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The Murderer's Daughter Chapter 4: TO TOWN!!

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Published: May 13, 2014

"Town? What's Town?!" I asked.

"It's a magical place where OCs live together in harmony!"

The suggestion sounded really fun. More people to meet and a much more interesting backdrop were both very appealing to me, at the time.

"TO TOWN!!" I shouted joyfully, as Blank led me to one of his torture equipment. He grabbed the black hoodie lying on it, and then pushed the machine out of our way to reveal a whole in the wall.

"This passage leads straight to the town, but you'll have to put this on, because the OC's are unaware that a monster lives in the woods next to the town." He was, of course, talking about Redo, whom I'd do anything for back then.

"Redo's not a monster! He's my dad!" I snapped.

Blank chuckled and looked at me like I was an idiot. "He doesn't even want to keep you around."

"That's not true!!"

"It is so!!"

"No it's not!!!"

I think Blank decided that arguing with me was a bad idea, because he changed the subject. "C'mon, then, let's go to town..."

I put on the black hoodie he gave me, and ran through the tunnel. When I got out of it, I was at the edge of the forest, with old houses visible in the distance. Blank took longer to catch up to me.

"Is that town?"

"Yep, that's the town."

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I finally finished writing the 4th chapter!! Sorry it's so short, but I have an announcement! Currently, I have three books of Past Mistakes planned, and I've decided to reveal the titles: The first book is Past Mistakes (duh), the second is Epic Fail and the third is "Dusk Awakens"! There might be more, depending on when BlueInkWolf and I end the rp.
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I'm excited about town and the promise of more. If you ever want more OCs, I have plenty. 
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Put Canis in there, and ummm, Sketch.....  And ummmm....  Everyone that isn't 600 years old.
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XD K 
like everyone who was at that one picnic place?
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To TOWN!!!!

Can my OC slip inside here? :D
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Yep, just describe them to me and I'll add them!! :D
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I'll send you a note when I'm ready XD
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AnnoyerOfDoitsuHobbyist General Artist
Okay, thanks!! :D
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Yeah!! :thumbsup:
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I read it! O~ I can't wait to get to the town... I can slip my own OCs in the scenery, da? :dummy:
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:D Yep! There are unmentioned OC's everywhere, and I'd love to actually reference some OC's! Maybe leave a description or picture or them??
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Yay~ :dummy: My first OC, just look left to this comment :D
1. Ellyza, blond, glasses, and all... she usually wear a turtleneck sweater, sometime even added with a weird but simple looked jacket, and carrying a bag with books inside.
2. Naila, the one that featuring in the epic fanfic I worked on with oichidan~ with veil, long shirt and loose jeans, tanned skin, looked sleepy :D

For Ellyza pics, you can see it in my gallery, but most of them are using tank-top which meant for night attire...
And for Naila pics, raid oichidan gallery. I'm sure he have one folder with many pics in it...

Oh, is it mean we're featuring? :3
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Thanks! :D

It means I'm probably just gonna write descriptions of them while Mistake is walking around and being all "OMG THIS IS HEAVEN" 

and blank knows everyone by name, even if they have no idea who he is, cause blank pretty much stalks everyone ( lol) so I might even mention names.
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Thanks for willing to put in my girls too~ :dummy: I can't wait to read how it'll turn out to be~ :3

Blank is a stalker?! :o gonna becareful~ :D
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:D no problem!! (i'm probably gonna plop in my personal ocs, and friends' ocs, too.)

He stalks everyone. EVERY ONE!
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EVERY ONE...? He must be a guy with a lot of blank schedule... :D
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Waaaaaaaait....  I forgot why we decided 'Dusk Awakens'...
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Cause redo went back to acting more like dusk... And you were like 'dusk awakens lol'
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Very nice
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Thanks :D
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You're very welcome!
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