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TMIL3: Chapter 3
For an eternity Kiyone gazed at Washu with a puzzled, eye twitching stare. Her mind was full of bewilderment, followed by anger. Why was she doing this she wondered? So lost in thought was she that she failed to notice Ryoko suddenly appearing in front of her.
"Gah!" Kiyone yelped with surprise, nearly jumping out of her skin. "Uh... what?"
Ryoko was staring at her chest. She looked her over from head to toe "Looks the same to me," then informally poked her breasts and turned back to face Washu with a brow irritably raised. "Have you been drinking my Sake?"
"Wait," Ayeka butted in and walked closer. "Those breasts do look bigger," (Kiyone sweatdropped) "She does look more mature."
Kiyone looked utterly dumbfounded listening to not only Ryoko, but Ayeka talking about her breasts. Irritably, she rubbed the confusion from her forehead as she spoke "Is this how you tell people from the future apart? All of you?"
"No need to be so embarrassed." waved Ryoko, and then leaned in close whisperi
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Writing Effective Dialogue
We've all struggled through figuring out how to write dialogue that not only gets the information out there, but also helps build characters or advance the plot.  There are tons of books and blogs out there on the topic, too.  But just reading about it doesn't do much good if we're not ready to try it out.  Give it a go and see what other people think.  But let's start with the basics.
What is Effective Dialogue?
Dialogue that's written well will reveal character traits, add to the tension and suspense, helps cut down on text walls of description and of course, advances your plot.  One of the most important things to keep in mind when you're writing dialogue is that in fiction, your reader doesn't want to read all the mundane things we say on a regular basis.  So if it's not moving the plot or adding to your character's personality, you should think about cutting it completely.
What do I mean by reveals character traits?
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is a Kiyone fanatic!
Artist | Traditional Art
Favourite genre of music: Dance and anime music
Favourite style of art: Anime
Wallpaper of choice: KIYONE!
Favourite cartoon character: Kiyone from Tenchi Muyo
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KagatoEvilGenius Featured By Owner Edited Jun 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know if you're still active on this account but I was just stopping by to tell you that I redid that Evil Kiyone picture I did for you 13 years ago in 2004. So yeah, here it is.

Evil Kiyone: The Retake That Took 13 Years
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eProductSales Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks for adding us, glad you like our work!
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Kitteascone Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Hi :)
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segaman4 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
thanks for the review.but I really dont care for your opinon. people do like it not because there being nice but they think its actually intesting. some tenchi muyo fans actually had feedback and said out of honesty it was good.
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marcioramos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
estou fasendo um ramal de varios artistas meu foco e poder feminino para o amor ma adss
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clalepa Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Photographer
thanks for fav :)

I have created a new facebook account and I would be glad if you visit me. Here you have:

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Thanks and regards from Spain,

Clara
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LimitlessInvasion Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
haii o:
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JousterL Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Indeed. Long time no talk. :)
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KajuXian Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist
LOL!! DarkRoxima, love the signature!

Apple-kitty, howdy!
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Gazzycakes Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave :)
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