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The Untold - part 53 by Antarija The Untold - part 53 by Antarija
It's finally here! Somehow the shorter pages system doesn't help as much as I hoped... Not when I never know the day and hour they will call for me to come to work...  So I'm really sorry for the constant delays, guys :/

Anyway, we must wait a bit longer for the slaughter. But fear not, we're close.

Things to know:
- That's why Trainers are widely respected, even the weak one. They really are a one-person small army. Sending a big fireball in a group of people or just putting them all to sleep by a single hypnosis spell, it's all the same when you want them out of your way.
- Ishara has no Trainers under her command so she knows she'd be screwed if Khail went all out on her.
- And to explain Khail even being there, if that's not clear - Ishara is a spy master. Gavil went to a place she's been infiltrating and he died with a bunch of crows as a pun, so it means that someone out there knew he was from the Crows gang. From Khail's point of view it looks like Ishara's doing. (just tell me if I'm explaining obvious things, I'm not so sure anymore but I'm used to making no sense ^^")
- Ishara was introdued in part 43. YES, IT WAS A FORMAL PART OF THIS STORY.

I hope next part will be out sooner.



First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/dbe4btl
Next ->fav.me/dbmaarz

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
Silenced - fav.me/dayzer8
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017
HELLO MY LOVELY, TALENTED ARTIST!!!! i've missed your work!! the summer has kept me busy and i wasn't able to read ur work until now and it's STILL AS AMAZING AS I REMEMBER!!!! 😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww, thank youu~
Welcome back~! : D
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2017
it's good to be back!! never realized i'd miss a comic so much!!
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Siostro, normalnie "pomaluj mnie w impressed" ("paint me impressed" as they say :v).
Khailo nagle strasznie rozbudował klatę, bo mimo ciuchów bardzo dokładnie zaznaczają się mięśnie XD
A poza tym naprawdę podoba mi się kompozycja tych stron. Przeklinaj mnie ile chcesz za wrobienie cię w to całe Nuzlockowanie, ale moim zdaniem zmasterowałaś rysowanie komiksów! nawet jeśli kolorowanie, cieniowanie i tła jakościowo przewyższają komiksy i spokojnie mogłabyś to uprościć gdybyś tylko nie była taką perfekcjonistką XP
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, siostro ma, poliglotko ty, twój inglish mnie zadziwia xD

Jak ma wnerwa to mu klata rośnie. Lekarz stwierdził : U

Aż się chce zakrzyknąć Morganowe "zmarnowałaś życie, ty! Moje i swoje!" xD, aaaale chyba nie. Chociaż jeszcze kilka lat mi zejdzie na tym... Jeśli kiedykolwiek skończę. Chciałabym skończyć.
Oj, chciałabym... ;w;

perfekcjonimz boli... </sub>
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2017
KHAIL IS INSANE? I DIDN'T THINK HE WOULD BE
DID HE SMACK A WOMAN? COOL!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There are many levels of insanity. One of them is barging in heavy guarded places all alone.

Ishara is not a woman (for him) but just a hag : U
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Khail is a scary man.
(by the way, it's fine if you over-explain - it helps me keep up with events on previous pages)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup, yup, he is.

(ok, thanks! I'll feel better knowing it's useful : >)
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Krisander Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017
dfa;lskjdfaslkdfl "take some advice from an older colleague- don't all take a nap at once" because yes that is exactly what happened. fav human character right there.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Asahi is a practical man : P
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh, FIGHTFIGHTFIGHTFIGHTFIGHT!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FIIIIGHT!
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Khail taking names the moment he steps through the door, I like it!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's loved by all, haha
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Halolux Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love that kick in the door stance! <3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And I really enjoyed drawing it ;D
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"just tell me if I'm explaining obvious things, I'm not so sure anymore but I'm used to making no sense ^^"
for the most part I welcome explanations in the descriptions tbh, with gaps between updates it's not always easy for readers to keep track of little intricacies or hints along the way so for me I did have a vague idea that Ishara was involved but not responsible for Gavil's death so it was clear that Khail had a reason to go after her. but it's a pity we didn't get the bloodbath we were anticipating, I'll hold onto my popcorn for now lol >:3c

Although I am surprised that Ishara and her spies were able to survive without a trainer in their ranks, considering how strong trainers are in this universe any trainer could easily overpower her entire gang and force information out of them but I guess Ishara and co. must be really good spies not to get caught until now :'D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, ok, it's good to know, thanks :>
wait for iiiiit~

Well, considering the fact that Trainers are an elite, basically a nobility, they have some special rights ect ect, it would be weird for them to even join a gang. They can be corrupted like hell, but... Have you ever seen a politician officially joining some street gangsters? And also there's the risk of killing/silencing them if the word spread. Asahi and Gavil've never been officialy trainers (no license) so the word doesn't know about them. And even though the higher-ups know that Raging Crows have some Trainers (or at least really strong Summoners), they don't want to risk their men, since Crows are a small army on their own and to that- hard to find and hard to fight). I don't know if you know the Dragon Age, but there was a system of hunting down the mages  based on having samples of their blood or something. Thanks to that they were able to find those mages no matter where they hide themselves. In this universe it would work similarly (if I ever get a chance to explain it properly...)
Some other gangs have their Trainers as well, but still 1-2 max. For spies in the capital where the most Trainers are it would be too dangerous to have one in their ranks. Most probably the Guild would get really desperate to catch them.
At least, that's the idea that bloomed in my rotten brain about this : D)
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Have you ever seen a politician officially joining some street gangsters?"
I could list real world examples but I get what you're trying to say in that trainers are basically above joining gangs but then that brings into question why khail is in the raging crows but I assume that'll be explained in the future so I'm leaving that question to rest for now but the dragon age thing where mages are hunted sounds really cool and I think it will be really badass and dramatic if something like that happens in the untold :3c
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhm, I meant "officially". Maybe it's just the difference in culture but here politicians don't do that xD We all know they are thieves and gangsters in most cases or something, but officially, they're all clean : P

yes, that will be explained at some point ;]

One day, one daaaay~
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Despite all that went down this chapter, that end doodle is just great =w=;;

Don't blame Khail for going off like he did. Even if it wasn't Ishara's doing, it still looks like she was majorly negligent or leaked info on his group.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes I feel like those doodles are really killing the mood, but oh well... I can't help myself xD

Exactly. He could have just ask, though, but well. It wouldn't be like him.
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Sometimes you need a little light-hearted humour at the end of something heavy ;D
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Velink Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
FInally all caught up again!
your comic and art are as awesome as I remembered them!
the story seems to be getting more complicated
hopefully you won't mind if I drop by some repetitive question here and there
looking forward for more, Antarija!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, congrats!
Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me QwQ

No problem, questions help me to see if I know what I'm doing, so feel free to ask as many of them as you want  xD
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017
I love Asahi is so polite :3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's a bandit that would kill you but first ask if you're ok with it : P
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017
Awwww <3
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TheBookwormMaddy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I hate that I look at all this glorious art and then I complain about the tiniest bit of grammar lol why am I this way??

However, I don't think 'suicider' is a word. She'd say: I'm not suicidal. Other than that this is such an amazing page!! I love your comic xx
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Huh, really?
So... what is the word for someone commiting a suicide...?
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TheBookwormMaddy Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
If you're suicidal it means you want to commit suicide
If you're about to commit suicide: omg that guy is committing suicide! Although they'd probably say 'he's about to kill himself' or 'he's about to jump' or whatever they're doing lol
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So you really doesn't have a word for them... Huh, interesting.
I'll fix it then, thanks!
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Ask-Jade-Mountain27 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that panel... just for khail's chest.....................

this is my favorite page of them all, no doubt. especially the 'knock, knock' panel :'D this is amazing
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Khail's chest deserves no less :V
Haha, thanks xD
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Ask-Jade-Mountain27 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.w. of course it does and it always will
of course, np! :3 I cant wait to read more!
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Drayle88 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love this so much. I remember thinking this comic was meh. but damn I'm hooked better than GoT. Keep em coming, you're brilliant
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ;]
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Flammenfeder Featured By Owner Edited Aug 8, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
"And to explain Khail even being there, if that's not clear[...]"
Well, since I have completely forgotten about Ishara and didn't even recognize her design or anything, I thought that explanation was really helpful... I guess I'll have to head back and find out, if it's just my shitty memory or if maybe even the comic is not clear enough about this.... since if the latter was the case, that would a point to criticise, I guess

Edit: Ah, so, of course all the Ishara stuff was in that one game chapter... now I see why I didn't get any of this^^'
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I'll admit that's a bit sad... But well, I've never claimed to be very talented at writing characters, soooo it might be quite understandable. Oh well.


Yeah, the game part is a part of this story as well. Who would have guessed...
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Flammenfeder Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I personally still think that putting main parts of the story into the game wasn't a really good idea. Don't get me wrong, I was really impressed when the game came out and I see that you put a lot of effort into it. But then again I'm here to read a comic, not to play some flash games. I'm probably the only one who thinks like that and I can see why my opinion would not be very popular with you, since I'm sure you're very proud of the game. But I think that it would've been better, if you only put additional stuff into the game, not the main story. Or at least make the main story accessible in an alternative way. 
It's just my critique, don't let it bother you too much. You're the one who can decide whether you want to make something out of it or not^^
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I did say it was a formal part of the story. You've been warned- so if you decided you didn't want to play it you should have been prepared to have problems later on with understanding the story.  And to be honest, I've spent over 500 hours or so on it, so hearing that it was too bothersome for someone to  spend like 30 min/1 hour is a bit.... irritating. Understandable, and I was also prepared for it, but still irritating.
But spending this much time only on some extra content? No, thank you. I'm not that loco. Yet xD
I'm not proud of this game. I'm unable to be proud of anything I do. But I also believe that no matter what, we should respect others time.
So saying "hey, it was too long/ too bothersome ect. make it shorter and do it again, so I don't have to read all that"... I think you can see why that might get on somebody's nerves. I'm not forcing this story on anyone. I'm well aware that many people don't like what I do to the Pokemon universe, that it's all way too weird, they don't like the plot or characters, the fact that I change everything. I know that, and I understand. And you have all the rights to feel the way you feel about all this, but try to understand my point of view as well.
I'm spending almost all of my free time on this story. I don't get paid for it. So sorry, but I'm not going to do the same thing multiple times.
Still, I'll try to briefly explain some main issues in descriptions, as I always do.
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Flammenfeder Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I know about the warning. I am still just trying to explain my personal feelings. I'm not saying you did something wrong or that making a game is bad. 
Also I don't think it's lazyness that keeps me from playing the chapter. I think it's really just the 'I'm here to read a comic so I will read a comic'-thing... not sure how I can explain that any better. 

And please, calm down. I adore your work. I really like what you are doing with the pokemon universe. It was just some critique for this one point, I'm not attacking you. And I wont do it again, don't worry. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, it's not as if I took it as an attack on my person. I accept the critique and I understand where that one comes from.
I'm just really fed up with trying to please everyone around for no reason. 

*sigh* I'm calm. Why does everyone always think that if you don't nod and say "yes, of course" with a smile that means you're angry...? Tired, yes, but not really angry. I'm simply explaining my point of view on this matter.

I'm totally fine with pointing out the bad things about this story, it's really helpful. But if I were you I would refrain from telling people there are things you didn't understand simply because you didn't want to check up the source. For me, personally, it's equal to the comment like "TL;DR" - rather disrepectful.
Anyway, have a nice day ; )
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Flammenfeder Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well, there's a misunderstanding then. When I wrote the first part of the comment, I did not know yet, that the parts of story I'd missed are in the game. I only checked that afterwards and added the explanation. I wasn't meaning to be disrespectful, I tried to explain that I had found the source of my problem and that it's my fault I didn't understand all of the chapter. I'm neither a 'TL;DR'-person, nor a 'I don't like it so you have to change it for me'-screamer.

I'm sorry, I might be rather sensitive there, but I've just met so many people who can't handle critique at all. And to me, your reaction at least partly seemed to fit that pattern. 

Thank you and have a nice day too
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I apologise then, it seems we both misunderstood each other. Well, that happens with the written text. One can interpret it in quite many ways...
But where's qritique there's usually also a response to it, it doesn't always mean the other side can't handle the qritique ;]
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LiquidPear131 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2017
Thanks for explaining that! It's possible I missed something earlier (like the game) but I didn't get why Khail went to Ishara's place ^^'.
Also, Khail being so calm is actually making him scarier..
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, yes, some things might be hard to understand without knowing that part.

Good, good~
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Teja-kuroTora Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2017   Traditional Artist
Man this is good.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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