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A crowd had gathered at the center of Halloween Town, but for a different reason this time. They were all waiting for Jack to emerge from the coffin sleigh he would be driving.

Of course, Double D was still very nervous about the whole thing. Then he saw Sally make her way through the crowd over to the fountain. He quickly ran over to her, just in time to see Sally pouring something into the fountain water.

“Sally, what’s that?” he asked.

“Fog Juice,” she answered.

“Fog Juice?” Double D repeated. “What does it . . . ”

Just then, a very thick fog began to pour out of the fountain. And at the same time, Jack emerged from the coffin. The crowd cheered. Double D and Sally walked over to where Eddy was standing.

The Mayor began to read a speech for Jack. “Think of us as you soar triumphantly through the sky, outshining every star,” he read. “You who are our pride, you who are our glory. You who have frightened billions to an early grave.”

As the Mayor read, the fog kept pouring from the fountain. And it began to get worse. And more noticeable.

“You who have . . . uh . . . devastated the souls of the living . . . ” the Mayor tried to continue.

“Oh no!” said Jack. “We can’t take off in this! The reindeer can’t see an inch in front of their noses!”

Sally breathed a sigh of relief. Double D smiled. Now he understood! Sally had made the fog so Jack couldn’t take off and go through with his crazy plan!

Eddy, however, had other plans. “Go time!” he whispered to himself.

“Eddy?” asked Double D. But it was too late. Eddy had already disappeared into the fog. That was when Double D remembered Eddy’s original plan. His eyes widened. Could Eddy do it without getting caught?

“There go all my hopes,” said Jack. “My precious plans, my glorious dreams . . . ”

Double D could faintly make out Eddy sneaking into the back of Jack’s sleigh, where the bag of presents was being kept. Nobody else seemed to notice.

Just then, Zero began to bark. His jack o’ lantern nose lit up.

“No Zero,” said Jack, shielding his eyes. “Down, boy. Zero . . . My, what a brilliant nose you have! The better to light my way! To the head of the team, Zero! We’re off!”

“What?” asked Sally.

“What?” asked Double D.

“What?” asked Eddy, slightly peeking out from inside the sack.

Then Jack signaled the reindeer to go, causing the sleigh to lurch forward, sending Eddy toppling over in the back of the sleigh.

“Uh oh . . . ” he mumbled as the sleigh became airborne.

“Wait, Jack!” called Sally. “No!”

“Oh my gosh!” said Double D. “Eddy’s still in that thing!”



But it was too late. The sleigh was soaring over the clouds, away from Halloween Town, with Jack and Eddy in it!

Everyone in Halloween Town cheered. Well, almost everyone . . .

“Good bye, Jack,” said Sally. “My dearest Jack.” She began to walk away from the crowd. “Oh, how I hope my premonition was wrong . . . ”

Double D ran to catch up with Sally before he lost her in the fog. But what could he say to cheer her up?

“Sally, please don’t be sad . . . ” Double D tried, but ended up failing miserably. “Like I can even say that . . . ”

Soon, both of them were so worried about their friends, they started singing. But it wasn’t exactly like the songs they had heard before . . .

Edd: I sense there's something in the wind
That feels like tragedy's at hand
And though I'd like to stand by him
Can't shake this feeling that I have

Sally: The worst is just around the bend
And does he notice my feelings for him?
And will he see how much he means to me?
I think it's not to be

Edd: What will become of our dear friends?
Where will their actions lead us then?
Although I'd like to join the crowd
In their enthusiastic cloud

Sally: Try as I may it doesn't last
And will we ever end up together?
No, I think not, it's never to become
For I am not the one

Sally and Double D sat down on some steps. A nearby cat jumped into Sally’s lap, and she began to stroke it longingly. As she did, Double D looked up at the starry sky. He was not only worried about the consequences of Jack’s actions, but what the Pumpkin King was going to do when he found the extra baggage on his flight . . .
Chapter 10.

Songs featured: Sally's Song featuring Double D.

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10: [link]
Chapter 11: [link]
Chapter 12: [link]
Chapter 13: [link]
Chapter 14: [link]
Chapter 15: [link]
Epilogue: [link]

Ed Edd n Eddy (c) Danny Antonucci
The Nightmare Before Christmas (c) Tim Burton, Henry Selick
one-red-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
i was gonna wait until i finished reading all of it...
but i am having way too much fun.
AMX-269 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010   Writer

Glad you like the story.

“What are ya, some kinda troll or something?”—Eddy, Ed Edd n Eddy

“I reject your reality and substitute my own!”—Adam Savage, Mythbusters

“It’s almost like we knew what we were doing, isn’t it?”—Jamie Hyneman, Mythbusters
sallygal1996 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sally and double d singing?........ I LOVE YOU!!!!!
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