Has it really been 5 years since I illustrated Louder's Poolside? It has! I'm glad that this comic has mysteriously evaded deletion by the good folks at DA. I mean, how come they can delete an account but not the files associated with it? It's certainly not a perfect system. But never fear! If they catch up with Poolside, all 6 chapters are currently posted in my free comic gallery at Changing Comics! And the video versions can be found in my video library!
And there's more! I have been in daily contact with Mr. Louder, and there are more collaborations on the horizon!
Presenting Poolside Chapter Two! My continuing collaboration with the Great Louder! As in the first chapter, I have tried to keep this very close to the original, using much of the original dialogue. Some parts alluded to in the original work are fleshed out to an extent.
This chapter has female AR and female AP. Two animations are included which can be seen in the downloaded version. One of the animations is somewhat of a departure for me. Who can tell me why?The original can be found here: www.ararchive.com/index.php?op…
For the animations to work: download and save the file. It doesn't work if you just view it in the browser.
For those using mobile devices, try: www.mediafire.com/view/xdlnuk8…. Animations work well in the video version.
By the way, you had told me back then that chapter one had been " viewed 3750 times and downloaded 1238 times. " What's the counter for this one, out of curiosity?
EDIT: I litteraly just noticed the counter is right there on the right side of the page, for everyone to see. >< I guess I had never noticed it because it's at the bottom of the side bar. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Glad you noticed the proportions. I work pretty hard on things like proportions, making the regressed (and the adults for that matter) look as realistic as possible. It's an ongoing process. My goal is to make each story look better than the one before, with poses, facial expressions, lighting, etc. There's a pretty striking difference between my more recent works and my really early ones. I think the turning point was Evil Girlfriend. That story, and the ones that followed really look a lot better than the early ones. They read the same, though. My writing is what it is.
Spoilers : I'd say the only thing that disappointed me was the substantial decrease in the mother's bust after getting oiled up. >.> I am glad to see that coincidental request of mine was actually a part of this chapter though. ^^
I can't wait to see how Gretchen's decision to stay that way plays out. I'm assuming she is on her own as an adult in college, and is able to make her own decisions like that.
Oh, and that dad's a perv. I cringed a bit over his choice of roleplay. I think I already know what his wife has in store for him later. I'm not looking forward to that bit myself, but it seems like a foregone conclusion. Perhaps I'll be surprised though!
I would hope for more age reduction for these 'friends' of the mother's perhaps, which were mentioned, but I won't hold out too much hope there. I suspect perhaps the parts of this story that interest me may be at an end, unless there's TG on the horizon. Now there's a thought.