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synopsis page for "the fifth columnist". i hope the text's large enough! :)
made with QuarkXPress, the SIS logo is crown copyright. thanks for viewing!
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HenrikeDijkstra's avatar
Sounds like an awesome story!! You said it was a printed comic? So you`re publishing it? Can I get it from somewhere?

I really like the story!!
andie5's avatar
dank je wel...! :) no, it's not a printed comic (not yet!), right now im just making the pages first and perhaps in a month or so im going to find a publisher to see if i can get it published. so everything i've done i'll post on DA first! :D once again thank you! how's the webcomic going? :)
BowLeggedEgo's avatar
oh look at that youve put me under some pressure lol
andie5's avatar
lol don't worry bowleg! i said take your time didn't i? :D

thanks for the crit, i'll keep that in mind :)
HenrikeDijkstra's avatar
I hope you`ll get it published. It`s awesome allready in my eyes! :D
Yay! New stuff on DA!! :lol:

The webcomic is going well. progressing....slowly, but progressing. :D
Changed the script again a bit...still colouring panels, though I want to make some new ones too....less time. :)
andie5's avatar
aww, thank you :hug:

you're always so good with colours, but have you ever thought of making a black and white webcomic? maybe that would make your workload a bit easier? :)
HenrikeDijkstra's avatar
Maybe it would, but I love colours. A webcomic always attracks me more if it`s in colour.
I still want to try out the tones you gave me a link to though. :)
andie5's avatar
yes i guess you're right! and since you have such a nice colouring technique it'll be a waste if you don't use it :)
HenrikeDijkstra's avatar
Well...your idea wasn`t bad either...A comic can be good in black and white (like yours :D ). I guess both have advantages :)
andie5's avatar
true! i want to learn how to colour though! gaaahh... ^^;
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Succubus-Angel's avatar
This is awesome thus far. The only thing I can see that I'd crit on is that the main text is a bit tiny for reading, but that could just be my eyesight. Beautifully done so far, and I want to see more soon!
andie5's avatar
:) yes, i've had reservations about the font size as well. i'll make it even bigger next time for easier reading.

thank you, but actually i have no real understanding of politics so i don't think the story makes complete sense if you see what i mean... it's prone to generalisation as well, for example i divided my "world fronts" based on ideology but in reality, even people with the same ideology can never agree with each other!! ^^ arghhh
Succubus-Angel's avatar
I think it's turning out great thus far. Sometimes the "politics" of such can be a little overbearing, you seem to make it simple and not overly power to where it's nothing but such. A hint here and there helps and I think you've got a wonderful balance ^_^
andie5's avatar
cheers for the comment, hope things can only change for the better :)
Succubus-Angel's avatar
They will! I have faith that you'll continue to go on even more! ^_^
andie5's avatar
and so will you :)
Succubus-Angel's avatar
awww, thank ya! ^_^ :hug:
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BigFatBAby's avatar
very nice work.... looking forward for the upcoming...
andie5's avatar
thank you. any criticism? :)
BigFatBAby's avatar
unfortunatly for me no... :)
nothing wrong about it that i can see...
andie5's avatar
...not even the writing? :) ehehe
BigFatBAby's avatar
hehehe.... if you insist i can still say it's crap :)
but only if you really really insist :)
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