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photo and edit: ~Ayami7
photo and edit: ~Ayami7
VERY seductive! Great job on the subject matter. I was looking for poses to use for a tattoo design and I think I found it. When and if it's ever done, you'll be the first to know.
Hey there! You probably forgot all about this, but I never deleted that message of yours above. Well, I finally got the tattoo. It's not exactly how your pose was, but it evolved from that. I know you probably don't care too much, or maybe it will at least make your day. Thanks for being a part of the process!
instagram.com/p/3B7AHJhi00/
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I haven't forgotten, but I was not expecting it soon either. Of course I care, of course I am glad my modelling inspired such a wonderful work of art. It is beautiful *-*
A wonderful photo and the model is gorgeous but I don't really like the photomanipulation.
I understand the purpose ,old pin up style, but the photo lost too much quality and light during the manipulation.
I understand the purpose ,old pin up style, but the photo lost too much quality and light during the manipulation.
I really appreciate your opinion.I am just a model so I did not have much influence on how the photo was edited.Some people share your opinion.I keep this in my gallery since I used to work with this photographer on pin up style and this was "one step" to achieving a "perfect pin up edit" And since I believe if there was not for these steps the final goal would not have been achieved I still appreciate these works we both did. But I really appreciate your honesty and thank you for that
you are again very beautiful and not trying to take anything away from that fact, but there is a certain loss of detail either from the lighting or due to some over post work..your facial features which are very striking are slightly lost (too smooth? almost translucent?) Maybe that was the intent? Still I love your expression and pose. Killer body..nuf said..
Many people say that for this one.Still this photo means a lot to me because it was my first work on pin up thing...I mean essentially,not in style or clothes or make up.I think I like it cause it is like when artist likes his first works cause they are simply first...I don't know if I make any sense to you but...all photos in my gallery are one step forward and they all show my work as well as the work of photographers I've been working with..and the certain progress.I am an actress,I go to the academy of acting so I love challenges...not being the same all the time.And I think modelling has a lot in common with acting.
Some people have said its too airbrushed but I don't agree. I think you have achieved a certain effect by the airbrushing which is very appealing.
Beautiful pose and facial expression.
Beautiful pose and facial expression.
I am not the photographer I am only a model but I am glad you like photographer's work.I also like this style of edit
I think it's "dreamy" and perhaps that's the result you were trying to achieve. When we would buy those old pin-up cards in our youth at the penny arcades and take home, we'd dream of the models all night. Perhaps the objections here are because those individuals don't wish to be dreamers rather stark realist?
I'm a huge supporter of PS and the wonderful results which can be achieved. I applaud you for your posting of this beautiful image of yourself and thank you for the memories.[link]
I'm a huge supporter of PS and the wonderful results which can be achieved. I applaud you for your posting of this beautiful image of yourself and thank you for the memories.[link]
I am not the photographer I am just a model...but still this comment is wonderful and I am so glad you wrote it.It is very nice how you see classical pin up and I agree with every word you said
I hope I'm not bothering you! some have said nasty things about me! if I tend to comment too! much! and I'm really not as Much of an
as I pretend to be sometimes! but I got tired of just being Boring!

What I do have a bit of a problem with, is the light diffusion on her skin. Yes, it makes her skin look flawless, but sacrificing deep shadows like that costs dimension. The line where her forearm is directly in front of the rest of her arm at the bend is hardly noticeable and gives the girl a cardboard-cutout feel; same with her left hand, especially once you look at her tights - the shadows are deep, perfect really.
Another thing is the choice of her outfit; I do love the tights, the lace is so soft and intriguing. It looks odd, however, because the bodice is so plain. Just feels out-of-place, partially due to the amount of texture only found in that one spot.
Smooth is good, but flat doesn't have the same effect.
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