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Some time ago I had decided to illustrate one of my all time favorite stories, "Back in Time" by Hal. It's still posted on my page at ararchive.com. Although my take on the story had some good elements, there was much I wasn't satisfied with. First off, the illustrations were not as good as they could have been. I was still learning the process. More importantly, the story deviated from the original in a way that I couldn't resolve. I had my reasons for the deviation at the time, which again go back to my shortcomings as an illustrator. I left the story as a part 1, and had no idea how to resolve this deviation in the storyline and remain true to Hal's great tale.

I had received some positive feedback from Hal, which surprised me in that I didn't know he still frequented these forums. I eventually decided to redo the illustrated story and stay as close as possible to what Hal had written. I showed him what I had come up with and he liked it, and even had me incorporate some elements of my first version. I finished several months ago. I haven't heard from Hal in quite a while, but when last we corresponded he seemed ok with it so...here it is. I would encourage you all to read the original, still posted in the ararchive:

www.ararchive.com/index.php?op…

I have really tried not to deviate from the story with few exceptions. I hope you like it:

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:iconlosbanditos1:
losbanditos1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Great job with great source material!  The source story by Hal is very re-readable but you did an amazing job bringing it to life.  The idea of a tiny 22 year old who, in the right clothes and hairstyle, can pass of for 12 is great.  I really like the perspectives used and how the reader can see how immature/small Kimmie looks versus Clarice and the others. 

But when you think about it, poor Kimmie!  She got three big spankings in one day!
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areg5 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  She was a bad girl.  Hal always wrote in this same vein.  He must have 5-10 really similar stories involving a petite young woman who dresses as a child and then gets treating like a kid.
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losbanditos1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Where are the other stories?  The only one I found on ARArchive for Hal was this one! 
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:iconareg5:
areg5 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alec Leamus is the current host:  beyondthemagicbox.blogspot.com…

He also does similar stories. as does Katchase.
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losbanditos1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Thanks!!!
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Benwager12 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 28, 2016
Coincidence?
A school near where I live is called St Mary's for short, it's actually called St Mary's and St Patrick's (Clarice's daughters school)
I think not!

Site: www.stmarysandstpatricks.co.uk…
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha!  Funny!  You've found me out!
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Benwager12 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2016
Woah! I found some clues that led me to believe that earlier when I was reading it last night and then forgot them by the morning but I just posted this as a joke... just... woah!
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, it was written by Hal.  Maybe he lives near you!
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Benwager12 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
Maybe so.
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An-Old-Otaku Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
A most interesting PDF that Age Regression and Spanking fans will truly love!  :slow:
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  Yeah ...
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Noitard Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2016
Hm.  Kim initially looks up to Clarice, evidently.  Not a bad angle to play up, on top of her being in human resources.  

Also, if Kim goes back to school , say, I would be nice if her teacher were a former boyfriend of hers.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It would!  I don't have any plans on writing a sequel.  Hal seemed interested in it for a while, but I haven't heard from him in a long time.
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side-effect55 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015
That was one incredible story. I loved the humiliation she was going through. Thank you for creating this unique and captivating story.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!  I didn't actually write the story, that was Hal.  I basically used that story, illustrated it and edited it.
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side-effect55 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
then kudos to both of you :)
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why thank you!  Glad you like it!
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slaton Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
why not add more to it where she turns into a baby just like in recession
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areg5 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well ...the answer is 2-fold.  It's a mental regression, so turning into a baby won't happen.  When I was working on this I did have some back and forth with Hal, and he clearly wanted to keep it mental.  Also, I've never continued another author's story so I don't know if I could do it justice.  The editing I do is really embellishment.  It doesn't significantly add to the plot, just fleshes out some of the parts that aren't stated.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015
Well why not just use the same models as a new short? Just do your own story using this model because recession was one of your best...and would like to see more like it also better with tgar.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't rule it out, but I have quite a bit on my plate right now.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015
that's understandable...even though I would like to see erin start regression some as well....her and devin are perfect together and they need to stay together.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  I get tons of requests to regress Erin!  Don't worry, they're staying together, even though at the moment Devon has a more age appropriate friend.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015
please let any work that has devon and erin stay free....cause it would be a big loss if not
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  They were in The Clothes Make the Woman.
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igachu80 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
This is one of my absolute favorites.  I love the images where they point her at the mirror to show her how she doesn't need to wear a bra.  Her friend's daughter is in the background clearly excited about her newfound power, and she herself is completely humiliated.  Just excellent.
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areg5 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  I can take credit for the images, but the imagery is all Hal!  I've read and re-read that story many times!
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Xydis-2000 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me, too. I can't get enough of it.
Same for your novel. Can't get enough to see a teen go back in diapers. That is so humiliating (and so much fun to see) ;)
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is fun alright!
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
interesting work.
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areg5 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One of my favorite stories, written years ago by the great Hal.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Cool.
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pixelRokudo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is awesome! How do you make the 3D people?
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:iconareg5:
areg5 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.  I use a program called Daz3d Studio.  It's available for free download at daz3d.com
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Hornet1296 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Hey Areg5 just wanted to say I LOVE your work, the stories ar always great and love the medium you use. I first heard of you through ARarchive. Saw your stories like Fountian of Youth, Back in Time, and Changin Clothes. Love your more recent work like Fun Size, and Altered Fates. Both great, and I always like how some of your stories intertwine with eachother. Sorry comment was so long but I've wanted to say this for a long time. Keep up the great work.

Sincerely. Hornet1296
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areg5 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why thank you!  I can't take any credit for the writing in Back in Time or Altered Fates, I just did the illustrations and editing.  I think I intertwine my stories because I never want to say goodbye to the characters.  I just keep trying to build a bigger world, where witches and genies play.  My next one is no different.  It is a story I wrote a long time ago and can be found in it's original form in the ararchive.  In updating it I am incorporating many of my newer characters.  Some have cameos, some have more major roles.  Glad you like it!
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Hornet1296 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014
You are far to modest my dear. I wish I had 1/4 the talent you have. Could never make this type of art, wish you the best of luck in your creative future.

Best Wishes.

The Hornet
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T-C-F-Y Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
I really do love this story. 
I've read it several times now :)
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areg5 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  It was always one of my favorites.
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Lxzqi Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Where can I find this to read it
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Xydis-2000 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is great!
I love reading it!
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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housenome Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Curious I know HAL was the creator of the story but would you continue this?

I am curious about how Clarice is the head of Human Resources. Sara Fit into Kim's clothes in fact better. Would be a great story line there where Clarice having the advantage of being in Human resources puts Sara into Kim old role and takes over her place and doing it even better and making kim regress further in the process. 
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areg5 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If Hal continues it, I will.  He did express interest in doing so several months ago but I haven't heard from him in a while.  Bear in mind that the regression is mental.  Good idea about the human resources angle.
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pepijn82 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
nice work again
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NedOldfashio Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Awwwwwww i really thought there was gonna be some BE this time, too bad
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Areat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
It was a really good read. The only things I found odd were the way her skin looked a bit like a corpse before the freckle makeup, and how much text there was between each scenes.                         Otherwise, it's perfect.
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zorroranma Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
after reading, it's one of the best story :) really, when she pee in diaper, her, the professionnal woman, it's...super ;)


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