the original dialogue.  Some parts alluded to in the original work are fleshed out to an extent.

 

This chapter has female AR and female AP.  Two animations are included which can be seen in the downloaded version.  One of the animations is somewhat of a departure for me.  Who can tell me why?

The original can be found here:  www.ararchive.com/index.php?op…

For the animations to work:  download and save the file.  It doesn't work if you just view it in the browser.

For those using mobile devices, try:  www.mediafire.com/view/xdlnuk8…. Animations work well in the video version.
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ArtViewerDWJ's avatar
Should I ask when is the ETA on chapter 3?
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It is imminent.  Some of the renders (especially the animations) have been taking a really long time.  I'm just finishing it up now.
Areat's avatar
Define "imminent"? :p ^^

By the way, you had told me back then that chapter one had been " viewed 3750 times and downloaded 1238 times. " What's the counter for this one, out of curiosity?    

EDIT: I litteraly just noticed the counter is right there on the right side of the page, for everyone to see. >< I guess I had never noticed it because it's at the bottom of the side bar. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's ok.

Imminent means its uploading as we speak.
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wdupgrayeddHobbyist Artist
I think you do great on the proportions. You do fine AR work and I appreciate that. I know some AR artists will AR someone but keep the Adult looks which to me looks like its not true AR(No Offense to the other Artists) Art is supposed to be unique, but I definitely think you get it right. Some other stories you have though have cliff hangers and it drives me crazy :)
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  Thanks.  The cliffhangers will be resoled at some point, never fear.

Glad you noticed the proportions.  I work pretty hard on things like proportions, making the regressed (and the adults for that matter) look as realistic as possible.  It's an ongoing process.  My goal is to make each story look better than the one before, with poses, facial expressions, lighting, etc.  There's a pretty striking difference between my more recent works and my really early ones.  I think the turning point was Evil Girlfriend.  That story, and the ones that followed really look a lot better than the early ones.  They read the same, though.  My writing is what it is.
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Sorry
But When is going to come the chapter 3?
I really admire your work
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I would think a couple of weeks.  I'm only 15 frames into it.
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Your best piece yet, sir, at least in my opinion. ^^ (I forget, was this a pre-written story, and if so are you making changes to the original?) Either way, the age progression scene was terrific. That's more my cup of tea, but more than that, however, the characterization and the story were great. I maybe would have liked to see the pool-side shenanigans go on longer, with more college woman falling victim, but things worked out well and it was all entertaining at the same time.

Spoilers : I'd say the only thing that disappointed me was the substantial decrease in the mother's bust after getting oiled up. >.> I am glad to see that coincidental request of mine was actually a part of this chapter though. ^^

I can't wait to see how Gretchen's decision to stay that way plays out. I'm assuming she is on her own as an adult in college, and is able to make her own decisions like that.

Oh, and that dad's a perv. I cringed a bit over his choice of roleplay. I think I already know what his wife has in store for him later. :P I'm not looking forward to that bit myself, but it seems like a foregone conclusion. Perhaps I'll be surprised though!

I would hope for more age reduction for these 'friends' of the mother's perhaps, which were mentioned, but I won't hold out too much hope there. I suspect perhaps the parts of this story that interest me may be at an end, unless there's TG on the horizon. Now there's a thought.
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Thank you very much.  It was written years ago by Louder.  I have embellished certain parts of it, but the main story is his.  As for Mom, I know I made her a little small but I wanted to accentuate an age difference between her and Sally.  Glad you liked it!
Avictus543's avatar
Thing is if she was still 19 she would still be mostly developed, hence the oddness of it.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Some 19 year olds are pretty skinny.  She's one of those girls
Avictus543's avatar
I won't dispute that much, but she wouldn't have such different proportions from her adult self. Woman develop younger in age than men.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, she put on weight when she got older.  When women put on weight, their boobs get bigger.
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True, and everyone's different so it isn't unfeasible. But, she didn't seem quite so obese as that, so I'd maybe make an argument against it.

In any case though magic's involved and it's your work so I'll shutup now, lol.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  You don't have to shut up.  I appreciate the input.
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I had an idea for some of your stories. I was thinking you could have an alternate path on your stories like what would happen if (A) happened instead of (B). Like the Witch one for example where she is stopped short of getting what she wants.  
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I have an alternate path for House of Dreams that hasn't been done yet.
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wdupgrayeddHobbyist Artist
I wish that potion existed. Imagine you could live for as long as you wanted. 10 years off is not such a bad deal as long as it does not backfire and make you younger than 10 years at a time.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't we all.
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areg5Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes
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cool by the way operation sleepover 10th annervery is coming up this september hint hint.
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