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Poolside - Chapter Five Part 1

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Never let it be said that I don't (occasionally) bow to pressure.  Chapter Five is turning out to be really long.  It was suggested to me that I break it into 2 parts, which I had thought to do but I wasn't sure how long part 2 would be.  I didn't want to rush the project and I think I have a lot more story to tell ...so here's Part 1 of the final chapter.  No animations in this one.  I made some minor changes to the story which I don't think negatively impact the original, and I had an interesting request from one of my favorite artists to include her and her friend in one of my stories, so I figured why not this one?  Written by Louder, edited by me and co-starring the one and only theafromshield.deviantart.com/!

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ahulke's avatar
what happened to your videos on vimeo?
areg5's avatar
That happened before.  I hope they come back.
i hope its not a commission...is it another part 1 part 2 type of story?
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I haven't decided yet.  Probably.  I would wouldn't do a commission if it wasn't a good read, and I would make it available purchase after I do it.
whats the next one about...what type of transformation is it.... and any special guest reappearing in it?
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Well ...it may be a commission.  If not, it will be TG/AR and there will be plenty of guests!  Should be a winner.
is it time for a count down or do I have to be a little bit more patient...lol
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I have 2 more frames to go, maybe 1 or 2 after proofreading it.
Sad its about to end...today right..lol, sorry I can be impatient
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Ha ha.  Not today.  I hope this weekend.
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I'm working on it!  I have 23 more frames to go.
Fred100000's avatar
ok well good luck :)
So how's it coming along?
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Its getting there.  Hopefully by the end of the week.  2 more scenes to go.
Great story ! you've definitely added to the original story and brought it out nicely. This was one of my favorites of Louder's writings.

I liked a lot of Louder's stuff, except for the ending to "life's a beach" because of what happened to the character of Frank. He got all the way out to a beach to look for a baby for his wife's sake, getting verbally abused big time by a mouthy teen,  and ended up getting back to a regressed wife, and he was STUCK old. Just didn't seem right. I wish the character of Frank [who I know had his problems - yes he was a jerk, but he still came across as really having loved his wife] had been given one chance and regressed to his wife's age, being warned to behave or else be restored to his original age, instead of how it happened.  Just that once.  Don't get me wrong, I like a lot of Louder's stuff, just that one story's ending really bugged me. that's all.  Anyway, back to this story, great job, Areg5 !
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I'll have to re-read that one.  I read it a very long time ago.  Glad you like my take on Poolside!  It is my favorite Louder story!
Exceedingly well done!
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Why thank you!
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Areg, that was great! I absolutely love it!! :D :happybounce: I am dying to see next part :) You are the best! :happybounce:
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Glad you like it!  I just worked through your regression to a cute little 10 year old.  Hopefully I'll have Part 2 done by the end of next week.  Thanks for the fave!
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How could I not fave it? :D

Awesome, I am looking forward to it :happybounce:
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I think you'll like how it ends up.  I was thinking of leaving you little, and resolve that in the next story, unless you want me to put you back to normal in this one.
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Well, I´ll leave it up to the artist, I want some surprise :D
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