Deviation Actions

AmaranthineRain's avatar

Give Up 3

Published:
20 Comments
301 Views
#93 Give Up
View more from my 100 Theme Challenge series in my Journal (numerical order) or in my Gallery (sequential order).

Give Up 1
2 - Give Up 2
3 - you are here
4 - Give Up 4
5 - Give Up 5
6 - Give Up 6
7 - Give Up 7

Updates will be once a week on Thursdays until complete!



Leave Kiara alooone - her head feels funny. Wow, Swift, what a meanie.

For more of these two or other characters from this age-old series, go here: The Green Book Gallery
To keep a look out on my other major projects, go here: Kiri's Personal Projects Hub



Give Up is part of The Green Book © Kiri Rabina Ramdeo aka AmaranthineRain
pose referenced from SenshiStock For the Lost [Pose Reference for Drawing]
characters, illustrations, and story © me
all rights reserved
:icondbthx1::icondbthx2::icondbthx3:
Image details
Image size
700x784px 324.85 KB
© 2018 - 2022 AmaranthineRain
Comments20
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
5-prime's avatar
Whoa I had no idea Swift was such a sassy horse! A+ answer from Kiara though ahaha. I'm sure these two have plenty of fun banter.
AmaranthineRain's avatar
He is indeed! Kiara has learned to match him to survive - pain and anger early on in their relationship helps her learn to retort back quickly, luckily for her (or perhaps not). They do. The bickering is kinda cute because they're stubborn and prefer to put up with each other after a while than go it alone xD
5-prime's avatar
Huh, now I'm interested in finding out how these two met!
AmaranthineRain's avatar
I'm sure you will! ....when I get a chance to flesh out that part of their story xD
5-prime's avatar
Understandable! I know I'm still fleshing out many parts of my story, and I've been working on it for a while already
AmaranthineRain's avatar
I know the feeling! Sometimes I dunno when it's fleshed out enough and then other times it's like it's so fleshed out it's like a sac of pus, just oozing details - too many details sometimes...which is kinda gross to imagine but it was the most accurate thing I could think of for overdoing it.
5-prime's avatar
It's so true though! I know I'm in the situation where I wrote so many details that the story is... kind of a big old abscess. xD And yeah it's too much, it would be a lot of work to put all that detail in the final story and it would be a lot for the reader to take in too.
A friend suggested taking some less-relevant material and using it for side stories and spinoffs, so I might do that. c: Would you be able to do that with your extra details too?
AmaranthineRain's avatar
Yep, that's what I've started doing with the excess details so that i only use the relevant and concise details directly in the story. :D
View all replies
InkyRose's avatar
I love the dialogue here and each image is well laid out and shows both her despair but also the fact that even though she doesn't want to go on, she is fighting to find the strength to by her sulky reply to Swift lol.
AmaranthineRain's avatar
Thank you~
Haha, she's feisty even when she's grumpy and feeling like giving up xD Stubborn girl~
IckleVoldiePoo's avatar
I'm unfamiliar with the characters but the first three pages has me intrigued! Looking forward to seeing more! =)
AmaranthineRain's avatar
I'm very happy to hear even on the 3rd page it's intriguing! It'll come out every Thursday at a page a week until the 7th page. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'd love to hear what you think after you finish reading the rest of it~! 
Nemenos's avatar
Those colours looks super pretty!
It looks so atmospheric without you having to add shading, and I don't know, you pulled it off really well :O
Those expressions also... I love them xD
AmaranthineRain's avatar
Thank you! I fussed with the colors for a long time so I really appreciate that ^^;
Hehe, the expressions are so fun to do for these two~
MaggiefromSpace's avatar
Ahh Swift looks so pretty in the first panel! And Kiara's pose in the third is so good.

"Outside...?" :lol: Well she's not wrong.
AmaranthineRain's avatar
Thank youuuuuu~

Yeah, technically she's not wrong. ;P
Sleyf's avatar
Swift is a meanie *frown face* you leave her alone you big hooved bully. He is so pretty though, look at his eyelashes :flirty:
AmaranthineRain's avatar
He is a big butthead sometimes but man sometimes Kiara needs it.
Isn't he though? I feel like sometimes he knows it an uses it against people.
 Llama-Emoji-13 (I'm Pretty) [V1] 
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In