I like it, giving typical throw-away characters like Jade a lot more agency in the story, when she gets to be an actual character who is -utterly- horrified by what just happened.
Omg number 2, I'm dying XD
Not everyday your freaking boss asks you to sleep with her for babies XD
I've said it before, but I love this page a lot. It really sinks in that we are not -only- following the Vilkas/Twilight/Handwing story, but we also witness things connected to it and how it affects the gangsters themselves.
I love that you've given skekSil canines and incisors in their correct place. Makes his jaws look more structured.