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If you don't understand it, basically it's Kiyone with KAIN as a symbiote inside her. SHe's addicted to Jurai power and grows from it. Also able to use tentacles from her body
BAckground from Fireworks, finished it Ulead photoshop
My version of Evil Kiyone image, done by Majithing.
If you don't understand it, basically it's Kiyone with KAIN as a symbiote inside her. SHe's addicted to Jurai power and grows from it. Also able to use tentacles from her body
BAckground from Fireworks, finished it Ulead photoshop
My version of Evil Kiyone image, done by Majithing.
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That "Evil spelled backwards is Live" I got from a metal singer called "Mok" from the Canadian flim called; "Rock and Rule". It just popped in my head when I was reading your "Artist's Comments" box. Also came to mind at the sametime is what a theme that would be for a climax fight sence in a story with Kiyone and Tenchi in a heated battle that had draged on for hours because the two where equally matched in power and Tenchi finally asks her;
"Why Kiyone? Why did you let Kane take hold of you? He could have only done so if you accepted him!"
"True." replied Kiyone in an unhuman voice. "I let him and I become one because the choice I made is as simple as breathing."
"And that is?" demaned Tenchi in a tired voice.
"I wanted to live." said Kiyone in a very plain voice as she now had the chance to quickly wrap her tentacles around him before he could act. "It is through amazing what we will do to stay alive when the icy grip of death is wrapped strongly around us, eh?"
Like it? I do have that growth story somewhere and I'll rewrite a "rough draft" for you to see if you wish. Ja mata!
"Why Kiyone? Why did you let Kane take hold of you? He could have only done so if you accepted him!"
"True." replied Kiyone in an unhuman voice. "I let him and I become one because the choice I made is as simple as breathing."
"And that is?" demaned Tenchi in a tired voice.
"I wanted to live." said Kiyone in a very plain voice as she now had the chance to quickly wrap her tentacles around him before he could act. "It is through amazing what we will do to stay alive when the icy grip of death is wrapped strongly around us, eh?"
Like it? I do have that growth story somewhere and I'll rewrite a "rough draft" for you to see if you wish. Ja mata!
That's very good writting. I mostly feel there's many imagentive ways of writting, or making a sentance more alive, for example when you said "I let him and I become one because the choice I made is as simple as breathing."
I just feel I cannot access that wide range of description sometimes. That gets me down >.<. I look at what you wrote and think "Can I write like that?" "Will mine just be plain and simple?..."
Anyway.. about your your writting plot, you'll have to wait and see in my fic how it really happens ^-^
Thanks for the comment! Now, read my fic and I'll read yours
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I just feel I cannot access that wide range of description sometimes. That gets me down >.<. I look at what you wrote and think "Can I write like that?" "Will mine just be plain and simple?..."
Anyway.. about your your writting plot, you'll have to wait and see in my fic how it really happens ^-^
Thanks for the comment! Now, read my fic and I'll read yours
Ah, domo Apple-Kitty-chan! There are manys to making a sentance "more alive". Vocabulary is a big one! Now correct me if I'm wrong, however, you are from the United Kingdom, no? You live in one of the countries that the English langue has been developed from an older langue of which is Latin which of course also went to the developing to French and the Spanish langue in it's own right and
well Im sure your getting the idea I hope. Now when you get to American English..."Ohhh, boy." You talk about a messmash of langues. (By the way, I'm American so I can say this!) What I'm getting at is the more you learn about how words and sentance work together. (Heck, I'm still learning myself and somedays it's a struggle to think up the right words to put down on paper or say.) you can put together some great stuff. It just takes practce and learning! Life is a learning after all. Hope this helps.
P.S. I'm still "new" here. How do I find your fic story? Here or at that Web page of yours; KiyoneShrine.com?
P.S. I'm still "new" here. How do I find your fic story? Here or at that Web page of yours; KiyoneShrine.com?
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