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CRITIQUES PLEASE -- Piki WIP by AmiMeito-chan CRITIQUES PLEASE -- Piki WIP by AmiMeito-chan
So I've finally started to move my attention to some other pairings, and.... I'm crazy about theses mofos on this white wall. XDDD

I need help with some anatomy, like about Miki's other hand around Piko, so a few critiques could be appreciated. Always improving! : D

If you hadn't noticed after looking at the table, my scanner is kinda.... Broken. Well, it's not broken, it just freakin' refuses to connect with the computer... But meh. All's well dat ends well in the end. I hope.
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:icononly-one-name:
Only-one-name Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwhh :D How adorable!!! :D
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Do you like this couple? - v -
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:icononly-one-name:
Only-one-name Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't really thought of it, but I do think they are cute, now having been exposed XP
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You shouldn't think they are cute, they ARE cute.
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:icononly-one-name:
Only-one-name Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THEY ARE CUUTE!!
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY--
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:icononly-one-name:
Only-one-name Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D :D
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:iconduffman8904:
duffman8904 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
too lovey dovey.
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well I'm a derp.
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:iconduffman8904:
duffman8904 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Oh yeah and the proportions are off. But mostly too lovey dovey
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, some people told me about the hands and his neck.

LOL THEN DON'T STARE AT IT
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:iconduffman8904:
duffman8904 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
not staring at it. just pointing that out
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You are able to point it out by staring at it.
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:iconduffman8904:
duffman8904 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
well no, i took a look at it; by the way is that tongue? anyway, the definition of staring is looking at something for a long period of time, i just looked at it for maybe about a second or so, thus no staring.
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAI GAH

NO

NO NO NO

IT'S A CHERRY
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ChibiClover-chan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The background is Ai Dee~~~
Such a colorful songgggggg


I'm sorray but what bugs me the most ore teh hands.. ;u; DO NOT TAKE THAT AS A COMPLAINT. 

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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
AH CRAP YOU FOUND OUT

BAD CLOVER

Yeah, I know. I was too lazy to draw Miki's other hand but I fixed it now, along with some other things.
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ChibiClover-chan Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ahuehuheuheuue :iconmisakidarkplz:


YAY~~~
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconcreepykaitoplz: YOU LITTLE--

Improvement FTW~
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:iconchibiclover-chan:
ChibiClover-chan Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OHMAHGA-- 

DAFUQ



yay for improvement!~~
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Like dat plz? :3

YEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII--

more like... rei
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:iconchibiclover-chan:
ChibiClover-chan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
...Yes//smacked


you mean that glasses-wearing butterfly tsundere? xDD
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
But of course~ Who else could I be talking about?
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Princesswanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you want critics, I Will make some. :)

First I think that theirs necks are too long (according to the beggining of their shoulder), which made a weird impression of their head (especially for Piko).
Then, the hand of Miki is too small, it must at least be twice this size I think.

But except this It's pretty cool and the bodies are well-done :)
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!! : D

I have fixed the hand, and I figured that Piko's neck was too long. I'm not quite sure how to move his shoulders up though....
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Princesswanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's because the shoulders musnt be moved :)
That's the head which needs to be pull down a little, I'm pretty sure of this :) you can try to move it with a sélection of a software, you will see the différence :)
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AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I don't have any software, so I might have to redraw it.... ;w;

But thank you for critiquing! You're the first one to do so!
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Princesswanted Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, we learn from our mistakes right ? :)

You can draw it again, that's true, but if i were in your shoes, I just let it as it is. You will do it better in your next drawing for sure ! :)
But if It's an artwork (one of yours) that you love, then re-draw it if that's What you want.

And then I would be glad to critic next time (in both positive and negative way) ;)
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AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Alright~ Thank you for the advice, yet again.
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TealStripedTights Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's so colorful in the background~. The paper behind it~.
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
SHHHHHH

I WILL NOT POST THAT UNTIL LATER




heh

someone finally noticed XDDD
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TealStripedTights Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kazuki be smart when he wants to be. =o=
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:iconamimeito-chan:
AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well duh~ It's somewhat natural for you. XDDD

Ami be derp when she wants to... troll.




lol I dunno :icontrollrollplz:
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JenifaRitsukiwa Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

O.O

 

 

1. Piko needs more hair on the back

 

2. Miki's hand needs improvement

 

OUO But it looks overall nice

 

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AmiMeito-chan Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*sigh*

WELL DUH THE HAND NEEDS IMPROVEMENT!! Tell me how to draw it.... -____-
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