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Ehhhh........ not happy with her face...and all... :iconsobcryplz:

Mostly done to practice clothes, i suck at them as well as hands and feet... Help me do better, please... :icontardplz:

/Update: tried making the eyes more narrow.. better?
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Critique by akarra Mar 17, 2012, 1:56:24 AM
It's a lovely, elegant portrait. You might not be happy with it, but there's a lot going for it. Use of color is excellent. Lots of reds, browns and a slightly darker flesh tone give this a warm feeling and a look that is more bold than a muted palette. The folds of the slinky summery dress look beautifully stylized on the lower right of her. The green of the dress, the red of the hair, the blue of the eyes really stand out. Your creation is exceptionally fashionable and in a solid pose. Thank you for sharing your talents!
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The womans body has been worked out with good Detail. But there are some parts, where some flatness apears.
Some adjustments to the dressdecor would do some good. Compared to the details of the wrinkles, the decor somehow apears a little bit flat. Maybe some roundness would bring some life to them. Also the part where the dress goes down the arm seems too flat. I think the light of the arm should be there a bit stronger to take away the flatness.
Another part is at the nose, mouth and chin. I think they would need some more detail. The shadow that connects the toes to the right foot may be a little bit too strong. I think that's why at first sight I thought it was the bottom of the toes. Maybe the image is just to small too and everything is fine on a lager version.
In my opinion the colors are well chosen and I like the little glittery border on the bottom of the dress.
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Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really lovely, i love her hair and dress the most, great job
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you so much!
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:iconprincess-coco-154:
Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem sweetie!^u^
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:iconvidma-chan:
Vidma-chan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cat de frumoasa poate sa fie!!!OoO
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Digital Artist
multumesc <3
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:iconvidma-chan:
Vidma-chan Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pentru putin!^^
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:iconamy-sun:
Amy-Sun Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome!!!
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GrimmSouls Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The hair and colour usage is exquisite. As for the hand and feet study, you're skill and talent is clear however some practice is needed; for example with the hand it looks a little out of proportion and the heals of the feet are a little too round. Despite that this is an overall good piece and the anatomy is overall amazing :) Also; the face is a little out of position however the direction she is facing is very difficult to draw coming from my experience >.< I hope this helped a little anyway :) keep up the great work! <3
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Digital Artist
it helps, thank you so much <3
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:icontsub-chan:
Tsub-chan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wwoo good job *-* i like the coloring, shading its pretty nice ^^
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you so much <3
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:iconbubbiies:
bubbIies Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, really nice job! I love the clothing. :D The shading looks fantastic in this, and I love the detail, especially in the hair! :D
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DButterfly1969 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
the pose is very natural. and i love the detailed shadows on the dress and the hair looks amazing. you are right with the eye's, you could work some more on them, but the picture is great anyway!
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you so much! i'm happy you like it ^__^
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:iconsnusy:
Snusy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
very pretty ^^
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you ^__^
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:iconyumi71:
yumi71 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job! :iconilavplz:
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thanks so much <3
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:iconilda28399:
Ilda28399 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the way you made her clothes! :) i like your hands and feet but i would have preferred more details in the decoirs of the clothes
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you <3 yup, i wanted more details too but my head was blank at the time xD
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:iconilda28399:
Ilda28399 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahah lol :)
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
it happens XD
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:iconilda28399:
Ilda28399 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah to me frequently
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:iconliieszz:
Liieszz Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
The folds in the dress are amazing, also goodjob on the anatomy : ) :clap:
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you, i'm glad you like them <3 i loved blending those :)
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NTSD-Applejuice Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! I can see that you're still practicing on the feet, but it already looks good.
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Digital Artist
thanks so much <3 yup, still practicing :)
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:iconprinz59:
prinz59 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist
its cute and nicely done. but im not so happy with the background. you tried to put a gradient?
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks. i didn't want a background, just a soft gradient that had a color to make the girl's colors pop out more and still be warm. i tried all sorts of colors, this was the one i kinda felt suited it. the focus of the practice was the character, there was no background in play from the beginning :)
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SinfulHime Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
I like the shading ! and the hair ~
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you <3
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sweetenedvodka Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm really liking the hair!
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks <3
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:iconcatstudio7:
Catstudio7 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it!:D
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks <3
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Catstudio7 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome:hug:
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:iconamy-sun:
Amy-Sun Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
very awesome. i love the shading and all the details. :heart:
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:iconlaciel:
LaCiel Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   General Artist
no worries :) u did a good job :)
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you so much ^__^
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:iconlaciel:
LaCiel Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   General Artist
you're welcome ^^
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CinematicScene Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student
Amazing!
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you <3
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:iconkatry:
KaTrY Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not bad. Good work, but maybe her face can be improved.
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
For sure. Thank you for the feedback :)
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:iconcj-backman:
CJ-Backman Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think its very well done! A little work on the angle of her face and how the clothes fold, but I really like it :) especially how the colors of her skin turned out :) Keep up the good work :D
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you <3 i will not make the face mistake again :) i'm very glad you liked it <333
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:iconcj-backman:
CJ-Backman Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you're very welcome! :)
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:iconreynagroff:
reynagroff Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice work! Keep practicing and it'll look even better. ;)
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
i will, thank you <3
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Linked-Memories Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
Such a beautiful drawing, love the coloring
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