I Am The Message

I looked through your gallery before writing a critique, and I must say, you have some very strong work, but this one seems a little out of place.

The empty space behind her draws both my eye and my mind to it, trying to figure out if there was perhaps a conceptual reason that you included it.

If you had composed the void space out of the frame, we would see a little more of the model, and the way she 'sneaks' out of frame also leads the eye away from the focus of the image.

I gave high marks for vision, as I can see in the image what you were going for, but the empty space and composition draws the eye in too many different directions.

I do like the use of color, the styling and choice of wardrobe, and would love to see more from the series.