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The Untold - part 40 by Antarija The Untold - part 40 by Antarija
Meet three happy crows~

And sorry for the walls of text again.

So, in case someone didn't notice, those three new guys are members of Raging Crows. Asahi and Gavil appeared in my last doodles, but thier design have changed a bit (I gave back an eye to Asahi, he looks better with it~)

But before you start calling Khail names I must remind you that they're all bandits and this is not a One Piece, where pirates are nice saviors and nakamas till the end of time. It's more brutal. And so, yes, they fight among themselves and kill each other at times, and they're jerks.

Info time:
- I like to make simple things complicated and so bandids groups are complicated as well. Basically there are one big group for every main area in Unova. Raging Crows for the area around the Striaton City, another one for Nacrene, another for Castelia, ect. ect. And they are kinda specialized. For example, Crows are for combat but in Castielia they're more like spies. I'll make a Lore about it as well, because this is something I've been building for a long time for this story. It may not even be that important for the plot, but I really like working on this kind of things. :>
-Normal people can't understand Pokemon, but somehow Asahi and Akashe are on the same wavelength.
- Asahi's name definitely wasn't inspired by some anime about volleyball... Not at all~
- Braviary is my fav Pokemon in this generation, so they just had to appear here. I'm a big fan of eagels, especially harpies, so I just fell in love with them...
- In next part we'll finally get out of the woods and reach Castelia!

And now, please excuse me, since it's 3 a.m I'm gonna do the flop.
 



First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/da0c2zl
Next -> fav.me/daam0o2

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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:iconkdarrell:
Kdarrell Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Excited for more pages <3
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, working on it ;D
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:iconkdarrell:
Kdarrell Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yesh
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shoto94 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016
Okay so I just discovered this story and decided to binge read it (not that something like that take long lol) and I must say I'm quite impressed...

You just earned yourself a new watcher/follower and Khail has earned a new fangirl...
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay, thank you so much!

Welcome on board then! Glad to have you with us~
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are these bandits more like the bandits from Tangled, or is that just Asahi? Seriously, I knew I was gonna like this guy when he started crying like ten seconds after reuniting with Khail XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nope, it's just Asahi, and only for now, don't worry xD
I think he chose a wrong path in life, haha.
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, what would he do if he wasn't a bandit? XD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not sure, but I believe he would make a quite nice nursery ;D
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:icontembelizor:
tembelizor Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016
I kind of see him as a Baker xD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, that would suit him quite well xD
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Raycchan Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want Asahi to be in the story more. Just for his interactions with Akashe :'D 
also, these bandits be hardcore
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, he'll stay with us at least for Castelia : P
Yay, people like bandits~ :dummy:
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner May 18, 2016
The gentle look of braviary! :D Yep, they are my fav too! Along with Zekrom.
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh yeah! :iconepichighfiveplz:
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner May 18, 2016
Asahi and Akashe are what we call "bros" even if they can't understand verbally they understand through the body language known as "posing"
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Riki Kengo Masato (We're Bros) [V3] 
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PK-Bubbles Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man, sometimes it's hard to remember that this is a Pokemon comic ;D
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah, sometimes even I forget about it ; P
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AyaHatsuharu Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HAIKYUUUU ASAHIIII ! Izuku Excited Icon 
Please, Anta-kun.. don't kill one of those three.. Bungou stray dog 
I really love them, right now.. They all are so funny. Chika Smirk Icon 
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Asahi Grin Icon

Killing them? Me? Naaaah-ahahaa, w-why would I even do that, my friend? Onionhead Tea - Onion head
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AyaHatsuharu Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAAASSS, ASAHIIIII. Icon 14 - Mao Amatsuka 
I dunno.. huh.. May.. maybe that I feel like.. you will..? Haruta Pout Icon 
But if you won't.. huh.. sorry, huney, MY BAAAAD.. :runs away: Nico Sad Icon 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm innocent, I swear~
For now...
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:iconayahatsuharu:
AyaHatsuharu Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NAAAAAW. ;D;
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Student Writer
Is it bad that I expected the bandits to act worse than how you've portrayed them? They're a pretty interesting crew for a bunch of jerks! :XD: And now we finally have an idea of Khail's goal in the story (although I'm sure it's going to get tangled up in a huge mess soon).
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Antarija Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, those are just their happy moments, let them have some fun before burning down innocents ;]

Nothing can be too easy~
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner May 19, 2016  Student Writer
:XD:
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Hugo93F Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So, real talk. Braviary is my favorite Flying type. Seeing it drawn in your style made me fall deeper in love with them. Thank you, i'd tip my fedora in your particular direction... But i wear no fedoras XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, thanks! We, Braviary fans, shall unite! :dummy:
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Velink Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist
Hmm, new chars! since I didn't see your doodles yet, this is my first time seeing them,
\they look good,
waay fitting fora band of bandit, heheh
now I am just wandering who is Mrs. Ishihara and the 'red dawg'
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, thank you, glad you think so! : D

Hopefuly some interesting people~
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DMKryl Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
I read the description first and I thought he was going to kill one of them in a rage outburst :V
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, come on, he's not that bad xD
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DrillBoysGirl Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
I want someone to use a Braviary in a Nuzlocke! I know it's probably a long shot, but I love them so much and I have never seen someone use one.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's exactly why I wanted to put them here. They appear so far away in the game, it's a a shame...
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DrillBoysGirl Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
It is! There are so many cool or interesting Pokemon I'd love to use on my team, but by the time I get to them...I've already got a dynamic going or it's the after game.
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rasaxe Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
Love the Braviarys! They are so fucking big! I feel like traveling to Mordor :)....
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We shall first send a moth to lady Galadriela! ;D
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rasaxe Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2016
This comment has been deleted... by me...
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:iconrasaxe:
rasaxe Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
This was meant for the Nuzlocke Doodles!!
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:iconrasaxe:
rasaxe Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
Children! Look at this instead!
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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Chiyuuhi Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist
I like the character concepts on this page :D
EVERYBODY FLOP
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, so glad to hear that! : D

Everybody do the flop~!
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The-Doctor-Kami Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
errebody do the flop!
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Raptor Mascot Flop 
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:icongrazyfish:
Grazyfish Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
hmmmmm...

*looks at asahi

*looks at haikyuu members

HMMMMMMMMMM...

Great chapter!!! XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
B-Believe it or no, but he got that name only because when I've designed him and his personality and was thinking about a name for him for a long time, this tought struck me: "Wait, I know another bulky gentle giant~" xD and of course he's my fav character of these series~

Thanks! ;D
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TheBookwormMaddy Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
damn how he get those scars?? 
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A tough bandit's life, that's how.
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