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:iconrami-crazyfox:
At first I was in love with this piece: Her pose, her face, the look in her eyes are all fantastic. The colors are great, and add to the pin-up look.

What I do have a bit of a problem with, is the light diffusion on her skin. Yes, it makes her skin look flawless, but sacrificing deep shadows like that costs dimension. The line where her forearm is directly in front of the rest of her arm at the bend is hardly noticeable and gives the girl a cardboard-cutout feel; same with her left hand, especially once you look at her tights - the shadows are deep, perfect really.

Another thing is the choice of her outfit; I do love the tights, the lace is so soft and intriguing. It looks odd, however, because the bodice is so plain. Just feels out-of-place, partially due to the amount of texture only found in that one spot.

Smooth is good, but flat doesn't have the same effect.
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:iconjeanmoi:
jeanmoi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Wow beautifull
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:icontodorovivaylo:
todorovivaylo Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Impossible to resist 1.
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:iconlustinmyheart:
lustinmyheart Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Luscious!
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:iconmidsneypixels:
midsneypixels Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
loving her face.
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:iconj-shudo:
J-Shudo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Photographer
For some reason I feel that it has this classic pin up look to it. Very well done.
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:iconshadowwolfsclaw:
ShadowWolfsclaw Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow
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:iconsylviad:
sylviaD Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
So attractive! Great expression! Awesome pose! I'm running out of things to say! :D
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:iconizgorcore:
IzgorCore Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011   Traditional Artist
Awesome!! :jawdrop:
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:iconmitia-arcturus:
Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011   Photographer
Dear antoanette
Your delicate artwork is featured in
:iconart-portraits: ...and...:iconaction-portraits:
become ART-PORTRAITS's member you are welcome!!! ...:heart:
regards
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:icontri-starr:
Tri-Starr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
VERY seductive! Great job on the subject matter. I was looking for poses to use for a tattoo design and I think I found it. When and if it's ever done, you'll be the first to know.
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011
That is great.Please let me know when you do it:)
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:icontri-starr:
Tri-Starr Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Hey there! You probably forgot all about this, but I never deleted that message of yours above. Well, I finally got the tattoo. It's not exactly how your pose was, but it evolved from that. I know you probably don't care too much, or maybe it will at least make your day. Thanks for being a part of the process!

instagram.com/p/3B7AHJhi00/
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
I haven't forgotten, but I was not expecting it soon either. Of course I care, of course I am glad my modelling inspired such a wonderful work of art. It is beautiful  *-*
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:iconpanzer28:
panzer28 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
There is so much about this picture that makes everything stop
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:iconconan2553:
conan2553 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Elegant and sensual!
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:iconxzendor7:
xzendor7 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011   Digital Artist
Very Sexy
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
Thank you for your favs and comments:)
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:iconwilliamrumley:
WilliamRumley Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Wow :) Love the lighting here, so soft and bright :)
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:iconx-shaman:
x-shaman Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
A wonderful photo and the model is gorgeous but I don't really like the photomanipulation.
I understand the purpose ,old pin up style, but the photo lost too much quality and light during the manipulation.
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
I really appreciate your opinion.I am just a model so I did not have much influence on how the photo was edited.Some people share your opinion.I keep this in my gallery since I used to work with this photographer on pin up style and this was "one step" to achieving a "perfect pin up edit" And since I believe if there was not for these steps the final goal would not have been achieved I still appreciate these works we both did. But I really appreciate your honesty and thank you for that:)
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:iconvitun-tuska:
vitun-tuska Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
looks sooo alluring,beautiful!!!
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tabrown05 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
you are again very beautiful and not trying to take anything away from that fact, but there is a certain loss of detail either from the lighting or due to some over post work..your facial features which are very striking are slightly lost (too smooth? almost translucent?) Maybe that was the intent? Still I love your expression and pose. Killer body..nuf said..
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010
Many people say that for this one.Still this photo means a lot to me because it was my first work on pin up thing...I mean essentially,not in style or clothes or make up.I think I like it cause it is like when artist likes his first works cause they are simply first...I don't know if I make any sense to you but...all photos in my gallery are one step forward and they all show my work as well as the work of photographers I've been working with..and the certain progress.I am an actress,I go to the academy of acting so I love challenges...not being the same all the time.And I think modelling has a lot in common with acting.
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:iconrichc1958:
richc1958 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
wow your beautiful
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:iconlorddukane:
LordDukane Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very lovely. :meow: Love this pic. ^^
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:iconafricanimages:
africanimages Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
Beautiful pic!
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:iconcenk33:
cenk33 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
Supper...
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:iconrnomad:
Rnomad Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
face is way too touched up, along with lighting makes her face very flat and cartoon like.
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
Thank you for honesty:)
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:iconhatedbymany1974:
hatedbymany1974 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
Nice sofa.
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
:lol:
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:iconladiespet:
ladiespet Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
Some people have said its too airbrushed but I don't agree. I think you have achieved a certain effect by the airbrushing which is very appealing.
Beautiful pose and facial expression.
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
I am not the photographer I am only a model but I am glad you like photographer's work.I also like this style of edit:)
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:iconladiespet:
ladiespet Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
OK, But don't forget the pose and facial expression! You take credit for that for being "only" the model! :-)
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
And I am very thankful for that:bow: :blowkiss:
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:iconpopeyes48:
popeyes48 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
I think it's "dreamy" and perhaps that's the result you were trying to achieve. When we would buy those old pin-up cards in our youth at the penny arcades and take home, we'd dream of the models all night. Perhaps the objections here are because those individuals don't wish to be dreamers rather stark realist?

I'm a huge supporter of PS and the wonderful results which can be achieved. I applaud you for your posting of this beautiful image of yourself and thank you for the memories.[link]
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
I am not the photographer I am just a model...but still this comment is wonderful and I am so glad you wrote it.It is very nice how you see classical pin up and I agree with every word you said:)
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:iconniamhinside:
NiamhInside Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
Gorgeous but, way way too airbrushed. You shouldn't be able to tell really :)
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:iconblackshadowgx:
BlackShadowGX Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
You are beautiful.
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:iconlorddukane:
LordDukane Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... you just look naturally sexy. :blushes:
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:iconwarl88:
Warl88 Featured By Owner May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very good! :clap:
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner May 24, 2010
a very pretty capture :)
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:iconbasil-broketail:
Basil-Broketail Featured By Owner May 23, 2010
Very lovely
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:iconflash-13:
Flash-13 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
You know thats one Real Baby doll look you have there :chix0r:
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
;)
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:iconflash-13:
Flash-13 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
I hope I'm not bothering you! some have said nasty things about me! if I tend to comment too! much! and I'm really not as Much of an :moon: as I pretend to be sometimes! but I got tired of just being Boring!
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
I didn't get that impression that you are boring:S
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:iconflash-13:
Flash-13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Hmm thats my Name Michael Ray Boring! so its hard not to be Boring for me! :giggle: you should try growing up with that name!
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Well at least Michael Ray sounds nice:D
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:iconflash-13:
Flash-13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Well Michael is Good I like that part! :D
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