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Operation Dinnertime - 18 [ENG] by AoiRemArt Operation Dinnertime - 18 [ENG] by AoiRemArt
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Since on DA you can just post pages one by one, we decided to continue with Operation Dinnertime one page per day.

After all, every page will be... quite the entertainment...


Proofreading: Rentanjutsushi
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Popcrazy215 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2018
couple random thoughts

Why would fox be afraid of a bunny? he's like half her size & Cynthia's got those predator teeth. I mean, Judy is in the same position as Jack (with regards to her relationship with Nick) but unlike with her, when the chips are down.. Jack still comes off as the dominant one in his relationship with Cynthia despite the fact he's a prey mammal (expectant gender norms? guys lead, girls follow sort of thing?) well Jack seems kind of a Mary Sue to me (there! I SAID IT!) he's written in such a way he seems superior to all of the other characters.
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its a subtle thing.. but In much the same way Judy's resentment at being called "cute" is often played up for laughs, rather than it being focused on as something degrading or offensive to her.. Cynthia's jealously of other girls around Jack is often played for shipping fuel & humor (they're emotions are being treated as inconsequential?)

Nick's Jealousy of Jack however, isn't. During the first couple of chapters He even snaps at Judy multiple times when she tries to ask him what's wrong, promptly causing her to assume she deserves it in someway (ugh this annoyed me so much)

"Don't be too hard on him guys, nick is just being territorial alpha male for his bunny, guys will be guys" (that's no excuse to act like a bitch to Judy, okay?)

Judy/Cynthia are always written to be more passive in confrontations/conflicts in this story, for example; Judy, when she went to confront Jack about Nick, even though its not in her personality to back down so easily about something that matters to her.. she had to be rescued by Nick in the end & escorted out of Jack's office by him like a child that had just been scolded. & Whenever Jack gets fed up of Cynthia's teasing, all he has to do a sexy glare & she's put in her place

I do think the story is cute and the art is amazing, but the character writing can be a bit irritating.



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AoiRemArt Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi there.
First of all, thank you for finding the time to write such an articulate comment, which are always helpful. However, in regards to what you said, we as authors cannot write down an answer in the comment section; whatever we may want to speak up of, we'll always do that through our art, so it's up to the reader to eventually find answers to their doubts or elements which can explain some behaviors of the characters. We've already said a lot about our characters and we'll continue to do so in the future, so there's already lots of information to work on, so to speak.
The only thing we can add on the matter is, that there's no point in comparing Nick&Judy to Jack & Cynthia; the latter are intended to be way more complex and multifaceted characters, given the space we're planning to give them in the future, and have no connection whatsoever with Zootopia's protagonists.

Have a nice day!
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Evays Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2018
OwO S U G O I S U G O I!!!
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AndrejSKalin Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2018   General Artist
Awesome)
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CharlesDCoburn13457 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bu I need all of my SavageWalker fix-but i'm patient so i'll wait
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MasterPlays Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2018
Short but exciting.
Everyday I go check this account if there's any update on the 'Operation Dinnertime' comic.
It's like I'm waiting for the next season of the walking dead.
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Angel47093 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. This is starting to show some entertainment. Giggle
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JPDWoodman Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
This gets more intense by the page. 
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ZIECOON Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
As long as you keep them coming!
i'm loving this comic so much
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TiPoDiRaMartin Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, the heat is kicking up! 
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Fail-Seeker Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
Such developing feelings! :aww:
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TheLoneCowboy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
I love this two! I hope that Cynthia will understand her feelings for Jack very soon... Like I always said: "The Wine it's the better solution sometimes". And maybe this is the TIME!!
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GentlemanY Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much.

I was hoping for another update.
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sagallacci Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
Oh, I hope he opens up or something. He's a lot more sad and lonely than he's ever going to admit. Maybe the wine has loosened him up enough? 
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ArtenReichtum Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
What comes now? A serious post-oparation briefing between both?

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Rentanjutsushi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
When did that rule occur? I've seen you post 6 pages in one day, what happened?
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AoiRemArt Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, no, no, I just mean that on DA you can't make a single post with multiple images (like on Tumblr, for example), so we don't need to wait until every single new page is completed to start publishing :D
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Rentanjutsushi Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2018
Oh, OK.
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crossfire775 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes!!!
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akfmm88 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
So freaking excited!!!! I love it so much :)
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AoiRemArt Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you❤
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M4st3rM4rk Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2018
AHHHHHH! IT'S OUT!! I LOVE OPERATION DINNERTIME!!! 
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AoiRemArt Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Grazie❤
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