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The Untold - part 45 by Antarija The Untold - part 45 by Antarija
Yup, Zaira doesn't like horses. They're domestic and she's a wild spirit, after all:iconherotimeplz:
Saklavi joined the "Hands off my master" club! : D
Strange thing. I forgot it was a night and the stable is so bright... Welp, whatever.

Until we get to the gym (and my very-detailed-and-oh-so-smart notes tell me it will take us 8-9 more parts) there won't be too much of action, rather some worldbuilding and glimpses of plot here and there but I hope you won't get bored.

But for the sake of the future gym battle - does anyone want their characters to be in Burgh fanclub?


Also, can you tell what do you think about colors of this part? I've got a new laptop and everything looks so different now so  I've decided to change colors a bit (on this screen my old art looks so yellow and high-cotrast...)


Cameos:
:icongoldennocturna: 's Dylan dancing with :iconmisakiri: 's Maori


First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/dam77hx
Next ->  fav.me/davn1zs
Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Velink Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
I forget there are actual non-talking animals in Untold
and you took your time to explain them to me a long time ago too
I wonder if there are people/ pokemon who can talk to regular animals
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Quite many of them, actually ;]
Haha, happens, it was long ago, after all.

On the same level I can talk to my cats. I think they think I am an idiot...
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Velink Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist
so, no character can talk to animal
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup.
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Edited Dec 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Master notice me club ft. Saklavi and Sheyri :'D 

Khail's dating advice to Ziara lol I'm surprised those 'handsome stallions' haven't died of fright from all the thundering bless these creatures. Bowl cut horse deserves a medal for even daring to approach Ziara with his apple bribery ;w;
//casually ships

Also Oooh plot~ Can't wait to see what you have in store for the crows ovo it sounds dangerous and illegal
Khail you know if you don't want people to recognize you you should crossdress ;D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, this club's name is so much better xD

He's a pro after all.
Weaklings died long ago. Now only those truly devoted remains!
I think he's either mad or desperate : P But Zaira would never hurt an apple (eating is not hurting), so maybe it's some kind of a shield?

Illegality is what they specialize in, after all :dummy:

I'm afraid he would attract even more attention if he was to do that xD 
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016
WHY KAL'S LIEPARD & SWADLOON LOOK HIM LIKE THAT?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually,  they're looking at the woman. I think they'd like to scare her off.
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
BUT WHY?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhm, you know it's hard for me to explain such things since it was shown in their relationship by previous parts...

In short, they're kinda jelaous. Like a dog when it's owner pets another dog?
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
OH!
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016
Give me the food and leave me alone
Gurl same
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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Aether108 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
"Scram maggot and leave that here" I love that Blitzle lol
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, she knows what she wants at least ;]
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohoo, zazdrość tak podszyta krwawą groźbą... ja na miejscu tej kelenrki odskoczyłabym od Khaila jak poparzona XD

Może i zootechnikiem nie jestem, ale myślę, że jak Zaira będzie jadła samo ziarno i owoce/warzywa to się roztyje i będzie klucha :P
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Może zaczną się bić? : D Jakoś jestem całkiem pewna, że Sheyri łatwo dałaby się jakoś odciągnąć. Co do Saki, to już nie wiem ; P

Ale, ale... tym światem przecież rządzi magiaaaaa! GIF Gravity Falls - Celestabellebethabelle 
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffft, padłam! XD Ten jednorożec jest tu genialny! XDD
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016
Akashi is just digging into that "food"?

When Moonlight comes in to ask Khali help she says compaints instead of complaints also there going to be a body in the river just saying.

Zaira electricity made something catch fire that why it's so bright even though it nighttime. Zaira give these nice stallions a chance I mean that one male gave you an apple, do you have any idea how hard it is to get one of those when your a horse.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, Akashe eats like a pig. He never learned table manners.

Fixed it. Thank you very much! No matter how many times I re-read those looking for mistakes there's always something left...

That would be highly possible... Bad Zaira :<

Actually it's not that  hard. Humans often come to stable and simply give them away. Strange creatures. :shrug:
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LemCrossview Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Moonlight better sleep with one eye open tonight.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup. Japan emote 
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
well i suppose lightning would ligth up the stable XD

Very nice chapter!!!

Love Saklavi and Sheyri's reactions!!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True enough xD

Thank you!

Haha, but I think that if those two keep it up and start to chase girls away, their master might get a bit angry : P
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zaira's not a free spirit, she's just in denial that she has a soft spot XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If she heard you her pure delicate heart would shatter xD
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So in a sense, you're asking me to... don't go breaking her heart? I couldn't if I tried XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I think she wolud just burned everything around... Some zebras can't handle the pravda : P
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016
I am impressed that the horses actually weren't scare.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They've probably got used to her by now and stopped giving a damn.
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MamaWicked Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Professional Artist
Bring her all the apples!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
All dem  apples!Snorlax and the Endless Apple Conveyor Belt 
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Silval58 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
The artwork looks great! The colors are coming through quite nicely and I had to look again to notice any major differences. Keep it up!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much!
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
>w< I really love how this plot is evolving. So much intrigue going on~

And the colours look fine to me, a little brighter than normal perhaps but it's still good.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The plot might be strong in this one. Hopefully : P

Ah, ok then. Thank you very much! My old laptop had that glassy screen and when I switched to the one with a mat (?) one, colors feel really odd.
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, I know the feeling. Same thing happened when I upgraded my computer earlier this year. All the colours looked way different to me. =w=;; 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly! It will take some time to get used to it ^^"
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
well.... after seeing how Sheruyi...??? was tearing into that hunk of meat, i wouldn'tve gone near Khail.... but i love ur interaction between human, pokémon and animal
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good thing she's only staring. For now. (and it's Sheyri ;])

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
I almost had it, just gotta remember there's no 'u'.... I'm reading so many nuz comics and playing thru my own two it's hard to keep names straight sometimes...
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, don't worry about it.
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
so sad to hear about ur computer!!!! guess i'll have to ask santa to quickly return ur computer and give you motivation and good luck for christmas (or whatever you celebrate)!!!
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MysticD Featured By Owner Edited Nov 14, 2016
Mighty free-spirited rebel, ain't she~?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aye ;]
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Saakumi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg Zaira you adorable little electric zebra-horse thing <3
"And apples" I just died x3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She value herself xD
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