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The Flame Tears Cannot Extinguish 003 by Aozora210 The Flame Tears Cannot Extinguish 003 by Aozora210
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It's here finally!!!

This page took longer than I expected, but I guess I also worked on huge chunk of the next update so hopefully it'll come sooner?

Anyway about this update.... what can I say. |D;;; I guess some small worldbuilding notes
  • Pokecens tend to have their own hostel rooms, but they get crowded easily, esp in high season (spring, which is when most kids starts going on their journey if they decided to skip school lol), and they always prioritize younger trainers, so a lot of people in the cities w/ gyms open their house for some sort of homestays or BnBs kind of thing, which is what Fia was doing. 
  • That's Jupiter on TV yeah. 
  • Who walks between cities when you can get on trains? Sadly even w/ trainer discount, intercity magnet train is still expensive (you can google shinkansen ticket price for comparison) so in the end u gotta walk then (or get on bus to actually get you to the train station, but I guess you gotta watch geodude roll race first and accidentally fall over the cliff)
  • Mar is a goode. 
  • When you're a fan artist, literally nothing can stop you for drawing local food stuff into your comic. 
Shoutouts:
  • Shoutout to my betas :iconraycchan: and :iconpiyostoria: for being awesome!
  • Special thanks to :iconyellowmousedraws: and also Obelisk for helping me with this update.
  • Cameos included are :iconanike469:'s Bertha and Tero, and also :iconlynslayer:'s Zoe and Pepper. 
Thanks for reading and have a nice day!

Pokemon (c) GameFreak and also The Pokemon Company
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:iconlynslayer:
Lynslayer Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
hm! this seems fine! no danger here!

and aaaAAAA AGGRESSIVELY POINTS THOSE ARE MY KIDS! GETTING SOME YUMMY FOOD!!! thank you so much for the cameos omg ;;;w;;;
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
yep! croquette man to the rescue (hopefully?)

You're welcome and your kids are so good!!! Thank you too!!!
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WintersPheonix Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Oh dang... well thats a problem~ XD
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
I honestly don't know how she's gonna survive that, but we'll see in the next update! (hopefully)
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:iconwinterspheonix:
WintersPheonix Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hmmmmmmmm 

Guess its time for the To be Contiued meme.

But really im excited for the next page~
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
*intense guitar music*

Thank you so much! Please look forward to it!
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WintersPheonix Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Interface Designer
ovo)b
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Art-dart Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Power move is to kill off the protagonist in the first chapter
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 14, 2019
*looks at the first update* Yeah, that almost happened.

We have too much dead Pokemon, time to have dead trainer too o>-<
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the sibling-like protectiveness of Fia

The art style is delightful

Also, I LOVE the name of this comic. Gosh, I love it.
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 14, 2019
Aaaah thank you so much!! ;w;

The run title is from a song titled Namida de wa Kesenai Honoo by a group called Sound Horizon!
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blank-nuz Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOOOOOOOOOOO this is RAD as SHIT!!!!!!!!
hralkjfhjd mar is,,, baby,,,,, i want to wrap him in a blanket and keep him safe,,,,
and OH BOY HERE COMES CYRUS LETS GO BABEY
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 14, 2019
Aaaaa thank you so much!!!

Let's form Mar protection squad!! He needs to be protected at all cost...

Also hee yaw Cyrus!!! I wonder what he's gonna do next... I can't wait (to draw it)
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WildfireWhim Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist
aaaaa I love the backgrounds and the muted colours you use!!! also I like how you incorporated world building int Fia and Mar's conversation!! I can't wait to read more (assuming Fia's okay! :0)!!
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 14, 2019
Hi yes, thank you very much!! ;;w;;

I always think effective world building must be a worldbuilding that's relevant to the characters, so the characters feel like they exist in a world that's alive uwu

And please look forward to more! I'll do my best!
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Leeonology Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't believe the first person to die in this nuzlocke is the trainer. 
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 14, 2019
Omg me too. Now she has to be permaboxed, oh no
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TheZweeb Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
fIA DONT FALLL AA

god, i know i saw it on the stream, but this actually made me more anxious ,,,

also nice cameos >>
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
Too late u,_u,)

Hahahah I'm glad if the real thing still gives a deeper impression even after you saw it on the stream. I'm really glad for that ;w;

And thank you!
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TheZweeb Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, can't wait for more pages,,, the plot and art is so interesting so far :sob:
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mmizart Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist
AHHHHHH AO THIS PAGE!! i love the starlys and their weird little haircuts. Also the panels where you experimented with gradients look nice!! (like the one with the staravias, its very subtle but i think it makes a big difference)
that dialga motif is so ominous : o
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
Awawa, thank you so much, Miz!!! I'm glad those things managed to work well ;;w;; ))

Also gee I wonder what Dialga actually wants this time...
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A-KTheLittleFairy Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the narration tone here so much! Is that guy on the last panel supposed to be Cyrus?
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
Thank you very much!! ;w;

Also I wanna say yes, but for now, you can address him as Croquette Man. 
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A-KTheLittleFairy Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome! So Croquette Man may save the day in next update?
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
We shall see in the incoming update! (which i have to work on soon |D) 
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:icona-kthelittlefairy:
A-KTheLittleFairy Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! Have fun creating, your comic is really lovely!
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roget3375 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
OH. Oh no.
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Aozora210 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
Press F for Fia. (/ _ ; )
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roget3375 Featured By Owner May 13, 2019
Shuddering Letter: F  
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