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The Untold- part 6 by Antarija The Untold- part 6 by Antarija
Yup, those are horses. And random bird-like-thing. I wanted to finally show that there are normal animals in this world too, not only Pokemon.

And oh-oh, is that a glimpse of the heart-breaking past of our protagonist? Could it be that this story might have some plot? Some sense?
Well, who knows? :P


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:iconwilbitww2:
wilbitWW2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016
Yep. Khail definitely seems like a major asshole. I'm wondering if that little flashback is part f the reason why?
Hmm? Maybe he keeps himself distant from others and excludes people too protect himself and his pokemon?
I can't wait to see where this series goes. Nice Job!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
An asshole doesn't really need an excuse to be an sshole, does he? :U But yep, let's say he has his own reasons. Or he just doesn't like Bianca. I don't like Bianca....
Thanks!
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wilbitWW2 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016
Awwww, but Bianca is the best.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hated her in the game and all I'm able to do now is not making her a total derp xD
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wilbitWW2 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016
Well everyone is entitled to their opinions.
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Mutant-Girl013 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aye Sir! Reminds me of Natsu and HappyXD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah! I didn't think about it this way unless somebody told me that xD
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Emexiasi Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
you know I thought about doing this kind of concept but I guess you beat to it lol
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ehm...You mean the normal animals or...?
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Emexiasi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Summoner/crystal concept in general
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, I see. But you know, there's nothing to worry about. As cool as it would be, I doubt we're the first ones to came up with this kind of a concept ;]
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ThomasIsMe Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am going to make myself known as the nuzlocke refrence hunter and isnt bianca's face a refrence to Noragami f2u YATO ICON 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm, actually I thought that was quite a common expression i manga ect (even if Yato is definitely the master of it) : P
So nope, it wasn't a refference but I see why you could get that idea ; )
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ThomasIsMe Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i though it was specific ones i dont watch enough to know
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice cafe.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a scary place, I tell ya' :U
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Edited Oct 4, 2015
HORSES? WHY ARE THERE REAL ANIMALS?
I MADE A MISTAKE, BIANCA ISN'T HIS GIRLFRIEND.
WOW THAT'S A VERY FANCY CAFÉ
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because, as I said in the description of the first part of this Nuzlocke, this world isn't exactly the one you could know from the game. It's some kind of a medieval-fantasy world with normal animals and such becasue I wanted to make it a bit more... natural, let's say.

Yup, she's definitely not his girlfriend xD

A fancy cafe is fancy.
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ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist
Don't worry Khail, I think you fit in the room pretty well u_u
Also, he seems to be a magnet for happy go lucky pokémons XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't think he's gonna believe that xD
Haha, yup. Opposites attract each other, as they say ;]
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ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist
Seems to be true :)
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JuniperExtasy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aye, sir
Did you just quote Happy from Fairy Tail?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Didn't plan that, but it sure seems this way ;P
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JuniperExtasy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Fairy Tail kinda fits this comic
A non-technology world with magic and strange and sometimes cute creatures. The summoner magic that Lucy uses also strangely fits the magic in this world :D (Big Grin) 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now, that you mentioned it, it really looks quite simillar :P
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ch-apocalypse Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
noooo no plot no sense we need senseless people here
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;P
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MysticD Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
You forgot to link comic 7 in your description.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I didn't forget. I just was too lazy to do it at 2 a.m...
But I'll do it right away  :)
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MysticD Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
oh, lol, its ok.
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Flytie Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks great! I like the idea of summoning Pokemon and all the more-or-less-medieval style!
By the way, I read you were complaining about your backgrounds in the first pages... the hell?! They look so good, I mean REALLY good! And I love your character design and the way you draw Pokemon. I'm looking forward to more of this :3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, thank you! I just had to do something like that since I'm a big fan of fantasy ^^'
Uhm, well... My Sis often tells me I tend to complain a lot... But I'm really not proud of it... Sorry?
And thank you once again! I'm really glad to hear that you like them all :D
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Huh? I never knew the Amish, existed in the world of Pokemon. Well....on second thought the women, are dressed a bit too scantily clad for Amish. Maybe these people are a commune that likes to live in less technologically advanced conditions. I refuse to believe that this is a Renaissance Festival, because this looks like a permanent settlement. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eh? Sorry, but what here even gave you the though of the Amish...?
In the description for the first part of this nuzlocke I wrote that it's gonna be set in the somewhat-of-medieval-fantasy world.
So nope, no Amish ;)
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
I guess I didn't read the description that thoroughly. I kinda dropped my Amish theory, midway through my original comment anyway. 
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
More of that backstory please D:
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure thing ;]
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel bad for Khail in that last panel XD
Also, that random bird-like-thing you have is pretty. Also jealous of your abilities to draw towns, animals, people... things in general.
*grumbles inaudibly*
Anywaaaaay. Gotta admit I kind of wasn't expecting a gloomy past from Khail; he just seems so... adjusted... XD Well, let's watch and see where this goes, shall we? :D

I'msohappythereareactualanimalsbtw
I hate the idea of eating Pokemon, especially considering the plot of BW. What makes it worse is that a Gen 5 Pokemon, Basculin, has an entry like "it's remarkably tasty". It's like... wait, you introduced Pokespeaks AND confirmed humans-eating-Pokemon in the same game? in the same CANON game? Wut. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, this is so not his place... :P
Yay, thanks! Even if I want to laugh when I look at all that... backgrounds. I hate backgrounds! D:

You need to expect the unexpected!
Serioulsy, I tend to ruin my OC's childhood... Dunno why. Maybe I just like to give them a reson to be jerks?

It was always strange to me, as well. Besides, I find it hard to believe that humans would be able to hunt Pokemon for meat... I mean, Poke are far from defenceless, right?
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Khail XD
You're welcome! Backgrounds are tiring I'm sure.

I know, I know. Usually I do! When I'm watching Let's Players play horror games with jumpscares I'm just like 'saw that one coming. that one too. is this supposed to be scary?'
ButthenwhenIplayjumpscaresscaremeevenwhenIexpectthemwhatisthissorcery
Who needs a childhood anyway amirite? XD I'm trying to get away from that myself. But it's so fun to torture characters ughhhhhhhh. And it makes them endearing tsundere jerks, that's always a bonus nyeheheh.

Well, true, but if you consider a Nuzlocke and the fact that Pokemon die after a battle... is it really so hard to believe they'd just go out with a Salamence or whatever and BBQ a Miltank? *shudders* There are some particularly dark Nuzlockes where the bodies of defeated teammates, like in Gyms or other organized areas, are taken away and like turned into Pokechow. Bleh.
I don't like to think about it. I like to erase the Basculin entry from my mind and imagine normal fish instead. Like in RingoMikan's Nuzlocke. Fish and Basculin coexist.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's exactly why I don't play jump scares :P ... Even though my Bro made me do this few times... That sadist... In 5 minut he had more fun than in a whole year xD

Nah, I don't like to exactly "torture" them. It's more like a... coincidence? Oi, it's not my fault that making an interesting character (well, at least I hope that they are a little bit interesting) needs some... bad luck, let's call it.

Right, but there aren't to many species that would go down so easily. Most of them would be quite challenging, I believe.
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft, that's evil.

"It's a coincidence that I write all my characters having really miserable pasts, I swear...." - Antarija 2014
XD
Anyway, I'll admit that it does make an interesting character, although forcing yourself not to rely on it can be an interesting challenge. What makes someone special if they're just your average joe, living an average joe life, with no interfering power? try and make a magical story out of THAT. Of course since I myself have parental issues, I tend to relate best (and thus have an easier time writing) characters with similar problems, so I'm desperately using Struggle to try and get out of that Bind (I can't believe i just did that. forgive me my pokepuns).

Currently I'm also trying to break myself free from a general 'confident, capable, clever' type of character creation. It's idealized from my perspective and I realize that it will get boring if people ever read several of my works. Primarily I think it's because I don't like having a main character-- be it something I'm writing or reading or watching or playing-- that I don't like. And I really don't like arrogant people, or ignorant/no-common-sense people, or close-minded people, or-- well, the usual flaw-that-must-be-overcome set. It's something I find myself doing a lot, creating characters that just don't like people and that's their main problem. XD

Fair point.... Although there are some really itsy bitsy pokemon that a stealthy, type-advantage-move-having large pokemon could devour. Like Dedenne and Flabebe-- I'm pretty sure they're both only inches tall. O_o Those wouldn't be very filling, though, would they? Hmm...
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yeah, I'm done with that. I'm gonna stop thinking about this and go back to pretending fish and basculin coexist now...

HeyguesswhatIjusthadmybirthday
alsoIdidn'tdisappearwhatareyoutalkingabout*whistlesinnocently*
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Antarija Featured By Owner Edited Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, of course! :icondignitylaughplz:

Hm, I can do that as well. But I don't like that. You know, I'm working on some novels, I can't give everybody there a trauma.
...
 No, wait. Actually, I can! Oh, the possibilities!
(And yay for the pokepuns! :P)

Well, I have the same problem, but I'm not worried about it. Nobody will ever read it ;]
 I do make mine characters different at some points but I woudn't stand some types of characters and what's the point in creating something/someone you would hate? I already hate enough things/people even without it... So it's a nope.

Hahah, good idea ;P

Oh my, happy birthday then! Hope you had a great celebration, and I wish you a Marry Christmas! Wait, what...?
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Best. Reply. To That Statement. Ever.

Oh Arceus what are you planning
should I prep a bombshelter
Or should I just accept that everyone you (and they) know and love will die (ie Homestuck, Song of Ice and Fire, aldfjdks other things)
(POKEPUNS! :D)

Heehee XD Well of course, the characters will differ slightly. But I'm currently in this setting where it's just like 'YOU PEOPLE ARE IDIOTS HERE HAVE SOMEONE WITH A BRAIN... and possibly omniscience shhh it'll be ok'. and you know omniscience/omnipotence/immortality make for really boring plots. (that's why I love HS and SoIaF even though painfulfeels... also quasiimmortality? HS is confusing)

I can't believe you just used 'oh my' casually that's adorable
Merry Hannukah and a Happy New Easter! Wait what were we talking about again
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm, a bombshelter... Yes, I think it could be quite useful...
And accepting such possibility could help as well ;]

...
I have no idea what are you talkin about... Shame upon me... :icononionfailplz:


Aw, I'm adorable now ;3
Don't ask me. :shrug:
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Gaioumon Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist
"Aye, sir!" XD Can't help but think/hear that in Happy's voice.
Nice update!:D (Big Grin) 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Strange thing, me too! XD
Thanks :)
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Się uczepili tej Bianki, będziesz musiała jej jakieś rzemieniowe wiązania dorysować tu i tam, to będzie git ;P
Creepy Khail is creepy :O
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A zobaczysz, zrobię z niej takie zajefajne-szmeksi-bejbe-całe-w-skórach, że szok!
...
No dobra, może lepiej nie.
 
Zaisteee ;]
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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