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The Untold - part 42 by Antarija The Untold - part 42 by Antarija
Took. Far. Too. Long. XI
Sorry for being so late with this update, I blame HIM and some unknown reasons that made me doing everything in a real slow-motion...

ANYWAY.
Again I really wanted to make pretty backgrounds, but seeing how slow I was at everything I've decided that I can't stand looking at this page anymore, so no pretty backgrounds xD (also I've discovered I'm stull much better with pencils than with my tablet, weeee....)

Some info again:
- Yes, Burgh has a bit different clothes here, since he had to look more like a leader (?) here. The guy beside him is his counselor (each of Gym Leaders has one). The presence of Guild Leaders is required while judging/hanging people.
-Since they're rare and very useful, Trainers have special privileges and of them is the fact that they cannot be judged for their crimes like any other folk. They must do something reeeeally bad. Like a murder or something. Well, TP wants to change that to make people equal.
- "Silencing" a Trainer the second worst sentence (beside the death penalty) a Trainer can get for their crimes. It's basically a process when a crystal negating aura management is attached to the body, and thus- poof- you're not a Trainer anymore. It has some more negative effects for health ect, but nevermind.
 - My characters switch sides in every panel xD
- Krog works in the kitchen, that's why he has that chopper
- Apparently he also got his scar in his first fight with Khail. Yay, manly-man friendship scars! :dummy:
- Vlora - Madam Vlora, is a brothel keeper and an informator. (Yes, Khail pays her for infos). She also runs an inn called "Swanna's Grace".



Nooo, I've just noticed I forgot to shade Vlora's dress in one panel... Screw it, the table went away and ate the shades, I don't care anymore D:<

One more thing before I fall on my face - the next part might get late again. This time because I wanted to make it... a bit different and I'm not sure how long will it take. I wanted to make it into a form of a short visual novel, because reasons. :>


Cameos:
:iconskadierendra:,:iconbekkomi:, :iconmad-revolution:, :iconraineyj: (I have a bad feeling that Eva-sensei is about to start a rebelion :I), :iconraycchan: (sorry for abusing your kid so soon again, but she naturally came into my mind when I was looking for someone to cheer on Eva for no reason :U), :icongrazyfish:, :iconjadethestone:, :iconanimaltamer7:, :iconignusthetrickster:

I hope I didn't forget about anyone but just in case I did - scream with all your might :V
If your character didn't appear in this part - don't worry. We'll stay in Castelia for a long time (yeah, a really long time, bear with me) and their time will come, I promise. And I might use them more than once of course.




First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/daam0o2
Next -> fav.me/dak7fw9

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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:iconanimaltamer7:
Animaltamer7 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah, I didn't know I had a cameo in this page, which of my characters did you use here? (BTW awesome page :))
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's... something you should know, right?
The Capo guy, first panel in the tavern. The one with the drink.
(Thanks!)
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Animaltamer7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
For some reason this didn't show in my notifications :/  . Capo? does that mean captain? If it does then is it Kristopher who's doing the spit take?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It happens, I think DA notifications doesn't always work as well as they might think...
Kordesii and Capo gijinkas by Animaltamer7 I don't know. I only used the refs you sent me. The one on the right.
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Animaltamer7 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! now I remember I made those two for a friend :)
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Co ta Maki tak opowiada, że ludzie plują sobie w kufel? :P
Khailo, you bad boy you, podrywaczu cudzych żon/burdelmamy! XP
Asahi, ty psuju :P
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pewnie jakiś Żenujący Żart Prowadzącego : P
A co! Niech się chłopak pobawi.
Wpuścili troglodytę do przybytku to i mają za swoje : P
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Edited Aug 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tfw your go-to bae get married without telling you :'D

Vlorie probably appriciates Krog's kitchenly usefulness over his appearance so good call vlorie. =w=b (also, for her to be immune to khails advances and stay faithful to Krog Frog; this marriage was meant to last :')

eyy at ray harassing eva across all the dimensions XD thanks for including my kid (again! ;u; )
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He should get used to it xD

As a wise man once said: If you have to chose between a beauty and a great cook, always pick the cook. Beauty fades, hunger does not." ;] (what did you expect? Khail can't cook for shit xD)

no problemo, I like to steal people's childs~ No, wait-
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bekkomi Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Man, Khail gonna get killed like that some day 8'D
Thank you for cameo-ing Blaze~
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Only if his charm spell wears off ; P
You're welcome~
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016
Well Vlora certainly has big.. personality
Man another good chapter again, looking forward to the next ;3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD

Thank you so much~! : D
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Another great chapter!!! I love how you reveal bits and pieces of Khail's past with every few chapters!

And yuuuuuusss I see my boy XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I like creating puzzles, even though I'm really bad at solving them, haha XD

I wonder what made him laugh so hard ;]
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Probably or bad joke or something along those lines XD
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Student Writer
A Visual Novel format for the next update? I'm intrigued...
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't expect too much though, it's just me and my mad skills of a technoob xD
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Student Writer
I'm sure whatever you make will be fine. :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, you~ Blush 
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PK-Bubbles Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The moment Khail started flirting with Vlora, I expected her to give him a slap a la Pirates of the Carribean :P
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pfft, that sure would be interesting xD (and probably he would've  also deserved it)
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Yokufo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
....you know, when she said she was going to 'castrate' both of them, I kind of felt her harboring a set of knives beneath that puffy dress of hers LOL
// shiver
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Who says she wasn't? Big Fool Emoji-27 (Heh sideways) [V4] 
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Yokufo Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.... I knew it! XD
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BlazeGlory Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Can't  wait! :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
: D
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Okay who the poor guy that Krog is dragging? Also is there some sort fight pit for "humans" to have a go it would most certainly save Lady Vlora a little money.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it's just a random poor soul that were meant to become Krog's next weapon.
Krog likes to throw his weapons at stuff.

Maybe she should consider it xD
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CurlyTopEarl Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
vlorie kicks ass
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They're no match for the mighty inn keeper Nick (Deal with it!) - Icon 
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Silencing, eh? Interesting. But if trainers are silenced when that gets attached/embedded in them, aren't there ways to reverse it? Like breaking or removing the crystal?

Sorry, my obsessive lore-analyzing side is taking over XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Not unless you wish to die =w=
My english is far from perfect and I might've used a wrong word for it... It's, ah, more like... merging?
Ok, let's say it's as if they put a nail in your brain or something. In most cases you can live with it for a while (hush, it's just an example and not the best one, I know xD) but if you try to remove it - you die.
The same goes for those "silencing crystals". They're not necessarily in a form of crystals, but they're "merged" with some vital points. You can try to remove them but chances that you'll survive it are rather low. Like very very low. And removing them wouldn't guarantee that ones would regain their "powers".
...
Does it make any sense? xD

And don't apologise! I'm always glad to get yours questions, they always make me put my thoughts into words and it's extremely helpful : D
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, ok! That makes more sense, although it would be kinda cool to see that sentenced on someone in the future. It reminds me of "gentling" from Wheel of Time (except it's just a silencing spell), the poor sods just end up wasting away 'cuz they lose their power. Although with all these crystals you have in your story, I wonder where they all originate from? Actually, even a lore post might be cool to help explain them all - might as well kill a bunch of birds with one stone, right?

All my mumbling aside, I'm really digging all of these ways you're explaining your fantasy-Pokemon universe, it's clever and fitting all at once : D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, when I think about it I might have gotten the idea from the Dragon Age and their tranquils. I think?
I read/watch/play too much, I can't even say what inspired what in my works anymore xD

I have a lore for them in plans :>
Though I have no idea when will I finally make it...
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOAR LOARZ!! :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:dummy:
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
=w= I like Vlora already, haha. 

That's some pretty interesting worldbuilding with the 'silencing' as a punishment. Hope we don't get to see it up close D:

Thanks for giving Eva a cameo!! <3 I'm gonna blame Ray for creating whatever situation is currently happening there - probably involves a lot of alcohol though. I wouldn't be surprised if Eva starts a bar fight... XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehee, good, goood~  =w=

Thanks!
You never know~

You're welcome! Yes, I bet it's definietely Ray's fault xD
You can never get enough fights when in a tavern! :dummy:
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IgnusTheTrickster Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its 4 am in the morning and im going to work, open the cellphone browser and find this cameo.... you make my day, week, month, blehugigfkflskslckslckflc...... my little Joe is in The Untold ;u; thanks a lot!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At your service :>
Your little Joe looks like an awesome fighter so I thought he might be eager to join Eva in... whatever she's up to xD
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