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The Untold - part 5 by Antarija The Untold - part 5 by Antarija
Well...
Khail can be a jerk sometimes :P

I must admit that I had a huge problem with this part and it's all Bianca's fault. In game I just hated her with all my might so it was a big challenge for me to stop myself from making her a total derp... 

And about that part where Akashe uses growl... I was sure he had this move, but apparently Tepigs have Tail whip instead... Who knew? So I'm sorry for that mistake.


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:icondemonheart1234:
Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017  Student General Artist
The rock has a face o3o I never noticed because of all that bloody o0o
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, then now you're one of the very few who noticed it xD
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:icondemonheart1234:
Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Student General Artist
Yey I am speaical :D
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Chiyo Flowers Icon 
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:icondemonheart1234:
Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Student General Artist
:D
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:iconcheliya:
Cheliya Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's kinda harsh but it is the truth though... poor Bianca.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, he might be a bit of a jerk but she has to face the sad truth.
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:iconcheliya:
Cheliya Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's a good jerk tho... I dunno, I like the guy, lol.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm so glad to hear that~! : D
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:iconrojoynaranja:
ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
ISN'T KHAIL BEING A LITTLE RUDE WITH BIANCA? BY THE WAY, IS SHE HIS GIRLFRIEND?
OH BIANCA! YOU ALMOST KILL HIM
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, someone has to, right?
And no, she's definitely not his girlfriend xD
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:iconrojoynaranja:
ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015
WRONG, HE DOESN'T HAVE TO BE SO MEAN WITH HER
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:iconshigukun:
ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist
I want to hate on him for being a jerk, but he has a point, and I know for a fact that some people need to be told the truth that way for them to understand, soooooo..... He gets a free pass for this time.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aha, a free pass! Yeah!
Hating the jerk would be fine, but to be honest - I've never liked Bianca. So I can't blame him for acting this way ^^
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:iconshigukun:
ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist
Same XD""
But not liking Bianca isn't an excuse for forgiving a jerk.. INNER TURMOIL
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anything can be an excuse for forgiving that jerk :3
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:iconshigukun:
ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Hobbyist
Oh, yes. 
Hotness counts more than moral values.
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ch-apocalypse Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
leer kills?.... huh never knew
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Those creepy eyes of Patrats deserve that ability, don't you think? ;)
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MysticD Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
You've got a couple of typos and spelling errors on this comic, frame 8, 'Hod did you" and frame 28 "Takle"
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oops.
Thanks, I'll try to be more careful!
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, komediowość! Aczkolwiek nie wiedziałam, że dusza Khaila jest taka... urocza? Usta w trójeczkę i te sprawy X3 Buahaha, blokada Leer'a, biedny Deil XD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nie ma to jak komediowość z tragicznego zgonu lub niezdolnoścl schowania oczu! Wiwat ja! :dummy:

Oj tam, każda dusza jest urocza, gdy odchodzi z tego padłu, aby czasem tam u góry nie odesłali jej za brak zaangażowania :P
Nie bój nic, w normalnym stanie jego duszyczka jest iście złowieszczaaaaa... Ale co się tam będzie z tym afiszował.

Kiedyś mu przejdzie! Mam nadzieję... I jego najbliższe otoczenie chyba też.
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha! XD So apparently Khail's soul is that of a wobbuffet?
I love the battle scene, especially the leer panel.
... She deserved it but Bianca's gonna need some burn heals.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, who knows?
Thanks! I've always thought that Patrats have a bit... creepy eyes ;]
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:iconraycchan:
Raycchan Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too! XD Btw, the panel where he says "but I can't" is just hilarious. He's like "my face is always in this perpetual leer expression."
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe, maybe he just has no idea how does it really look like.
My little murderer ;3
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:iconraycchan:
Raycchan Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh man XD Deil needs more screentime.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed. And he will get it! :D
I hope...
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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice page!
love how you draw the battle scene!
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :3
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:icontimeturnerjasmy:
TimeturnerJasmy Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I really like your concept! Your art is amazing, too.
You just gained a stalker.:iconninninplz:

And the marks on those trees... I'd make a guess for Sneasel and Weavile, but they don't fit in the beginning of Black and White.
Ah well. I'll see what you are up to soon enough^^
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, I'm really glad to hear that! :)

Hahah, I love that icon xD

Honestly? I didn't even think about it. I've been trying out many "bandits" marks but all of them were just... stupid. And in the end I just made the simplest mark that came to my head.
Sorry, it's not that epic...
Yet. :P
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:icontimeturnerjasmy:
TimeturnerJasmy Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see^^ I though that maybe you went with Weaviles Pokédex-entry. The used it in the Pokémon Adventure-manga, too.
I think it was on ...this page. They use it as a way to communicate with their whole species as you will see on the following pages (in case you feel like reading them).

Well, if that was not what you intendet, I will look forward to your real idea!:iconbummy1::iconbummy2::iconbummy3:
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...
 I didn't know something like that exists! *-* (I've just recently returned to the Pokemon world after a rather long break, so you can say that I'm a real newbie now... :iconruncryplz:)
But it's kinda awesome. Must read more!
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:icontimeturnerjasmy:
TimeturnerJasmy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I was you, I'd start at the Beginning^^ This is chapter 452 already, so you'd miss a loooooot.:XD:
It's also kinda nice to see the art improving over the time. It still kinda sucks at the start, but it gets better and better.:meow:
It actually is really old already, I think it startet when the first games where released.
Ah well^^ Have fun!
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't worry, I will start from the beginnig ;)
Thanks!
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:icongrusnoid:
Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Harsh, but Bianca needs to catch on fast. Khail may be a jerk, but he has a point. Bianca is wet behind the ears, and she's not really ready to be out in the field.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True, she's completely unprepared for the outside world.
Every time I saw her in the game I've always wondered what even made her think it was a good idea to leave her town...
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Some people get it in their heads, that they can take on the world. So they jump in with both feet, and get sucked under. Instead of asking people who know, they just assume. That's the problem, and I never understood why asking questions, wound so many people's pride. If you don't know, you don't know, and there should be no shame in asking someone who does know more than you. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed. That's probably because they're afraid of asking a "stupid question", they don't want to look like an idiot (in their opinion). As if not knowing something was such a big deal. I mean, no-one's perfect, right? And no-one knows everything... It's far worse to make a stupid mistake because of being afraid to ask that "stupid" question.
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:icongrusnoid:
Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Exactly. The only person you hurt, by not asking questions is yourself. No one else suffers, just you. 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, it's not just you, actually. For example, in my kind of work it's also animals that could suffer then.
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:icongrusnoid:
Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Yeah, there are other things that could suffer as well. Still, you're held accountable for said mistakes, and it's not necessarily the best thing to have on your track record. 
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TheKillerShaymim Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Oh frig.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconunsureplz:
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TheKillerShaymim Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
This is a really good story so far.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, thank you! :)
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