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The Untold- part 13 by Antarija The Untold- part 13 by Antarija
Welcome to the next part of "Teach me Mr. Trainer!" series known also as "Teach me, Khail-sensei!" : D

Sorry for the tons of reading, but I need to explain some things about this universe from time to time so sometimes there's  just no way to avoid the text-walls. I just hope I didn't mess it up ^^"

The grumpy cat is grumpy


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:iconthe-white-spirits:
The-White-Spirits Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
He's smart....and hot XDDD
Sorry couldn't help it! he's a very handsome oc 
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I bet he's glad you think so ;]
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:iconthe-white-spirits:
The-White-Spirits Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I couldn't resist too tempting
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:iconrojoynaranja:
ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
POOR AKASHE & DEIL
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Their sacrifice will be remembered!
Or not...
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:icondokomanari:
Dokomanari Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Whoooa hello I just realized this guy is from an actual comic you made! I thought he was a random OC but now I'm obsessed. xD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, his ego was so big he needed a whole comic for himself ;D
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:icondokomanari:
Dokomanari Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
He has the right to have a big ego! He's great. He definitely deserved his own comic. ;3

(my oscar deserves a comic too but that might be a long time from now whoops)
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:iconshigukun:
ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist
Ooooooooooooooooooooh, nice take on the Pokemon universe, I really like that idea ! :)
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! Glad to hear that ^^
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KillerSandy Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Purple Grumpy Cat. XD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Edited Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed ;D
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:iconjenniej92:
Jenniej92 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome page
love that theory!
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! Glad to hear that ^^
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wprowadziłaś tyle zmian do tego świata, że teraz musisz się gęsto tłumaczyć :P Ale jak dla mnie ma to ręce i nogi.

A mały arcik na końcu jest pięknym podsumowaniem! XD
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A to dopiero początek! D:

Chłe, chłe, chłe ;]
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Velink Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist
hmm interesting insight on how pokemon works in this story
Grusnoid, provides some question that i would want to know the answers too!
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Hope my answers will satisfy you  ;)
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Velink Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist
time to read them
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
I have a few questions.

1. Does aura dictate mana, and vise versa?
2. Is aura a locked trait? In other words, can you increase your aura?
3. How important is aura?
4. Since life force feeds Pokemon sanity, does that mean Khail's team is leaching off of his life force?
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uh-oh. I'm doomed, it's hard questiones time, nooo! :iconnoeswooplz:
Ok, I'll try to answer... But it's gonna be rather long. Prepare yourself.

1. The amount of mana accumulated in Trainer's/Summoner's body is shown by their aura (only those with magical abilities can see it). But the more experienced ones  can see not only the current mana rate but also the max capacity of it (more like knowing, not seeing? I don't know how to name that feeling). Does it... make any sense? Argh, I'm no good at that! D:

2. You can't cross the max limit of your aura, but it takes some time before you reach it- so during that time- yes, you can increase it. You know, it's like in the training - you can improve a lot but there's always a point when you reach the limits of your body/mind etc. and no matter how hard you try you won't be able to make a single step beyond that point.
So to answer your question.. in one way it's locked because you can't  cross it's borders, but at the same time it changes during ones life. Sometimes one won't ever even reach their max aura. And if a Trainer/Summoner use a part of their mana the aura atomatically grows weaker.

3. You can tell your opponents strenght. The bare strenght, at least. The stronger tha Trainer is the stronger aura he has which means he has more mana -> his Pokemon are stronger as well as their attacks, and he can refill his mana faster (can take more of it at once).
 
4. Yeah, it means exactly that. Keeping them all out drain his energy - everything beyond that is a spoiler, sorry :P
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
Well I was trying to learn more about the magic system you set up, while trying to keep it easy on you. I guess I kinda failed on the keep it easy part. Sorry about that.

1. Let me try to understand this. So reading the aura, tells how much mana one has, and how fast their mana regenerates. Is that correct?

2. Well the reason I asked, is your universe could have a cast system based on aura and mana. Meaning it's a dice roll as to wether or not you're born with this ability or not. That could also mean that those with large aura and mana could create an aristocracy, or more likely, a despotism. As the old saying goes, absolute power corrupts absolutely. Therefore a group, or even an individual could appoint themselves as the nations leadership based on the fact that they are the strongest, and no one can oppose them based on that fact. That's actually pretty terrifying. 

3. And that feeds into my fears with question 2.

4.I guess the question would be, is this killing Khail faster?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
1. Yup. You know, the part about regenerating is a bit like in running - you tell a man with no condition to run 100 m and not only he's gonna be painfully slow, he will also be dying for next few days. You tell a pro-runner to run 10 km and he'll be fine one hour later and ready for the next challenge. Stronger ones are both strong and fast at recovering energy.

2. Let's say it depends on the natural predispositions and willpower. Trainers are a kind of the highly respected class in society. And to some point it's like you've said - the Guild rules this world and Champion rules the Guild, along with Guild Leaders. I will explain it in some time because it's quite complicated.

4. Sorry, but I'm not the fan of reading the end of the book to see if it's worth reading. I'd like people to think about the plot and what could or could not happen in the future/past of that story and take their own guesses instead of giving them a straight answers right away. Maybe I'll disappoint someone with my ways of doing things in the end, but well... Then you'll have all the right to complain to me! :dummy:
So I'm sorry, I'm not answering that question :P


Anyway, I'm glad I managed to interest you so much in my world ^^.
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
1. Yay I got it right. :)

2. I had my own interpretation, but my tablet geeked, and now I'll just let you fill it in.

4. I'm glad you didn't disappoint. I never expected you to answer that question. XD

I had to. You put time, effort, and thought into this. The least I can do as a member of the audience, is take an interest in what you have created. So keep making it, and I'll keep reading it.
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:iconraycchan:
Raycchan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Khail sensei should wear glasses more often :V
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah, but he probably just stole it from someone. Maybe from Granny?
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:iconraycchan:
Raycchan Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure granny won't mind~
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:iconzonnybrown:
ZonnyBrown Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Khail you're a nerd
NEEEEEEEEEEEERD! 8V
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
N-Nerd?! :iconshockplz:
It-It's a basic knowledge, you know!There's nothing nerdish in that! E-Everyone should know that much! Right?
Right?! :iconawkwardplz:
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:iconzonnybrown:
ZonnyBrown Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*cough*nerd*cough*
But in the pretty cool way Big Hero 6 Baymax (There There) 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongivingupplz:
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:iconrojoynaranja:
ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
NERD
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:iconzonnybrown:
ZonnyBrown Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Big Hero 6 Baymax (There There) 
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TimeturnerJasmy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Best Granny ever :3
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;D
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:iconthebookwormmaddy:
TheBookwormMaddy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
lmao, had a good giggle at the little bottom sketch :P
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heheh, glad to hear that ;]
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wildCorvus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
You sure this is a purrloin and not a snubbul? :D
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:iconantarija:
Antarija Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm, now that you mentioned it... Maybe it's just a costume?! :iconshockplz:
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:iconwildcorvus:
wildCorvus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
What? 
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