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"Yes... You better." Now spoke the other guy, with the bodyguards. He spoke like a sophisticated, upper class man, carefully pronouncing each syllable so they would come out as he intended them to: uncaring and cold. His accent was a hybrid of English and German.

And with that, he disappeared. No, he didn't walk out, he just... Faded away. So did the guards.

I rushed out and threw myself on the floor next to him. "D-Dad, w-what just happened?!"

His voice came out raspy, as if he were having difficulty breathing. "Y-you saw that..?" He murmured something inaudible, and then continued: "That guy... I work for him. I have been for a really long time... Basically, he wants me to make something... Someone?... For him..."

"Y-You don't have to make something for him... Don't you have a few dozens of premade... Things... Down in the basement, the one below the lab?"

"No no, those ones, they're... special. They stay in the basement."

"Well... There's me."

"W-what..."

"Give me to him."

"You're... weak... And disobedient. And talkative. He needs someone strong, and quiet. Like his bodyguards. Except... Not as ridiculous-looking."

It sounded like he was lying, but I had to let him go. He had an important assignment due tomorrow, and he seemed tired. It would be stupid to tire him even more.

So I backed away, back to the dark and gloomy hallway, where Blank was.

"Hey, great job distracting him! I managed to nick a victim!"

"Wait... What?!"

"Remember those big, creepy machines in my room? I'm gonna show you what they do!"

Before I could object, Blank had dragged me into the room and sat me down in a chair. I had no choice but to watch the demonstration.
I really need to get better with these updates... But yes, new chapter!

Who is this mysterious guy with the English-German accent? What's in the basement?! And when will the next chapter be out? Tune in next week/month/year to (not) find out!
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Woa, so many thing... so many question in the story could be asked! Can't wait for more... but don't want to rush you ^_^ I thought about writing a critique, but there aren't so many I can say. So far, you did a good job! The only thing I want to say is... character description, I guess. To be honest, I didn't sure they're anthro (?) character until previous chapter...
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They're not anthro, they're full animals... And I agree, that's a major problem in my writing. I think it's because I usually write with humans, but my friend, and the creator of Redo really wanted to keep him as a wolf... And that's why they're animals :/ my brain always thinks I'm writing humans, so sometimes I get the words 'paw' and 'hand' in the same paragraph, and so on. 

I'm glad people are still reading this, I thought my audience had died out due to not updating in forever. Currently, I need to stop focusing on this project and derp around with other stuff, cause it (this project) seems to drain my 'creative juices' (god, that sounds really dirty).. But I will write more!! I just need a little hiatus...
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student General Artist
I see ^_^ well, the way out will be to practice more. Well, of course I'm still reading, it just so interesting! :la: Take your time~
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GrinReaperX Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job!
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