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In black and white without adornment, our humility a pride filled display. Be simple and straight and keep eyes unfocused and downward gazing. All are granted their Lord's grace; all beneath their shaded concealment wear and live in wealth. They are hushed, as gathering commences; no raised voice to offer offense in this place of ancient.  They contain no fear, no unsettled nervousness; they do not touch, and separate by gender; their observance has formula though implication has been bred from them in squander.  The ones armed, they are garbed in the contentment of faith. Only they carry memory of costs of straying, some scarred by body knowledge of disobeying.

Our black is long and light in weight, though mine is less elegant, wool that has carried centuries; rough and mended I appear, as I am, distress in motion on Shabbat. I bear no smiles in subtle carriage; I am freestanding, I to am scarred, buried in the ages. My hand touches stone in affirmation; Yes, I am here again, smoked ripped bled out pale and still uncommitted. Do you yet stir younger one? The sun here burns hard on stone, dust and flesh; my nails drift light across scored granite surfaces.

I alone am scarved and veiled; that isolation of curtain between world and self that older experiences with what conceals itself here draws forth. That one item in excess of proper observance sets my presence apart.  The females lay a distance between their existence and my own, each unsettled by this stranger potential among their cloistered grouping. Modern and ancient here to atone. There is script that I have inked upon my fleshes and the subtle phrases are hennaed to fingertip's final grip at air. Eyes have locked in passage along these stones to make judgment but to the examining scrutiny of these symbols no memories remain. Woven joined language only you and I now share younger one, like blood in offering only we recall.  There are no horns, no stench of burning meat, no spray of blood or shouts of holy graces in this worn swept plaza. My bare and hennaed feet firm plant and callous grind on heat wavered stone as I lay purchase on modern times.

ר֫וּע, nameless younger one.



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Mademoiselle-P's avatar
Mademoiselle-P|Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you dear ... once again..... :rose:
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
Always ... always I belong to your images (smiles) it is all my pleasure thank YOU again
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
Edit: final 1.6.2013 CE 17:10:11 HRS EST
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KissTheSunrise's avatar
beautifully written.
but why "וּע"?
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
i see.

when woven this garment had but one dimension to it my friend. i wrote this at one level and then about four hours later realized that there was a second that my voice reached to touch in greeting; but for you my friend, there is a third; and that is proper and good that you feel my nails drag on the ancient stone.

older to younger whether goddess to slumbering god
or mother to undone daughter who never was
or friends in obscured passages
ר֫וּע
to you my third.
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KissTheSunrise's avatar
ahhh yes, thank you for explaining your thoughts while weaving it. i appreciate it very much. i was certain you'd understand why i asked. merci bcp.

a young friend tells me that the word is most commonly used as a noun, not a verb. it was explained that in it's context it would mean something like: "wicked are you..." or "evil nameless younger one". my friend isn't a Hebrew scholar so i dunno, but now i'm curious what the word actually is. but, hmmm.. maybe when i copy it to Unicode from my browser it's getting garbled enough to change a its meaning ?
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
i did take note that your cut and paste of it was incomplete ...
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
as i understood its ancient use roohh AH
was a shout of praise to the Hebrew deity ... raised in battle, or joy. it is a verb according to this babble [link]

when i confronted Him in blood and dust under pale skies we greeted each other in glee
in battle there was little left of either of us
but neither was on their knee.

there is that first level of the Hebraic meaningless named and I meeting again ... I still standing and he ... in forgetful world now asleep and perhaps dreaming
i always elder and he by moments younger

the second level startled me and i remembered she who i aborted ... that daughter lost in salted ocean dreams

but yes there is you ... and the stair step age issue ... and the music of course and our exchanges regarding the questions of love ... any divinity expects total commitment ...
and love ... requires need.

i have been ... open here in this discussion of this particular work ... i am quite used to condemnations for actions and ... demands ... and (laughs) delusions; any deity survives by belief alone.
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Amanda-Graham|Professional Writer
it is a Hebrew greeting shout
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