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The Untold - part 22 by Antarija The Untold - part 22 by Antarija
So it really happened. Almost no Khail in this part. Almost no Pokemon. So it is possible after all...

I'm afraid I overdid the horses again. If someone finds it annoying then you have my apologies, but this is my only chance to draw them nowadays, so I have no regrets! :dummy:
Also I've been too tired to think sounds in english, so here have some polish onomatopoeias for a horse :V

Regarding Team Plasma in this story - not all of them will be "the bad ones". You know, their knightish design made me think to give them something more to do in this realm. So they are... some kind of watchmen, patrolling the roads and cities. The only military unit Unova has (except the Trainers that might make for a small army themselves  ; P)

Eh, I think I'll have to make an update with some explanations one day. It's getting a bit complicated and I'd rather avoid giving too many text walls in a comic 'couse it would be really boring, I think :/

And with all those said I have a small favour to ask of you . Call it a contest if you'd like.
You saw that Plasma captain, right? I think he's gonna appear in the story from time to time. The thing is, he has no name yet and I really can't come up with anything good enough.
So let's play the "name the Team Plasma's Captain"! : D
I'm a bit picky when it comes to names (usually) so it might be a bit hard to satisfy my strange tastes, but if you manage to do so you'll be rewarded - with a drawing of your character (or sth else, your choice).
So help, pretty please? Neko Emoji-27 (Being kawaii) [V2] 

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Ok, thank you all for participating in this little game!
After all this time, I've finally made my mind.  The winner is :iconlamentedguide:!
The Captain's name will be Kaden :D

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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
YES ROGENROLA <3 all hail the cute baby rock! <3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
An unloved cute baby rock xD
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BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017
he deserves more love

love him plz :3
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2016
PONIES!!!!! they're so well drawn!!!!! u could do a whole page just of people on horses and i wouldn't complain!!!! ☺️☺️☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!

Haha, be careful what you wsh for~
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016
PLEASE!!!! your ponies r amazing!!!!
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
THAT'S A NICE DOODLE OF A HORSE.
SO, IN YOUR COMIC, THERE IS ANOTHER PLASMA TEAM THAT ACTUALLY ARE GOOD GUYS?
YOU KNOW WHAT? YOUR THE 1st NUZLOCKE TRAINER I'VE SEEN THAT DOESN´T CATCH A WOOBAT IN THAT CAVE
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ^^"
Well... Sorry, but I can't really answer that question - spoilers ahead.

D-Don't even remind me... TT^TT
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015
SORRY
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ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist
Well, someone's dissapointed he didn't get a zubat. Must be the only person in the world.

Also, Cheren? You're going up in my esteem. You're welcome.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True xD

Aha!
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demiveemon Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Arden o.o No clue if it fits, but that name just popped into my mind. xD

Keep p the good comic and don't worry too much. You're horses look great and they give a sense of a bigger world, since they enable the characters to cover greater distances in little time.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm, not that it's a bad name just...  a bit too familiar in my kind of work ;P (both a horse breed and a famous producent of harnesses around here)

Thank you so much! : D
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demiveemon Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So, did you decide on a name yet? :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, yes. It's in the description :) The captain's name is Kaden.
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demiveemon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I like that name. <3
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Kirsui Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Professional General Artist
I love that horsie doodle in the end. xDDD

And the story is definitely getting more interesting. :3 
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay for the horsie doodle! ;D
Thank you! Hopefully there will be more plot soon ; )
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LugiaLuna Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What do ya mean?
Overdone horses are awesome!
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:dummy:
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Edited May 26, 2015
So Team Plasma is about as well organized and coordinated as the KGB. Constant internal power struggles, hardliners against normal guys, yeah this is a good organization.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd rather say, they're more like a normal police ;P
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
Well when I think of fuck ups, who couldn't run a tractor, let alone a government. My first thought turns to Communism, and more specifically the Soviet Union. So yeah, Team Plasma are a bunch of fuck ups like every other evil Pokemon organization, so you can see how I connected the dots. XD
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, nadchodzi czas Kamulca! :dummy:
Te konie. Powiedzieć, że je faworyzujesz to jak nic nie powiedzieć! XD
Hmmm, imię imię imię... Trevor? Andreas? Luca? Dantalion?
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, nie tak szybko... Trochę zwlekałam zanim wzięłam go do teama, jak pamiętasz :P
 Ale zbliża się.
Jestem wyznawcą wielkiego boga Konisia! Nie ma lepszego! Wszyscy winni oddawać mu wieczną cześć! La worship
Z tymi dwoma ostatnimi to aż mogę zobrazować inspirację xD
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
To nie Niewidzialnego Różowego Jednorożca? :P
Orly? Luca to mi się już kojarzy z moim Blastoisem z Pkmn Y, a ty co myślałaś? ;]
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jakże czcić mam piękno konisia, jeśli koniś niewidzialnym jest? Toż to się nie godzi! Koniś ma lśnić w glorii i chwale swego piękna i wspaniałości! (że, co, że ja niby brzmię jak fanatyk? Ja?!... Może troszkę ;D)

Luca chyba był z Arcana Famiglia i to wtedy miałaś największą fazę na to imię ;P
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Tożto dylemat jednorożco-wyznawców...

Aha, prawda, od tamtej pory zawsze miałam w każdym nuzlocku Lucę, Pace i Debito, bo mi się imiona spodobały XD Ale każde imię kojarzę z tylko jednym słusznym pokiem!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A żebyś wiedziała! D:

No widzisz. Ja już bardziej pamiętam twe inspiracje niż ty ;D
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Emilianite Featured By Owner May 26, 2015   General Artist
"Caleb" was the first name to come to my mind when I looked at him!
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds nice : D
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pvcm Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
He looks like a "Maximus" to me.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmm... I'm not sure. It sounds a bit too... cartoonish (said the author of a comic xD)
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pvcm Featured By Owner May 26, 2015
I am a dummy! 
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OfAngelsAndDragons Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
I can't help but think Erasmus.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The European system of student exchange? D:
I know it must have other meaning but... This one is too strong in my mind xD
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MysticD Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
lol, you added an extra P in the word "Happend"
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oops, my bad ^^"
Thanks!
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Alseida Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist
Ciekawy pomysł z tym, że TP nie są źli-źli, podoba mi się. Patataje są zacne (patykowy koń na końcu też :d). Z imieniem ci raczej nie pomogę...ja zazwyczaj wybieram drogą losowania, aż mi się jakieś spodoba .-.
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A, dziękuję, dziękuję :) Bo w sumie ichne cele są całkiem rozsądne, powiedzmy. Przynajmniej początkowo. Gorzej z wdrażaniem w życie :/
Haha, dzięki! Chyba pierwszy raz rysowałam takiego patyczaka ;D

Też tak często robiłam. Spisywałam dziesięć tysięcy wersji, które "mogły być" a potem łaziłam myśląc, aż w końcu któreś przerabiałam tak, żeby mi odpowiadało. Koniec końców okazywało się mało pomocne w moim przypadku... ^^'
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MamaWicked Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Professional Artist
i dont now what's best. the coloring or the fact that there are other animals besides pokemon.

*pets the horses*
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 I'd go for the animals *pets horses as well*


Thank you! ^^
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MamaWicked Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Professional Artist
most welcome 8D
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man, this is an awesome Memorial Day, all my favorite nuzlockes have new pages!

A name contest, oooh yes, I love coming up with cool names! Let's see here:

1) If you wanna go the honorable knight route, you could go with Varick - it's German for "honorable defender."

2) Duncan is an interesting Irish name, it derives from Donnchadh, which means "brown warrior" (it also has MANY variants, if you like the meaning but not the suggested name).

3) Although this guy's personality doesn't match the name, Lothair is a name I personally like for knight characters. It's a variant of the Latin name Lotharius, which means "loud warrior."

Now, I might be cheating for suggesting three names. If that's the case, consider Varick as my official suggestion, it's my favorite of the three :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah, I'm glad that you're glad! :dummy:

Sorry, but when I hear "Varick" only a certain dwarf from Dragon Age comes to my mind... I know it's written in different way, but in my language it doesn't really matter... ^^"
Duncan is the name I love and because of that I've told myself I'll stop using it, because half of the characters in my novels had that name xD
As for Lothair... It's not bad, but it's a bit... Ehm.. Stiff? Is that the right word? I don't know...

Sorry, but I've warned you I am picky ^^'. I often can sit for many hours (or days even..) before I finally name a character. My siblings know it too well. Every time I've created a new character in a MMO they wanted to kill me for just sitting there and thinking xD

And don't worry, There's no limit. If you have something more, I'd like to know! : D
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Picky, eh? :iconchallengeacceptedplz: Alright! let's throw names around until we see what sticks:

1) Caden / Kaden = English for "little battle"
2) Bryant = Celtic for "strong, honorable" (Brian comes from this)
3) Wyatt = English for "hardy warrior"
4) Laurent = French for "from Laurentum" (kinda has a knight-ish sound to it)
5) Teague = Greek for "honor"
6) Sigmund = German/Norse for "victory, proctector." Sigmund was the father of the dragon slayer Sigurd/Sigfried from Norse mythology.
7) Donovan = Gaelic variant of Donnchadh (i.e. variant of Duncan), meaning "brown warrior"
8) Hector = Gaelic for "brown horse." Also the name of a warrior from Greek mythology
9) Ulysses = Variant of Greek name Odysseus, from Greek mythology
10) Percival = a knight of the Round Table


I know what you mean about getting hung up on getting the perfect name. Hopefully these names give a lot to think about :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, oh! Caden/Kaden sounds great! : D
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, drawing horses is fun but they do look quite out of place in the Pokemon world :XD:

the last three panels were perfect :XD:
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Antarija Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Horses are perfect creatures, there's no way for them to look out of place in any world. All hail the horsesss La worship

Ok, there might be some exceptions...

Hahah, glad to hear that ;D
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