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The Untold - part 56 by Antarija The Untold - part 56 by Antarija
I think this time I'm way beyond 'fashionably late', haha...

So yeah, we've finally got to the point of this whole Team Plasma issue. In case it's been too chaotic to notice -it's been my way of telling the story behind all that running around town with Burgh and company to get back Bianca's Munna ect. ect. But fear not, for now we're done with that, and in the... well, maybe not in the next part, but the one after that, Khail will finally go to fight for the third badge. Woot! Only after a bit more than a year! Why do I have that strange feeling it's gonna be one of those never-ending stories...? TTwTT


Trivia:

- Bronius = Red Dog = the guy Khail's been chasing for a long time. Some of the reasons are shown in the 4th panel (yes, the guy down there is Bronius, but 15 years younger)
- Khail used a Repel as the poison on his throwing knife (cheaaaat). In The Untold  repels work in two ways -first one, commonly used - if drank it makes ones aura less visible/invisible (depending on the strenght of the drug). It works mostly on Pokemon ( so trainers are not attacked by Wilds), but Trainers good at reading auras can still tell that the one is a mana user (but they can't get a clear read).
The second method is what Khail did - deliver the repel directly to the blood. It cuts off the Trainer from Mana. making them unable to use it for some time (that means summoning Pokemon/pokeballs/ enchanted crystals ect.). If a Trainer is interrupted by it during the summoning it simply cancels the process (that's the reason Burgh's Haundoom disappeared)
-Kaden is not a trainer
- About Kaden's shield - from my own experience I know that fighting someone who wields a shield is a real pain in the ass, and almost impossible to defeat. So you have to get rid of your opponent's shield before doing anything else. And humans arm makes for a fine lever. (but breaking an arm in such a way must be really painfull... Sorry, Kaden)
- In Team Plasma's defense - they're quite a new unit, many of their members are not used to fighting someone who can fight back. Or fighting at all. They didn't expect anyone to be so stupid to just attack their headquarters head on, even more since League can't go against them openly.
- Khail is a master of close combat. Let him near you and you're as good as dead.
- Kaden is like a boomerang. He always returns.
- Kaden might have a bit of an ornithophobia - mostly towards predatory birds.
- Braviary is quite a rare Pokemon, rarely ever seen in the wild. A bird of this size would have to eat a cow each day, had problems with building a nest (or just finding a tree to sit on), so... poor Kaden.
- Bronius lives to die another day!
- A certain part of the fight's been highly inspired by Fate/UBW ~


First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/dbq2icq
Next -> fav.me/dc1reyj

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
Silenced - fav.me/dayzer8
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, ok, po kolei:
1) moja edukacja z aikido była zaiste krótka, ale umiem rozpoznać te chwyty i rzuty, więc... Khail zna aikido/judo! (bardziej judo, bo "ai" to to nie jest XD)
2) ja też uważam, że rozmiary Poków w pokedeksie są jakieś śmieszne i niepoważne, niektóre z nich muszą być wielkie, żeby to w ogóle miało sens! Więc HURRA DLA BRAVIARY! :D
3) Kadenowi za mało płacą :P
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
1) albo może i "ai", jak "aiaiaiai"? : D
2) DOKŁADNIE. Dlategoteż nadszedł czas, by przesadzać w drugą stronę, i jak szczura miziam, jamci tego dokonam!
3) Czuję w nim pokrewną duszę, a ty? :,D
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1606483 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2017  Student Artist
WOW!Adventure Withered Freddy 'Oh God!' Chat Icon 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fool Emoji-08 (Hehehehe) [V1] 
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elTyranda Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so glad I found your comic-- it's an incredibly unique twist on the Pokeverse and has such great characterization! Even minor characters (pokemon and human) have their own unique quirks. Everything you've done to make the pokeverse more fantasy-esque has been executed so well.

The dynamic poses and action sequences are so well coordinated and easy to follow. And seeing how much you've improved with backgrounds and scenery is breath-taking!! Thank you so much for making this comic, I've enjoyed it heaps so far!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aklnfgklfk, thank you so much! I really appreciate it!  Let me hug you! 
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Man this was good. What Pokemon was Bronius about to send out? I couldn't tell what it was. Also, I want that giant birb!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! It was his Haudoom.
Everyone wants a giant birb! :dummy:
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017
That is a interesting use of repel in a magical setting. Wait you had experience fighting shielded people? What do you do Larp?

I like Kaiden he's a good person (if not gullible) and wouldn't you be afraid if you saw that big bird as well. Now I'm curious if Bronius the douche was anything worth killing since he's that easy to punch in the face.

You should have added the others complaining that he gets the eagle and they had to run (mostly through) every other guard screaming: "not this again".

Cuddles + Owlie: Hug of Sorts <(Don't struggle I'm just sharing my concern) Have a good one.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I've been wondering if people will accept that way of using it in a nuzlocke.
Nah nothing as fancy. We used to "practice" some swordfight with my siblings in the past, if you can even call this that (later in I practiced kendo for some time, but that's a different story) and once my brother made a shield. That was the worst fight ever. He was just standing there, and I couldn't do a thing until the damn thing broke xD

He's devoted to what he believes is right, Bronius doesn't deserve having him under his command. I know how it looks but other than him getting close to his 50 while Khail is still in his twenties, there're some other reasons that's gonna be explained in the future  : )

Darnit, I should have done that xD
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017
Thank god the shield was made out paper and duck tape. Still I can understand the frustration, when playing card games there always that defensive player who you had to work three times as much just to even dent him.

Watch a video on kendo one time and found it very fascinating. Also that even with those helmets it still hurts like a mother so you got my respect for doing some.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, it was a wooden self-made shield ( the wood was thin and of a rather poor quality though, that's why I was able to destroy it with my staff, haha)

Thanks. Unfortunately I've never came af far as to fight in armors... My "dojo" didn't have any to lend ( and that would be so yuck anyway) and I had no money to buy my own at that time (the cheapest bogu costs around 700$- a bit too much for a poor student). And now that I've moved out there's no place to train kendo, sooo maybe that's been for the best.
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Naxal710 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2017  Hobbyist
HOOOOLY CRAP THAT WAS AWESOME! The choreography of that fight was amazing! Keep up the awesome work!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much!
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BlueSacredFire Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Khail rams a sword through the door before bursting it down with the meme "Somebody once" playing in the background. I thought it was this page but it was the last one. Whoops. 

I also forgot to watch you so I missed two updates. I'm slightly salty I forgot. (And then proceeded to tell myself that I did watch you afterward.)

Dassa big bird. Holly shoot. 

Who needs to follow the fabulousness that is Burgh through pinwheel forest when you can just say screw it and invade the Plasma Castle? 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, it was thorugh a man's throat, but that just a small detail ;]

Haha, they're not going anywhere so it's fine I guess.

Big bird = epic bird

Ikr?
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2017
That's a majestic as fuck birb. :3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because those are the best birbs~
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017
Indeed~
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superwill123 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
WELL, That escalated quickly.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Like many things in our life~
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superwill123 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep ;v;
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cD5s Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2017
Wow, the way you draw actions poses is so dynamic and fluid! And the way Khail's hair flows when he moves,
damn man, you could be a model! Super nice way to include repels in your story as well.
And pfff, Asashi little pieces of dialog XD nice one ^^ No wonder it took you some time, the amount of work is enormous!
Beautiful page and good luck for the rest!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I really enjpy drawing some action scenes. And I'm glad you like the little thing about repels!
Asahi's gold even when he doesn't appear on the screen : P

Thanks!
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cD5s Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
I love that muscle head, he's one of my fave character in your comic ^^
And oh, I didn't see it before, but you said that a part of the fight was inspired by Fate? Maybe Lancer vs Archer? Because that's my fave fight!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I'm glad to hear that! I'm also erally fond of him, to be honest.

Actually, it was Archer vs Shirou IhatethatfrigginbratsomuchIcanteven from their last fight. Archer vs Lancer is too good for this comic xD
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cD5s Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
Yeah, he deserves the attention! ...on second thoughts, didn't you like Gavil too? Should I be scared? X)

Oh yeah, it was a nice fight too! (don't tell me about it, yet I love Archer, that souldn't be possible)
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2017
I love the action! I can rarely follow action scenes but this was really clear and great
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, thank you! I'm really glad to hear that!
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Ask-Jade-Mountain27 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ITS HERE THIS IS AMAZING (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Go kill em Khail 
(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I'd help but i have a lot of work (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Nice job, this page is great! Can't wait for the next one, as always 
(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THANK YOUUUUUU, IT'S FINALLY HEREEEE! jacksepticeyes [HYPE DANCE V.1]THE BEST LAID PLANS
I'm sure Khail will forgive you ;]

Thank you! I hope it won't take so long this time
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Ask-Jade-Mountain27 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYy
I hope he does ,_,
no problem, and keep up the good work! It's worth the wait!
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ProfShiro Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
HANDS DOWN HE IS FINALLY DEAD!
Dynamic Poses in this are gorgeous I had to read it twice >w>; Also I feel kinda bad for Kaden here XD
But atleast he is the only thing that is honorable in this got damn clusterfuck of a team >->
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There are many dead people on this page! \(*^*)/ but if you meant Bronius by that, then unfortunately, he's not

Thank you! I enjoy drawing those even if sometimes mostofthetime they can be a real pain.
Kaden is just too good for them, mah poor boy...
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ProfShiro Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
GODDAMMIT! STOP GIVING ME HOPE!

Kaden we need to talk about your future....
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Defianent Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2017
Wow. Khail's giving the Winter Soldier a run for his money. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah xD
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ECHO173 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2017
Now the Sage knows how much he fucked up today
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I bet that internally he was like : Yato-scream- Noragami 
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