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The Untold - part 41 by Antarija The Untold - part 41 by Antarija
I'm sorry, son. It had to be done. TTvTT

Sorry, Ringo, but I'm not sorry. I did warn ya' after all~! :dummy:
You gave me that lovely design and after this it was just too hard to resist~ I3

Only I can spend over 50 hours for an update about nothing. I'm a genius, haha...ha...

As you can see, I'm changing a lot in this story. Even trivial things. We should meet that Grandpa in the next city, but... well, I wanted him right here right now?

What is that last panel, I don't even...


Small facts:
- Yes, there are categories of Pokemon and Trainers can have anything they can afford to but Summoners have some limitations on their side.
- When a Trainer becomes a Trainer they have to swear to protect the Unova and it's citizens. Team Plasma are told to swear same thing.
- Someone wanted a quick promotion and took charge in a quest to bully a grandpa~
- In cities there are: Trainer Guild, Team Plasma and city's Guards. Guards are hired by Guild, since Guild with it's Champion rules the Unova, but are independent. Trainers can't be a part of it.
- No-one ever saw Gavil's Sister. The rumor says she's only in his head but he still sends her piles of letters and sometimes even receives some responds. From who, nobody knows~
- Asahi and Gavil often shortens Khail's name to 'Kal', yes.
-  I so so wanted to make backgrounds pretty. Tried 3 different concepts for the city panel and failed every time so I got tired and we have what we have. Wanna learn to draw concept art or something so much...
- Hey, hey, the mighty crowd from part 2 is back and this time they don't even have faces anymore, weee : D


Cameos:
:iconringo-mikan:'s Ice Queen Felicia and Flaire
:iconsevenluck:'s Alice
:iconmiwapi:'s Lily
:icondrangondragster:'s Ouroboros
:iconraycchan:'s Ray
:iconhypervon:'s Jade
:icongrazyfish:'s Carol, daughter whose name I didn't catch, sorry ^^" whose name I surely knew all along~
:icontenshineko01:'s Katsura
:iconkinfin123:'s Kinny

If your character didn't appear in this part - don't worry. We'll stay in Castelia for a long time (yeah, a really long time, bear with me) and their time will come, I promise. And I might use them more than once of course.




First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/da2ur7i
Next -> fav.me/daecb9f
Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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:iconsuperwill123:
superwill123 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
DAT CAMEO THO

(but in all honesty Felicia looks like azura, almost mixed them up. . . :C)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;D

( who is Azura?)
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superwill123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Azura is a songstress in Fire Emblem Fates.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, I see. I've never really played anything from Fire Emblem series. Maybe I should change it, haha
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superwill123 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe you should...

(Also if u want a free entry into the series, fire emblem heroes is a free app for your phone... ;) )
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tembelizor Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016
Update the NEXT button coz i'v been waiting LIKE CRAZY to realize 4 more pages are out!!! DUDE!!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They were in my gallery. They were uploaded to both Nuzlocke Challenge's and NuzlockeFamily's groups.  They weren't that hard to find even if I forgot to update the status.
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tembelizor Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
:P I know , sorry , but still some of us were waiting for the ,, next" button to update , Sorry again and keep up the good work <3 
everytime i see a meme with You in it , i can't open my eyes from the tears of joy and happyness
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No worries ;>
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HyperVon Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I didnt see this update! my goodness!  those backgrounds!! so many of them. I personally love the one with the mountains and the city. and that  ice Queen <3... My lame human girl was choosen! -gasp- thank you very much for the cameo! hope you let me use khail too someday!

luv ur nuzlocke -heavybreathing- 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Backgrounds everywhereere @ - @
Haha, glad to hear that, I redesigned it so many times xD

You're very welcome, and probably it's not the last time she appears in castelia, hehe~
Feel free to use him whenever and however  you want! :dummy:

Thank you~!
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Ringo-Mikan Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student General Artist
Disclaimer: I actually read and re-read this about 123456789 times before I made this comment just so I can accurately form my excitement into words
but I concluded that keyboard smashing was the best way to convey first-rate excitement so here's a very normal comment with almost first-rate excitement.

My AU shipping alarm went EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE from miles away just getting that new 1 Mention in my inbox. Actually, that might have just been me screaming.
Fay-Fay and Flaire were over 9000% in-character from heroic ice queen to Khail and Akashe interaction!! 
So happy to see my baby saving people while cloaked in icy aura and being a certified flirt-proof! I'm so proud of her ;m; 
If it's true love they'll see each other again... And I think I have a good idea where. ;U 

TheUntold!Castelia sure is a nice place to live in, with supportive crowds and magical bridges which you can't fall down from and no falling fees even if you did!
And excuse me for being concerned about weird things in a serious situation, but a Bouffalant as gentle as a lamb? Please let me bury my face in your afro, cutie <3

...In the end, I guess I'll keyboard smash after all for a nice wrap-up and stress my excitement once again. c:
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Smashing ones keyboard is a way to go! XD

Woooot, I'm so glad I've managed to get their personalities right, then! To be honest I wasn't sure how Felicia would react, haha! But she just had to be there~!
Uhuhu, whatever could you mean~? ;D

Definitely, Castelia is the city we've all dreamed about, with it's perfect law and even more perfect bridges :U

Pet the afro while you can!


xD
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Ringo-Mikan Featured By Owner Edited Aug 2, 2016  Student General Artist
(Whoops why did I go all italics haha)

Did you catch the hidden message in my keyboard smashing tho ;U
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh. Ooooooh!
Yeah, I'm kinda denseIcon popo
But now that I see the hidden message that I see, I can't wait to, well, see it~
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
I absolutely loved that cameo
I saw the ice queen stuff and I was like "Noooo?? No waaaay!!"
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, everyone loves the Ice Queen xD
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, Khail, ty babiarzu! XD Widać "jaki pan, taki kram", bo Akashe też się udzieliło :P
Plasma jak zwykle są bezmyślni, jak w tej akcji z kopaniem Munny, żeby wypluła im trochę Dream Mist'a XD Haha, uchwyciłaś tą samą logikę, co w grze XP
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A co, więcej Pigniteowych samic to tu raczej nie uświadczy : P

Tja, chociaż miałam nadzieję, że udało mi się nieco ich "uzasadnić"? Welp, mówi się trudno.
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016
Quite the gentleman Kail is. I mean if he didn't slip that poor plasma knight might have fallen off the none existing rails and Ashasi sharpening that knight sword. Truly they are not thieves or murderers of any kind. Also what part of you died when making the city because geez it's pretty.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed! They're all such good kids it makes me cry.

My soul Q-Q
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
Don't worry you can get another soul. Just give me time to find a sacrificial virgin. Do you prefer male or female virgins?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, sure! xD
Then I'll take th-... Wait. W-What?! Is there even a good way to answer that? QAQ
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016
Ursula's evil laugh 
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
... Ladies and gentlemen, Kal in all his glory.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... and his misery at the same time xD
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
hahahaha
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OkamiDragon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016
Loved Felicia and Flaire cameo, Ray as well (they are the only one I know.)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I'm glad to hear that~
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PK-Bubbles Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa, the Castelia City looks awesome :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! : D
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wildCorvus Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016
The ship is strong in this oneonion yep 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed~Fool Emoji-08 (Hehehehe) [V1] 
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My favourite thing about this page is fayfay's obliviousness to khails advances :') its good to see fay is staying faithful to the fray ship. =7=

Ray is not a fan of "falling fees" bc if they were a real thing she'd be bankrupt. Thabks for cameoing my child so accurately :'D

That city is 10/10 ign =v=b
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Felicia just keeps a cool head at any circumstances. And has a very high charm-resistance ; P
Haha, yes, there's that as well xD

You're welcome. I just wanted Ray to go all "booo" in public ;]

Yaaay, thank you so much!
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Pepsipup Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
AAAAAAHHHH!!! That amazing Cameo!!! Khail's both the BEST and the worst at the same time, haha. Honestly though, he's one of my favorite characters in any nuzlocke I've read.


Also, your Castelia City is FLIPP'N GORGEOUS!!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I love all those reactions so much~!
Pfft, yes, he's the best in the worst possible way, haha!  Omg, I'm so happy to hear that! : D

Awww, thanks! I hate drawing cities but for this story I really need to learn how to do it.
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Jexima Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016
NO TOUCHING UNLESS YOU'RE A WOMAN

I really enjoyed this page! I don't understand why bullies like that have to pick on innocent old grandpas. jerks. Nice job as usual! 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Khail is very true to the rules he sets : P

Thank you, I'm so glad to hear that!
They're giving our heroes a chance to shine~? 
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Hugo93F Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I literally screamed the moment i saw Felicia XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yes she has that effect on people, doesn't she  XD
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a good day when you update :D 

So many lovely cameos~ Poor Fay-Fay looks so awkward, hahaha.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
T-thank you~! >//w//<

Yes, I think Khailo might a bit too much for her, haha xD
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
FAY-FAY?!?!

Lol, may or may not have fangirled at that cameo XD

nice update! really fun character stuff :D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Edited Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In my defense: Ringo just made her daughter too pretty for Khail to let her be!

Haha, we all know the feeling xD

Thanks! Funny things shall happen from time to time (well, recently they're just goofing around, ok  : P)
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohmygosh, your story's version of Castelia is breathtaking! I can't wait to see more of it :D

AU shipping is real XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And I can wait to draw it in it's full splendor, haha...ha...
Help.
 QwQ

AU shipping is strong xD
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I salute your hand for the carpal tunnel it's gonna have to power through 8'D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello darkness my old friend~ :iconemotamakiplz:
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Amazing chapter! I love it!!



also... MAH BBY!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for using herUle !!!!

p.s. her name is Carol XD
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