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CRITIQUES PLEASE -- Piki WIP
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Published: August 3, 2013
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So I've finally started to move my attention to some other pairings, and.... I'm crazy about theses mofos on this white wall. XDDD

I need help with some anatomy, like about Miki's other hand around Piko, so a few critiques could be appreciated. Always improving! : D

If you hadn't noticed after looking at the table, my scanner is kinda.... Broken. Well, it's not broken, it just freakin' refuses to connect with the computer... But meh. All's well dat ends well in the end. I hope.
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Awwwhh :D How adorable!!! :D
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Do you like this couple? - v -
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I haven't really thought of it, but I do think they are cute, now having been exposed XP
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You shouldn't think they are cute, they ARE cute.
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THEY ARE CUUTE!!
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY--
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:D :D
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Well I'm a derp.
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Oh yeah and the proportions are off. But mostly too lovey dovey
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Yeah, some people told me about the hands and his neck.

LOL THEN DON'T STARE AT IT
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not staring at it. just pointing that out
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You are able to point it out by staring at it.
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well no, i took a look at it; by the way is that tongue? anyway, the definition of staring is looking at something for a long period of time, i just looked at it for maybe about a second or so, thus no staring.
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAI GAH

NO

NO NO NO

IT'S A CHERRY
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The background is Ai Dee~~~
Such a colorful songgggggg


I'm sorray but what bugs me the most ore teh hands.. ;u; DO NOT TAKE THAT AS A COMPLAINT. 

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AmiMeito-chanStudent Traditional Artist
AH CRAP YOU FOUND OUT

BAD CLOVER

Yeah, I know. I was too lazy to draw Miki's other hand but I fixed it now, along with some other things.
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Ahuehuheuheuue :iconmisakidarkplz:


YAY~~~
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:iconcreepykaitoplz: YOU LITTLE--

Improvement FTW~
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OHMAHGA-- 

DAFUQ



yay for improvement!~~
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Like dat plz? :3

YEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII--

more like... rei
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...Yes//smacked


you mean that glasses-wearing butterfly tsundere? xDD
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But of course~ Who else could I be talking about?
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If you want critics, I Will make some. :)

First I think that theirs necks are too long (according to the beggining of their shoulder), which made a weird impression of their head (especially for Piko).
Then, the hand of Miki is too small, it must at least be twice this size I think.

But except this It's pretty cool and the bodies are well-done :)
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