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"Town? What's Town?!" I asked.

"It's a magical place where OCs live together in harmony!"

The suggestion sounded really fun. More people to meet and a much more interesting backdrop were both very appealing to me, at the time.

"TO TOWN!!" I shouted joyfully, as Blank led me to one of his torture equipment. He grabbed the black hoodie lying on it, and then pushed the machine out of our way to reveal a whole in the wall.

"This passage leads straight to the town, but you'll have to put this on, because the OC's are unaware that a monster lives in the woods next to the town." He was, of course, talking about Redo, whom I'd do anything for back then.

"Redo's not a monster! He's my dad!" I snapped.

Blank chuckled and looked at me like I was an idiot. "He doesn't even want to keep you around."

"That's not true!!"

"It is so!!"

"No it's not!!!"

I think Blank decided that arguing with me was a bad idea, because he changed the subject. "C'mon, then, let's go to town..."

I put on the black hoodie he gave me, and ran through the tunnel. When I got out of it, I was at the edge of the forest, with old houses visible in the distance. Blank took longer to catch up to me.

"Is that town?"

"Yep, that's the town."

I finally finished writing the 4th chapter!! Sorry it's so short, but I have an announcement! Currently, I have three books of Past Mistakes planned, and I've decided to reveal the titles: The first book is Past Mistakes (duh), the second is Epic Fail and the third is "Dusk Awakens"! There might be more, depending on when BlueInkWolf and I end the rp.
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nyqueent Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
I'm excited about town and the promise of more. If you ever want more OCs, I have plenty. 
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BlueInkWolf Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Put Canis in there, and ummm, Sketch.....  And ummmm....  Everyone that isn't 600 years old.
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD K 
like everyone who was at that one picnic place?
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oichidan Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
To TOWN!!!!

Can my OC slip inside here? :D
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, just describe them to me and I'll add them!! :D
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oichidan Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll send you a note when I'm ready XD
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, thanks!! :D
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oichidan Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah!! :thumbsup:
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
I read it! O~ I can't wait to get to the town... I can slip my own OCs in the scenery, da? :dummy:
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Yep! There are unmentioned OC's everywhere, and I'd love to actually reference some OC's! Maybe leave a description or picture or them??
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Yay~ :dummy: My first OC, just look left to this comment :D
1. Ellyza, blond, glasses, and all... she usually wear a turtleneck sweater, sometime even added with a weird but simple looked jacket, and carrying a bag with books inside.
2. Naila, the one that featuring in the epic fanfic I worked on with oichidan~ with veil, long shirt and loose jeans, tanned skin, looked sleepy :D

For Ellyza pics, you can see it in my gallery, but most of them are using tank-top which meant for night attire...
And for Naila pics, raid oichidan gallery. I'm sure he have one folder with many pics in it...

Oh, is it mean we're featuring? :3
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D

It means I'm probably just gonna write descriptions of them while Mistake is walking around and being all "OMG THIS IS HEAVEN" 

and blank knows everyone by name, even if they have no idea who he is, cause blank pretty much stalks everyone ( lol) so I might even mention names.
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks for willing to put in my girls too~ :dummy: I can't wait to read how it'll turn out to be~ :3

Blank is a stalker?! :o gonna becareful~ :D
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D no problem!! (i'm probably gonna plop in my personal ocs, and friends' ocs, too.)

He stalks everyone. EVERY ONE!
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
EVERY ONE...? He must be a guy with a lot of blank schedule... :D
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BlueInkWolf Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Waaaaaaaait....  I forgot why we decided 'Dusk Awakens'...
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cause redo went back to acting more like dusk... And you were like 'dusk awakens lol'
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BlueInkWolf Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
oh, yeah...
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FlyTheFish Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice
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AnnoyerOfDoitsu Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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FlyTheFish Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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