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Kyouko fejcsóválva ült le a padra, és a hátizsákjából egy kis füzetet meg egy golyóstollat kotort elő. A lehető legósdibb eszközök tűntek a legalkalmasabbnak a feladatra, amire szánta őket. Kinyitotta a füzetet az első üres oldalon és kipróbálta, fog-e a toll.
- Te meg mit csinálsz? - vonta fel a szemöldökét a másik lány.
- Leírok mindent, ahogy a hídon mondtad. Nem tudom, mi folyik körülötted, de hallgatok rád, mindent följegyzek. Jól jöhet, ha kiderül, hogy igazad van...
Homura bólintott.
- Hallasz ma még tőlem felírni valót. - Azzal követte Tatsuyát a homokozóba. Tomohisa ráhagyta a meséket, amiket a lány szerint ismernie kellett volna. Úgy gondolta, épp ideje egy kicsit kifaggatni ezt az új barátot.
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"Man, at this rate I'll really believe that this is your family! They're off their rockers. Okay, they think they know you. But they saw me for the fucking first time! Do you get it? I'm a complete stranger! Yet they let me into this fine house and just nick off! How do you think the brat could stop me if I began to loot it?"
Kyouko had just passed the door handle of the Kaname household's bathroom to her friend with a grin. The parents hadn't have a hard time to persuade them. One part of Homura tried to resist but the other was grateful for the invitation and their trust. Kyouko had similarly ambivalent feelings. She felt bad for exploiting this unusually hospitable couple and worried that she'd might cause problems to the ravenette but she'd have never skipped such a prime opportunity for a whole afternoon of freeloading.
"He couldn't but I'd wring your neck in that very moment!", the thin girl answered closing the bathroom door from the inside.
When she re-appeared in the blue jean
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"The very first step will be to learn conjuring and using your weapon. Every magical girl has a tool for combat. It'll may surprise you at the first time but it'll be your magical weapon, the projection of your inner power. We know of someone who got ribbons."
"It's like winning the fork in the Battle Royale lottery.", Lara remarked with a touch of cynicism.
"I do not understand.", the animal replied.
"It's okay.", the girl said with a wave of her hand. The creature introduced to her as Yonbey, an escort Incubator for magical girls. He didn't deny his alien origin but he knew enough about the local culture to avoid the other more sinister translation of number four. His knowledge seemed quite lacking otherwise.
"It happened in a book my governess made me read, because 'a modern British lady needs an open mind'. My father didn't interfere. He had given her a free hand. He was never home anyway."
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- A legelső lépés, hogy megtanuld megidézni és használni a fegyvered. Minden mágikus lány rendelkezik olyan eszközzel, amivel harcolhat. Lehet, hogy először meglep majd, amit kapsz, de az lesz a te mágikus fegyvered, a belső erőd megtestesülése. Ismerünk valakit, aki szalagokat kapott.
- Mintha ő húzta volna a villát a Battle Royale sorsolásán. - jegyezte meg Lara, némi éllel a hangjában.
- Nem értem. - közölte az állat, aki nemrég mágikuslány-kísérő Inkubátorként, Yonbey néven mutatkozott be. Nem tagadta földönkívüli eredetét, de tudhatott annyit a helyi kultúráról, hogy megpróbálja elkerülni a négyes szám másik, baljós elnevezés
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Alvaro Acwellan
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Current Residence: Fehérvárcsurgó - Hungary
Favourite fictional characters: Akemi Homura in many shapes and forms...
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I'm through the first version of the disturbing scene that held me back and I've officially started editing and translating the upcoming TRAOD chapter 5: Searchlight. Also this is the longest chapter of anything I've ever written, I'll surely split it in two (or three) because of DA's text size limit but I'll post it all at once, in the usual two languages. In June. Or July. Life can happen as it did all this spring.

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MahouShoujoMaisoon Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2018
Since you didn't enjoy Yuki Yuna Is A Hero and MGRP, I don't recommend Mahou Shoujo Site to you. That magical girl show tried too hard to be like PMMM but it crammed too many "crawling in my skin" moments such as the main protagonist's cat getting killed, being bullied and raped by her classmates and by her brother etc in a few episodes to the point that it becomes a dark humor rather than an emotional show.
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alvaro84 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2018
To be honest I've seen an episode or two of it and I wasn't amused at all. The protagonist's life was a pointless torture (without showing her character) to the point where the whole show lost its last bit of sense of reality before it could even begin. And it was tiresome to watch too... All in all, it was an alienating experience so I dropped the series.
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MahouShoujoMaisoon Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2018
Yep. The writing wasn't as tight as PMMM as it had too much exposition crammed in a few episodes so I stopped caring about it. No wonder why there is a trope in tv tropes called "Darkness Induced Audience Apathy" and "Narm" (Kaname Asagiri is in the latter because of his pathetic attempts at being edgy).
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alvaro84 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2018
I think "Darkness Induced Audience Apathy" is really the right expression here.
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bogidream Featured By Owner May 1, 2018
Boldog szülinapot :) Na, meg persze május elsejét ;)
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alvaro84 Featured By Owner May 1, 2018
Neked is köszönöm!
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MorajaChancery Featured By Owner May 1, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Boldog május elsejét! Meg szülinapot is :D
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alvaro84 Featured By Owner May 1, 2018
Köszönöm! :)
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MahouShoujoMaisoon Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2018
Rank your favorite to least favorite of the holy quintet. I just want to know that's all.
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alvaro84 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2018
Well, you can easily guess that my absolute no.1 is Homura. She's not perfect, she's not completely right in the head but hey, this is why I love her! I even have another version of her, a little different from her canon self but still very similar.

Then, let's see. The people she's closest to are my next two favs. Madoka is someone with a strong sense of responsibility. She can kind of complete Homura and they love very much and mutually support each other. Yeah, I know it's not a Rebellion fact :D But I just can't (or don't want) to imagine the whole thing ending up like this. I think there's more to Madoka than she showed during Rebellion. Her plan was to save Homura and it hasn't failed - it just hasn't completed yet. Really, we're talking about a deity, not a 14-yo schoolgirl. I really think she was the mastermind behind everything that happened. It's possible that her sense of responsibility (for who she had tamed) made her give up her godhood but I repeat, I don't think it's the end of story.

Kyouko is in this tier too. In my works she's an "older sister" figure for the two little lovebirds (even though she's technically much younger than Homura at that point). It may be unexpected, she did surprise me too but this is what happened. In the original series she was the character that seemed hiding something (to me at least). She's wild and restless but has strong morality behind her street urchin mask.

Then come Sayaka and Mami. Mami didn't get enough screen time to get close enough to me so I feel her a bit of a stranger. Sayaka is very different. Her story played a very important role in the series (and her downfall was what got me hooked on Madoka Magica) but she could be quite annoying at times (looking from Homura's point of view that I assumed so easily...). So while Mami is kind of distant, Sayaka is ambivalent.
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