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Minion Number 98 by ametueraspirant, literature

A Tough Sale by ametueraspirant, literature

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Minion Number 98 by ametueraspirant, literature

A Tough Sale by ametueraspirant, literature

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Artist // Hobbyist // Literature
  • Sep 18, 1995
  • United States
  • Deviant for 9 years
  • He / Him
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My Bio
while i admit my drawing is pretty much the worst of anyone i know, seeing how I'm amazed any time i can draw a decent looking circle, i consider myself to be good at writing campfire/storyteller style literature, it's fun and short, and that's pretty much it.

Favourite Visual Artist
^alicexz
Favourite Movies
Inception, War Horse, and Wallace and Gromit
Favourite TV Shows
Wipeout
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
The Chieftains, The Dubliners, The High Kings, anything celtic
Favourite Books
Incarceron and the Bartemius series
Favourite Writers
Terry Pratchett and Rick Riordan
Favourite Games
VVVVVV and legend of zelda
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
paper, pencil, and a spare brain
Other Interests
good comic strips, and odd art, like half cats half people or mind boggling physics illusions
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I have been analyzing my writing, and the one thing I've noticed is how abruptly I seem to end some sequences. I can't really drag it on any longer, and I am loathe to cut out complete paragraphs without reworking it a few times, yet sometimes I end up making it really awkwardly worded. Even if it avoids confusion, it still makes me wince inwardly. This may be why many writers go bald, quirks of writing may be entertaining to read if they're done well, but it's extremely frustrating to notice my shortcomings. I used to think I could be an amazing writer, until I started writing.
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thanks for the watch
still wearing socks I see.
little cool thing I did recently was put some of my old stories into document form, and post the link onto my main tapastic profile, in case you wanted to see me at a time when I was even worse than I am now.
um well could you link me to it? it'll be easier to find ^_^
sure thing
goo.gl/QJVXS6
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Thank you, Amet. ^^
weeeell I don't know what I did, but you are welcome!