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The Untold - part 44 by Antarija The Untold - part 44 by Antarija
And that's how Saklavi reached the next level of tsundere-ism. Ah, youth~

You know what... I don't like desigining buildings... :I

Let me explain  Bianca-Cheren-Khail trio's relationship shortly: Cheren hates Khail (mutual), Cheren cares for Bianca (mutual), Bianca cares for Khail (not mutual). And since Cheren is the one to protect Bianca, and Khail has already told her to go home there's really no reason for him to look out for her.



Trivia:

- In the first part they're on Castelia's training grounds. It's a special park developed for Trainers for their basic trainings of things like speed/agility ect., so they don't have to book the Gym for it (Gym is mostly used for special trainings and fights). There are no barriers so all "magical" attacks are rather risky. This place is also quite far away from the rest of the city.
- It might be easy to forget that, since Khail often talks with his Pokemon, but in the The Untold universe it's actually a reaaaaly rare skill - actually, it's even mythical (and Trainers are rather rare as well). Most of people would react to it as if in real life you'd say "I can talk with animals!". In Raging Crows only few members know their Chief is able to do so (since their previous Chieftain had him to prove it), all the rest think about it in a way that people see an owner talking to his dog. Plus - Khail doesn't really talk with his Pokemon too often in public.
- The Order of The Original One is a main religion in Unova, it's basically Arceus's Church. Each of legendaries have their own temple but Arceus is the main "God".
- First three gyms are supposed to be "rookie-friendly" so most of fights for a badge are not very interesting. Sometimes a demonstration fights are held but usually only between Leaders.
- Cheren saw things Khail did to some people and had his own bones broken more than once by him. He's still eager to fight him but is rather scared of him at the same time. Khail knows it well.


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:iconcookiekikira:
:iconfroslassmaniac:
:iconskadierendra:'s Galvantula - Jake (friendly sparring?)
:iconringo-mikan:' s Swoobat - Amore (friendly sparring?)

First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/dak7fw9
Next -> fav.me/daojvt8

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Velink Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
It's time for me to catch up on yoru comic again, Antarija!
50% of his team members are round pokemon hahah what a pretty well rounded team
why si Bianca wounded and crying?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Be my guest :>
Haha, yeah, to be honest I've never noticed that xD

Because Team Plasma are mean and took her Pokemon away.
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Cheliya Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh Khail, why you had to be such a jerk to Bianca? :'(
Anyway, nice page! :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because he doesn't like those which he doesn't like : P
Thank you!
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Cheliya Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Does he have a reason to dislike her? I mean she's kinda an airhead/pushover I suppose but besides that I can't think of anything...
and no problem :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes that's a reason enough to hate someone.
Or
plotplotplot ; D
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Cheliya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh goodness, I suppose I'll find out which one in time :D
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Evellefox Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
COMING SOON WHYYYY
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry, forgot to update the "next" button, I'll do it when I get to my computer. There's another part already.
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Evellefox Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh plzz do .. it was going so well
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Evellefox Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Nooooooo
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LemCrossview Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, the Scolipede... I completely missed this update when it came out, so when I realized I was VERY happy. Also, adorable Tsun is ABSO-FREAKING-LUTELY ADORABLE! X3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They might be a good meterial for nightmares. Oversized scolopendra... brr.

Haha, I'm glad you've found it then! : D
She's the real master of all that's tsun~
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LemCrossview Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Nightmare? Nah, that thing would be my steed! Scolipede is one of my top bugs, and I love its design.

All bow to the master of Tsun! *Praises the Swadloon*
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Antarija Featured By Owner Edited Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Teach me master, since this coward would  never come anywhere near a Scolipede... (though it's also one of my fav poke-bugs :>)

Haha! ;D
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LemCrossview Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You must tame it as a youngling, a Venipede, then raise it diligently, teaching it to respect and heed you. You must make sure that you respect it and treat it fairly, though, otherwise it may rebel. It's a long process, but do it once and you will have the knowledge you seek. Can you tell I like getting in character?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, so that's how you do this! Interesting Sherlock Holmes emote

Haha, kinda ;]
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LemCrossview Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed, it has taken many years of careful study and observation. Use this knowledge wisely.
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Edited Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Saklavi jest mega tsundere tsun tsun~ XP Ale scena z "króliczkiem" była cudna XD
Cheren przypomina mi yorka, dużo kłapie dziobem i szczeka, ale jak coś to się boi :P
Ten portret yo 8l
Yay, mój Jake! :dummy:
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bo, jak wszyscy wiemy, każda seria potrzebuje chociaż jednej takiej postaci  ;D

A my nie lubimy tu yorków. W sumie to on chyba miał Lillipupa... Już nie pamiętam nawet, okaże się w trakcie.

:3

Jeszcze gdzieś wcisnę Sierrę, zobaczysz.
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Ringo-Mikan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Student General Artist
AMORE MY DEAR FLUFFBALL WHY WOULD YOU FRIEND-SPAR WITH AN ELECTRIC TYPE MAMA IS VERY WORRIED
I very appreciate that you draw her so fluffy!! :'D 
Thanks for the cameo!! Such a pleasant surprise~
(Which means mysterious heroic ice lady from Castelia is around the area again!! *hint hint*)

I threw away my dignity at "I'd never laugh at a girl~:heart:" and fangirl-screamed like a chicken under a butcher's knife (???).
Khailo is such a good boy (sometimes)... *curls up*
Also his eyes get prettier with every update... *curls up and rolls away into the trash can where I belong*

I love the protag-rival relationship in this comic... It's so angsty and tense, it's such a nice exchange from all the goody-goody friendship in all the other comics. 

Can I plz touch the big fiery fluffball on Burgh's desk I cannot resist hnnnngggg
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't worry, Jake is a very gentle spider :>

Haha, you're welcome! Amore is so cute the flufiness comes to her naturally.
( I bet  Khailo went chasing after her and that's when Asahi fell asleep, haha)


Successs!  :icontuzkiyesplz:
Haha, yes, sometimes. But only when a girl is involved~
He needs them to cast his evil spells, muahaha. (Nuuu, come out!) 


Thanks! Somehow those two have always looked as if they wanted to murder each other to me, so the idea stayed.

Sure, go on! If it resembles it's master in the slightest, it will be more than happy and very cuddly.
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So... Khail's gonna be fighting Burgh himself alongside both of their Pokémon then? That's awesome!

And what do I see, I say? My serious son the beanie-bae! Aaaaah, thank you! XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Huhu, I'm glad you think so. Though I hope it wont turn into a big mess in the end xD

You're very welcome~
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Yokufo Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So THAT'S how you get a trainer badge in this city ay? #ICanHandleThePravda
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Evil Onion 
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Saklavi is soooooooooooooooo cute!

My gosh, I am rooting so hard for Bianca to actually stand up for herself once. C'MON, GIRL.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And she shall accept it!

Me too. :I
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016
Wow I heard that asshole al the way here and I'm on a different plain of existence.

Asahi, don't make any sudden movement. He could catch you in no time so slowly get out of there.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bacause it was the cry of a wounded pride. It goes through dimmensions.

Run for it, Asahi, run! But slowly.
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Saklavi looks so cute!!!!

And that KILLER Scolipede Portrait!! So Badass!!!!

Also Khail being smoother than a freshly polished marble floor with soap XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, how is it she's the only one that doesn't see it this way? xD

Thanks, I really liked drawing it!

I love that description so much xD
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JohnnyNuzlocke Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god, I seriously love this! The art style is incredible, the guild-details you've added to the story are intriguing, the fact your protagonist's an anti-hero is amazing! I'm watching and I'm reading the whole thing right now!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you so much! I'm so happy that you enjoy it!
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016
Yes! Dear Khail being slick, I missed that!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There'll be more of it, I promise ~ : D
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2016
:D:D:D!!!!
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Mutant-Girl013 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah i love it and those eyes when he turns around with this (hot/evil stare) so awesome Heart Love 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A Bad boy's ultimate skill - the hot stare of doomNatsu - sexy eyes 
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ragunjin Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016
excuse me but i can't seem to download part 43 what program do you use to read it
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhm, it was created in Ren'Py but it's not needed to launch the game.
But do you have a problem with downloading it or launching?
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ragunjin Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2016
yeah when i try to open it my computer says i need to download some program or to open it with some kind of app but im worried i might mess my computer up since the computer says it might cause it to be at risk since it's an unknown program on it.
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hnng, Saki-chan's tsundereness is killing me. 

I like that Burgh is manly-fabulous XD 

And as usual, your trivia is really interesting >w< I always like hearing about how religions work in different universes.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Tsun tsuen dere tsun dere tsun tsun~"

Hehe, I'm glad to hear that, he shouldn't be only that one creep who want everyone covered in honey : P

Thank you! Religions make a nice canvas for stories after all :>
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Saki is so adorable!!!!! I wanna hug her.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you think so! Feel free to do so! ;D (but I take no responsibility for her actions)
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's ok. *hugs the adorable leaf bunny.* You are so cute!
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CookieKikira Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Khail certainly has charm
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And uses it in strange ways ;]
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Dracoqueen14 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Student General Artist
-3- i approve all of it XD also evolution for tsun tsun (idk why im calling her that) is adorable X3
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