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The Untold - part 46 by Antarija The Untold - part 46 by Antarija
We're finally baaaaack! \(*^*)/
And my first thoughts about this part was that.... I can't draw cities for ***! Akari Akazaki (Smirk and Cries) [V1] 
(Just leave me alone, I tried ok?! *sob* ) QAQ

Coughcough. Anyway.
I believe I've mentioned it at some point that Khail is a womanizer. I guess being in a big city is a good opportunity to show that to the point when every girl will start to hate him! :dummy: Be prepared.
And to be honest I have a big problems with N... I wanted to portrait him as a naive and socially awkward guy with a tendency to some creepiness at times, but at the same time to show that he has something on his mind and can be serious. Especially about his beliefs. And basically he thinks that what he knows is the common knowledge so he feels no need to explain himself, and thus is a big annoyance to anyone he tries to talk to... . I'm not sure if it works...
Not to mention that I wish I had shown their first encounter completely different. But well, that happens when you're making the story up as you go. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Trivia:

- Akashe never really managed to win any match against Khail, so he's pretty excited to have Asahi as his opponent.
- Khail knows no manners and just borrowed Asahi's Braviary, because they're in the forest outside of the Castelia, since Asahi has no Trainer license.
- In part 43 (the game-ish one) when you met N he mentioned that he wanted to talk with Khail again, and that's why he's here once again.
- In Pokemon Black/White, you don't meet N in Castelia, but I believe that at this point you know pretty well that I'm not keeping this story true to the one known from the game. It's all for the plot. And for developing N's character a bit.
- I though that it would make more sense if N was the one to talk about heroes and dragons ect instead of Ghetsis.
- Khail often uses sarcasm.
- N does't get sarcasm.
- When N says something about Khail's aura, he means an aura that any Pokemon user (Trainer/Summone ect.) have. I think I did mention it  before, but I will work on the lore for this if you're interested. For now you only need to know that every Trainer can see the aura of another Poke-uses, if they focus, and every aura is a very specific one.  The stronger you are, the better you see it and you can even recognize people by it, not only say how strong your opponent is. Really  strong Trainers (on Gym leaders lvl or so) can somehow hide their aura to make it look weaker, but they cannot erase it or change it's "nature". But maybe N sees something more? Who knows.
- I hate that market. I. HATE. IT.
- Actually I think I failed to show it back at the very beggining of this run, that when Khail told N that he can understad Pokemon, that was a sarcasm. Nobody should have believed that. But N is a special child. And that's why he's got so attached to Khail.
- The Order of the Original One is the main religion in this world but there are many other smaller cults, or whatever you call them, for many other legendaries, but they mostly have the status of  lesser gods. You know, as with Zeus and all the rest. But the Twin Heores legend would be considered a blasphemy, due to some reasons~


Cameos:
:iconmad-revolution: 's Eugene
:iconlonelycity: 's Nico's back
:iconbekkomi: 's Ely
:iconkat-wysteria:
:iconskadierendra: 's Maki
:iconraineyj: 's Eva and Gao
:iconignusthetrickster: 's Jo
:iconjadethestone: 's Will and Jade
:iconraycchan: 's Tibberius



First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/daojvt8
Next ->  fav.me/daxdgzj

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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:iconvelink:
Velink Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
Asahi lose?? WTF
all those muscles are only for show then..
no wonder he get scars all over his face
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe he just let him win.  Or didn't know how to fight a pig walking on hind legs : P

xD
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sognodrago Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
poor poor Asahi, now that's just being bullied by piggy
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He once tries to eat him, so they're even  now : P
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IgnusTheTrickster Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg i love the face of Jo, like -"For fuck sake this blondie is going to buy something or what?"- he is so grumpy XD.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm always like this when waiting in a queue xD
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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
fuck I'm at the last one already? I cant wait any longer its so goooooood! </3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you! : D
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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017
your very much welcome. now get to writing *flops around* Idk if my poor heart can handle the suspense
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, ma'am~Spilt Coffee 
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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
good boy Creepy stare goooood boooooy
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ed665 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017
N the ultimate cockblocker :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gods, protect him... xD
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hrm.... methinks that N is referring perhaps to a certain 'vision' Khail had a while ago~

But, boo! You're getting me addicted to all this juicy lore, I'm gonna go into withdrawal when it all stops XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhuhu, someone remembers those old times, yay : D

It will never stop, never! :iconsuperw00tplz:
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017
N, Khail doesn't buy your crap.
(Awww precious N ma baby...)
Seriously... when that time happen... it's going to be very epic.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
N needs to learn to read the mood : P

Hell yeah
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Student Digital Artist
N's mouth is way too big for his own good

but its also the best way for story to be told XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup. He's doomed if he won't stop it soon.

That's why you need at least one character like this in the story xD
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Billiam-X Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Student Filmographer
IT'S BACK! 

N is the ultimate cockblock, bless him and his pure heart. (He was also like two seconds away from being stabbed, poor boy needs to control his tongue). Also now I'll have to be wary of every female character in this run. For all I know, they're ALL ASAHI :'D

Dude! I'm a sucker for worldbuilding through dialogue so you can bet that I really enjoyed Khail and N's little conversations. I'm really anxious to see how these two conflicting characters relate to each other as the story goes, provided Khail doesn't kill him of course. Please don't let him kill N.

Your backgrounds are amazing as always. The forest scenes are always a pleasure to look at and the city scenes are quite well done excuse you (although I can personally relate to the generous use of guassian blur wherever necessary lol)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Y(-^-)Y

Though it might end badly for him one day.
No, not you too!  That conpiracy theory gets more fans than I expected! xD

Thank you! I'm so glad you think so! I'll do what I can, but I can't guarantee his safety if he keeps on the weirdo act.

Haha, thanks. But the fight isn't over just yet! Fear me, damn backgrounds!
(the best tool ever xD)
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I am intruiged with what you have planned for N. I am excited to see future conversations between him and Khail.

Also "frippery" is a great word. XD

And thanks for the cameos! :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm so glad yuo think so! : D

Now I just hope it means what I think it means xD

You're welcome!
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, Google says frippery means "showy or unnecessary in architecture, dress, or language." So I think you're mostly right. It's not a word I've heard used outside of TV, movies, or literature.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Phew, then all is fine :>
But they teach it in Polish schools! :iconhappyderpplz:
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
How interesting. They do not teach it in American schools. :p
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Schools, you can trust them to teach you the most important words in foreign languages xD
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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LonelyCity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aaa i love how you did n and khail's interactions !! 

and thank you for the cameo !!  
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

You're welcome : D
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Student General Artist
i feel bad for the dude aka is beating him up well who cares XD
I LOVE YOUR COMIC!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At least Akashe is happy ; D

THANK YOU! :iconblushplz:
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student General Artist
yeah your right continue! :D I support you till le end ):D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! : D
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Demonheart1234 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Student General Artist
your welcome owo
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you drew the city just fine >w < I really like how the characters stand out in your backgrounds too.

Finding out lore for your world is always so fun. :3 I was thinking the same thing as Ray with Khail and N representing truth and ideals in their views towards the legends. It's a distinction I don't see people do often or well enough in BW runs.

Thanks for the cameos~ wonder where Eva was running off too? (I'm guessing she skipped out on another bar tab lol)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! But still, there's a long way before me...

Aw, I'm so glad to hear that!
I thought that this fight over truts/ideals is a really great theme, so I really hope I'll be able to keep it interesting.

You're welcome! (that might be the case xD)
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw asahi don't worry, all of khails babies are precious angels ;w; except maybe ziara pls don't let her run away

I can't believe Khail went on a date with Asahi pretending to be a pretty lady. Of course we could all take khail's line as being sarcastic but I would like to raise a new conspiracy theory: from now on all the pretty girls in this comic are seceretly asahi in disguise idec. N pls khail has pretty lady #1 (asahi) he doesn't need you stop trying to get senpai to notice you.

Lol on a serious note, nice delivery of the lore ouob it feels like khail's side of the story represents the 'truth' where the dragons caused a lot of suffering with thier fighting and N's represents the 'ideals' where the dragons have their ends justifying the means or sth idk maybe???

Also yay for city bgs XD give your hand a reast after all those buildings and cameossss (and thanks for featuring my cat son and his smol parasite aka gao XD)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course. They might chomp on you, incinerate you, cut to pieces or simply trample you to death and fry with a thunder, but it's all out of love~

How were you able to see right though my conspiracy?! Impossibruuu! (But what about a situation when there are more than just one pretty girl at the same time, hm?)

Thanks! Huhuhu, I can't say much about this, but I hope you'll find those theories entertaining in the future~

No rest for that hand untill it learns cities! Vive la slavery! \QAQ/

(you're welcome~!)
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017
Don't worry about your city looking like shit, it will always be better than me and my non existing attempts at backgrounds. Besides I can see you cries in the yellow speech bubble between panel 9 and 10.

If you need an explanation for N way of thinking about the legend here is how I see it. That story he's saying is the truth and because religion is what it is the story has changed over time to suit the need of the people and assholes that rule it but Ghestis being someone who probably found an old book, tapestry or other plot device that set him on a path to correct this. So it might be possible for this Ghestis to not be a complete jerk if you didn't plan the story far ahead.

And finally Khali watch that wallet. I don't know but she might be a gold digger.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, thanks... My cries has been heard \QwQ/

You're getting surprisingly close to the plot, so let's stop it here xD
But I did plan the story far ahead, it's just smaller things and details I'm making up as I go. And personalities of some characters... That's probably because at first the game was still too fresh in my head :/

I think that people should rather watch their wallets around Khail xD (I bet some poor folks will be the ones to pay for this girl's gift)
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017
It's not like I secretly ninja into you home look at your story notes
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Le gasp! :iconffryojiplz:
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, Maki! :dummy:
Muszę powiedzieć, że podoba mi się jak przedstawiłaś N'a. Teraz to jego gadanie o wewnętrznym porządku świata jest dużo ciekawsze, bo brzmi po prostu jak nawiedzony otaku XD Pasuje mu to!

Biedny Asahi, świnia go pokonała :P ("Dla takich łachmytów "Pan Świnia!!!""XD)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nawiedzeni otaku (aka kultyści) zawsze pasują. Zawsze. Wszędzie. Creepy stare

Pfftt, trzeba to zrobić standardowym tekstem Akashe xD Niech ma swojego idola, a co!
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
omg ta ikonka XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Czasem znajduje się (creepy) perełki =w=
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017
www.youtube.com/watch?v=QpvM9u…

We are having some major crossover here, with this lore. All we need now is a civil war, and for Khail to be the Dovahkiin. XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now that you've found out, it's just about waiting for him to do the fus ro dah xD
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017
You thought you where so sneaky didn't you. But you can't hide Elder Scrolls lore from me. XD
 
Yeah, I guess that means Khail, could be the next emperor of Tamriel. This whole story, just took an awesome turn if the Pokeverse is everything that takes place on an opposite hemisphere of Nirn. XD
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