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Her heart was at risk when

He hurt her.

It bled and bled and bled and bled and oh it wouldn’t stop.

..but she doesn't think he cared.

..He stole it and he

ripped it,

tore it,

scarred it,

hurt it,

torchered it,

ruined it,

ignored it and

threw it in the drain.

It.Hurt.Oh.So.Very.Badly

...She was at the risk of a heart breakdown..




Look at her now


I see

A heart beating for freedom from a heart breaker

I see

A person,

whose breath,

time,

patience,

kindness,

was wasted for

one

ignorant

man.

I see

Traces of a Heart Breakdown
This is really random...I hope you guys like it!

DISCLAIMER: The poetry in this Deviation is in no way related to my life/issue/etc.
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Propaganda-X Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Hobbyist Filmographer
Powerful stuff. I love the spacing. It makes pauses that just amplify the whole mood of the piece.

Nice going!
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