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The Murderer's Daughter Chapter 6: Weak

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Published: June 24, 2014
"Yes... You better." Now spoke the other guy, with the bodyguards. He spoke like a sophisticated, upper class man, carefully pronouncing each syllable so they would come out as he intended them to: uncaring and cold. His accent was a hybrid of English and German.

And with that, he disappeared. No, he didn't walk out, he just... Faded away. So did the guards.

I rushed out and threw myself on the floor next to him. "D-Dad, w-what just happened?!"

His voice came out raspy, as if he were having difficulty breathing. "Y-you saw that..?" He murmured something inaudible, and then continued: "That guy... I work for him. I have been for a really long time... Basically, he wants me to make something... Someone?... For him..."

"Y-You don't have to make something for him... Don't you have a few dozens of premade... Things... Down in the basement, the one below the lab?"

"No no, those ones, they're... special. They stay in the basement."

"Well... There's me."

"W-what..."

"Give me to him."

"You're... weak... And disobedient. And talkative. He needs someone strong, and quiet. Like his bodyguards. Except... Not as ridiculous-looking."

It sounded like he was lying, but I had to let him go. He had an important assignment due tomorrow, and he seemed tired. It would be stupid to tire him even more.

So I backed away, back to the dark and gloomy hallway, where Blank was.

"Hey, great job distracting him! I managed to nick a victim!"

"Wait... What?!"

"Remember those big, creepy machines in my room? I'm gonna show you what they do!"

Before I could object, Blank had dragged me into the room and sat me down in a chair. I had no choice but to watch the demonstration.
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I really need to get better with these updates... But yes, new chapter!

Who is this mysterious guy with the English-German accent? What's in the basement?! And when will the next chapter be out? Tune in next week/month/year to (not) find out!
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TheStoryHunter|Student General Artist
Woa, so many thing... so many question in the story could be asked! Can't wait for more... but don't want to rush you ^_^ I thought about writing a critique, but there aren't so many I can say. So far, you did a good job! The only thing I want to say is... character description, I guess. To be honest, I didn't sure they're anthro (?) character until previous chapter...
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu|Hobbyist General Artist
They're not anthro, they're full animals... And I agree, that's a major problem in my writing. I think it's because I usually write with humans, but my friend, and the creator of Redo really wanted to keep him as a wolf... And that's why they're animals :/ my brain always thinks I'm writing humans, so sometimes I get the words 'paw' and 'hand' in the same paragraph, and so on. 

I'm glad people are still reading this, I thought my audience had died out due to not updating in forever. Currently, I need to stop focusing on this project and derp around with other stuff, cause it (this project) seems to drain my 'creative juices' (god, that sounds really dirty).. But I will write more!! I just need a little hiatus...
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TheStoryHunter|Student General Artist
I see ^_^ well, the way out will be to practice more. Well, of course I'm still reading, it just so interesting! :la: Take your time~
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GrinReaperX|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job!
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