S:da Unfred Audition 1 of 3

Yay! Comics are hard and take a long time, but I'm proud of myself for finishing at least this one page. Two more to come to compete this audition for the Survivor: Deviant Art OC Tournament! For details about the tournament, go here: .

Since this is one of my very few attempts at sequential art, I'm very interested in what everyone thinks about the layout. Does it flow well, is it easy to follow, etc. Plus, what do you think of the lettering and stuff. Not very advanced, I know, but I'd appreciate any advice/pointers anyone has for me!

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Pencils, inks, colors(shoddy though they be), lettering, and story all by me.

Unfred concept, appearance, story, and character all copyright me.