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I am sure that somewhere, in a computer game or a fantasy novel, this title has already found another use...
*edit: I have followed the suggestions received in some comments and made some minor changes. I hope it's slightly better now
*edit: I have followed the suggestions received in some comments and made some minor changes. I hope it's slightly better now

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Wow, really nice work! I love the colours you used and the atmosphere is so peaceful and calmful while the subject... is not 
The only thing I'd like to critique is that her legs look a bit wonky. The one in the front has an odd shape, a bit like a pear. I think her butt should be higher up and the top of the leg should be slightly convex. I could be wrong now, just something that looked off. The other leg seems to be attached to the body at a weird place. If I imagine where it is behind the leg in the front, it emerges somewhere at her chest
In this position, her thig should rest on her calf and the butt should rest on the heel. Of course this would give her a more rested pose and I'm not sure whether you want that. Maybe moving the rest of her body upwards instead would work better? 
Anyways, it's a great piece of art, I'm especially in awe by the translucent cloth and the organ pipes - very well done!!

The only thing I'd like to critique is that her legs look a bit wonky. The one in the front has an odd shape, a bit like a pear. I think her butt should be higher up and the top of the leg should be slightly convex. I could be wrong now, just something that looked off. The other leg seems to be attached to the body at a weird place. If I imagine where it is behind the leg in the front, it emerges somewhere at her chest


Anyways, it's a great piece of art, I'm especially in awe by the translucent cloth and the organ pipes - very well done!!

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