... Is Ami a Mary Sue?
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[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color.
[X] Their eyes are an unusual color. Maroon?
[X] This eye color happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change color.
[ ] They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs. (<---- Lol you know your OC is a Mary sue when...) BEING A FLAT CHEST IS BEST.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyro kinetic//etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[ ] They have lost one//both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.  
[ ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[X] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[X] They are emo//cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[X] They are currently in a relationship. (LOLOL I MADE ANOTHER FANLOID)
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[ ] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[ ] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[X] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga. Does vocaloid count? Probably.
[ ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark. (around people she doesn't know/doesn't knows a lot.)
[X] They are very lively//happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession//power here].
[X] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear.  
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.

Final Score: 8
RESULT:  Balanced Character

< 05 : Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

06-15 : Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 : Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

> 26 : Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now.

YES! And Lol, I knew 8 was my lucky number!
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No, Ami. You are not a Mary Sue. :dummy:
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Thanks! You're nice!
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No problem! Thanks for accepting to being a contributor in the group! :joy:
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