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The Untold - part 50 by Antarija The Untold - part 50 by Antarija
Because '50" is such a nice number it's high time to kill something at last: D
But heey, there's some action finally! Just a bit, but it still counts, right?

And my tablet broke only four times while drawing this part! But from the 4th time it will not rise again, I'm afraid... Now I need to buy a new tablet... :/ (some shading and bubbles I had to make with a mouse and I suck at it, so sorry if it looks bad or something,>

Trivia:
- Gavil dyed his hair to fit in the red-haired Team Plasma. He's naturally a blonde.
- In case I'm really worse at it than I thought - At first in the darkness it's Hashim who speaks , then it's Ishara and in the end it's Bronius.
- Khail is a bad guy, I'll be boring about it~
- Because of plotplotplot Haundooms arethe only Pokemon from another region that we'll meet in this story  (It has nothing to do with my love for fire ogars form hell, nope)
- I change so many things in this story that I doubt anyone's surpised that I've changed Bronius's design and role as well : P
- Ishara and Hashim were introduced in the part 43 (game), as well as their relations to Khail, Raging  Crows and Castelia and so I'll not explain it again.
- Iris's awesome plan to get Bianka's Munna back was to go and ask Team Plasma nicely, obviously. She's a good kid.
- No, Khail does not smell funny or like an old people. He's a very clean guy (if that's how you call it in english, sorry but my brain refused to cooperate with me any further), Iris can  just smell dragon, becasue she's a weirdo


Oh, and one more thing, I think I'll have to go back to making shorter pages. Maybe not as short as the first parts of this story, but to like half the lenght of the current updates. I'm sorry that I didn't ask for your opinion in that matter, but I really want to update this more than once for two months and that's the only option left:/






First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/db1g78b
Next ->fav.me/dbaw33x

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
Silenced - fav.me/dayzer8
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:iconmiscomunication:
Miscomunication Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heck
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AngelKite Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh no! what happened to gavil ):
//goes to read
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dun Dun Duuun D:
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:iconvelink:
Velink Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
Oh shoot, Gav must have been hamburgered between his Braviary and Bronius' Deino
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed... (that was Zweilous btw : P)
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2017  Student General Artist
How can you hate birds!? They help you get rid of tick and mosquitos unless

YOUR A MOSQUITO
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
An evil big mosquito
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hm... I wonder why Khail smells like a dragon, eh?~ :3
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P-perfumes? Llama Emoji-50 (Whistling) [V3] 
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes. New from Dior: Dragon's Breath XD
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner May 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
b-but.....the birb... D:
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D:
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
typo in panel 41 assuming I counted correctly. you wrote 'you know who are they' instead of 'who they are'


still love this page tho, isis is a cutie. poor braviary tho
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks

I'm glad to hear that :>
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner May 11, 2017
your welcome! I really love this series, the characters are awesome the pokemon look awesome its all awesome! :D
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehee, thanks, you've just made this potato very happy~ >w<
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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
its the least I can do, considering you have blessed us internet plebs with this wonderful art! <3
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, you~ Blush 
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2017
I'm only telling the truth~
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017  Student General Artist
This is so good Im rereading everything ):3
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww, thank you~  ^//v//^

But I must admit I feel so embarrased looking back at first pages of this story...
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Student General Artist
Ye because that was our old art style 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But why was it so bad and yet I thought it was not? XD
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Student General Artist
idk maybe because when you first drew the comic you were proud of yourself and then when you look back at that comic you cringe XD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That can't be the case.
I've never been proud of it xD
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2017  Student General Artist
o.o = Mindblown
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017
IRIS, YOU'RE SUCH A KID!
POOR RUPRIO..... :( (Sad) 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, technically she is a kid : P

R.I.P Ruprio...
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner May 10, 2017
YOU DIDN'T WATCH THE ANIME WHEN THE "BLACK & WHITE" SAGA WAS ON, DID YOU?
I'M MOCKING HER BECAUSE SHE ALLWAYS YELLED ASH THAT HE WAS SUCH A KID (GRRR!) BUT SHE WAS EVEN WORSE, EVEN IN YOUR COMIC SHE ACTS LIKE A LITTLE KID
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I did not watch it. I only watched the first-second season I guess, because I was like 8 years old when it was aired in my country. After almost 20 years I can't stand the naivety of the show.

As I've said, she acts like a kid, because she is a kid (and Ash is a brat as well, and I can't stand that guy)... In game she also acted like a kid. So she stayed a kid in my comics.
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2017
YES, I KNOW, WHAT I MEANT IS THAT IN THE ANIME SHE ACTED LIKE A KID BUT CRITICIZED EVERYOE THAT FOR HER ACTED LIKE A KID, SHE WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HYPOCRITE!
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tembelizor Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017
So much blood T^T 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And there's gonna be more of it~ Just sayin'
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tembelizor Featured By Owner May 29, 2017
It's getting better by the second , Tho we are getting older by the second too <.> 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's how the world is : P
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Yokufo Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IRIS
REMINDS
ME
OF
GIAN 
LOLOLOLOL
XDDDDDD

Great work as always ;D 
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A bit older Gian, haha! I think they would get along pretty well ; D

Thank you~!
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Edited Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hoho, podoba mi się ta waza w gabinecie Ishary~ Że też chciało ci się robić wzorek XD

Gavil, noł! D: Znaczy bardzo lubię całą evo linię Hydreigona, ale no NIE I JUŻ! DX

A jak ja ci mówiłam, żebyś robiła krótsze update'y to "nieeeeeee" :V
(a po ang nie ma takiego słowa jak "ogar", oni mówią "hound")
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Przyznam się, że to bezczelne kopiuj/wklej z jakiejś darmówki z wzorami xD

Gavil, guanbareeeeeeej!

No bo z krótszymi updateami to ja do emerytury tej historii nie skończę... Ale przy tej robocie to normalnej długości nie będę w stanie utrzymać... Snif, te dylematy...

(Hm... Tak też mnie się wydawało, ale jakoś w poprzednich częściach (gdzie ta nazwa padała już kilkukrotnie) to się tego nie czepiałaś... :<)
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I guess Bronius isnt such a bro after all

But DAMN this chapter is action packed!! Really nicely done
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD

Thanks!
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017
Don't worry I'll be snarky in a moment but correction first. At the top your wrote raport instead of report twice.

Ishara why did you say that out loud. "Hope no one angers him", thus the sky open up revealing a light so glorious all but the worthy can see through and up the worthy saw Arceus binging on a couch with a bag of popcorn waiting for the climax to happen.

Iris head is empty for there nothing to actually to crush. Khail? A bad guy? No he's rainbows and sunshine, I don't see the homicidal murder of countless lives and wrecker of shit in him.

NOOOOO NOT THE SEXY SNARK with your tablet that's now two death in this panel.

Glad your taking a smaller work load (making smaller pages) when doing these pages so when accidents happen you wouldn't lose too much. Hope you can find a good tablet and if your commissions are open I wouldn't mind donating a bit of cash. Have an awesome day let the links sleep they deserve a break.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Argh, screw you 'false friends' D: We have same word here but written in an 'a'...  My brain clearly wasn't at it's best and decided  it was totally fine... Good job, brain, good job...

That's how it works, yes :>

Yup, Khail is a totally sweet and innocent young man, correct~


I found  a really cool one and I already got it! : D Though I need to give my dad some money back for it, so commisions are open of course! (Though I'll be much slower with them than the last time...)
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner May 11, 2017
"F-false friend?onion head 'shock_'  I know that we're just speaking using 1's and 0's but I though we managed to be at least acquaintances.  Onionhead ... - Onion head 

Next week I'll have some free money so I'll think of something and don't worry I'm used to waiting.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
W-wait a moment... Don't tell me we came up with that term in english here...? Don't you call  a word which in  different languages sounds the same/similar but has a different meaning a "false friend"...?
Waaah, sorry, I meant no offense! QAQ
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner May 12, 2017
No I didn't know, French was my primary language and English secondary when I was learning back in the old days of school.

I accept your apology and your lesson in language. Hug
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, ok. But now I don't know if that term really exists XD Maybe it would be safer for me not to use it... I wouldn't be surprised if that's just our happy creation...

Sorry again Hug 
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CodeZerone Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017
me when i saw azil crossdressing: ._. ooooookayy, if it works for him?
iris having a cute moments: nice
and what connection does khail have with iris´s grandfather?
WHY DID YOU KILL GAV?!?! HE WAS AWESOME!
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Spa job of a spy is no an easy one? : P

Same perfumes?

Killed? Naaaaaah, they would never do such a thing~ Llama Emoji-50 (Whistling) [V3]


Or would they
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me when iris appeared in the chapter: Ah some good ol'fashion comedic skits 
Me at the end of this chapter: NEveR MiNd

Khail did you use the Zekrom flavored Axe body spray again dammit we told you to keep it lowkey. XD

Why you gotta do this an kill Gav before he got his deserved pay raise ლ(☉Д☉ლ)
Oh well, going by Khails reaction the last time someone was killed he is NOT going to be happy about this. That Bronius is going to get his ass beaten and I'm going to enjoy it with popcorn. u-u

And that fight was EPIC TEACH ME HOW TO DRAW DOG/FOX EXPRESSIONS PLS THey're LIterally Jumping out of the screen if my dog were reading this with me she'd be attacking my laptop like "Who are these doggos why they attacking my hooman I will fite" (I'm glad she wasn't.) And Gav's escape was really cool as an action sequence even if it didn't work and when the Zweilous dropped on them it just :'DDDD They're so ded, that Braviary is Ayam penyet now it's not getting back up.


hats off to Iris for doing what all the fangirls want to do but can't by sniffing Khail XD
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