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FeatherWeight and Scootaloo Commission

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This was a fun one : D Ive never gotten to Draw Feather Weight befor so it was fun, hes so cute x3 another commission at Brony Fest
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The action of the scene is done well, there's a good sense of motion with the positioning of the characters and the ghosted wings and wisps. The coloration is great, but I would suggest making the shading gradients a bit softer. For example: Featherweight's cheek kind of looks like it has a bit of dirt on it on the ear side of his cheek. The clouds, for a simple background are very nice, and the style of your art is unique and spectacular.

The facial expressions are fitting, and adorable. I would've figured, mentally, that Featherweight (it's Featherweight, I believe, btw) would've been slower. The background is simple, as was ordered. Possibly something more eventful could have happened, but the sky is the sky.

The only other thing I could think to improve/try (at this point) would be figuring out how to have some action in the mane and tail. They're moving fast enough to have wisps in the air, there could possibly be motion there.

Well done, I am looking forward to more business in future! C:
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Oh, and since you do want critique, and you were so kind to make this or me:

The action of the scene is done well, there's a good sense of motion with the positioning of the characters and the ghosted wings and wisps. The coloration is great, but I would suggest making the shading gradients a bit softer. For example: Featherweight's cheek kind of looks like it has a bit of dirt on it on the ear side of his cheek. The clouds, for a simple background are very nice, and the style of your art is unique and spectacular. (I was going to submit this as a critique, and if you get a premium sometime, I'll probably repost it with the ratings so it comes up as such.)

Vision: **** -- You took my simple idea and generated a piece with a great level of integrity.
Originality: *** -- It's kind of unfair to have to rate on originality for fanart. Your style, however is unique and personal.
Technique: ****½ -- Your work foes justice to the characters, and other than the shading issue I mentioned, I find the work flawless.
Impact: ***** (skewed) -- I'll always have a bias for a work I commissioned or requested, I'll always have a bias toward pieces including my two favorite ponies. I can't give a rating other than this.

Overall: **** 1/8 -- I am very appreciative of you taking the time to make this for me, and if I get more cash, and commissions are open, I will probably come back! C:

Thank you thank you thank you! :iconaawplz:
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Thank you very much, yeah now that i look at it, i should make the color richer instead of moving too far down the darken shading, Im glad overall i did well for you, Thank you again~
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Reposting as a critique.
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I'll probably be getting more stuff in the future! XP My parents are going to kill me.
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Awww yeah! I totally have this! ♥ ♥ ♥
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Awesomeness level: OVER TWENTY THOUSAND PERCENT!


Are we doing it right?
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xD lol oh, so Im thinking im really going to go to Rotl, I did rather well at Brony Fest
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