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The next comic needs better ____. (tell me how to improve them XD) 

35%
110 deviants said writing (story/plot)
28%
90 deviants said artwork
20%
64 deviants said scene setting / panel/text arrangement / use of space
17%
53 deviants said writing (dialogue)

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:iconmasterofra:
MasterOfRa Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
As much as I hate to admit anything bad about any of your art, the story was a bit off and a bit rushed in the last comic.

The setup of the pages, and the text itself was good, it just felt like important scenes were there one moment and then gone so quickly.
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah, it was XD; and hmm o.o
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:iconlightarios1234:
lightarios1234 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
I would say slow down the Shrink/Grow sequences so that they are more enjoyable. The full page of growth you had in your last comic was epic! More like that would be just perfect.
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha =P i see
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:iconlotus-cobra:
Lotus-Cobra Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
I said artwork not because I think your art is bad, but because it's the thing I care about the most in the comics. :P
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:iconthekenzai1987:
TheKenzai1987 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
Your artwork is fine, but I think the storywriting could use more work. You may want to think about that. Read some books, or watch some videos with dialogue. That will help.
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD; OFCM's story wasn't really planned at all, so i knew it was a weakness. cwc but yes~.
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:iconlightarchon:
lightarchon Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
I'll throw my 2 cents out there, the growth scene at the end of the comic took my breath away. I would love to see this more :)
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks o.o what was it specifically that you liked? growth isn't really my thing so i'm not quite sure what to focus on =P
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:iconlightarchon:
lightarchon Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
well the humor of it happening and the ending where she was afraid of how high she was. Really got a good laugh out of it :)
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah ^^
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:iconkotrebo:
Kotrebo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, I agree with :iconxwarzardx: moar people actually getting squished even if done in a comical fashion. Hinting at tinies perishing underfoot and actually seeing tinies perishing underfoot there is a huge difference in action feel. XD Not to mention that is a beautiful chance for a tinies perspective shot of a giantess ripping through his city before lights out. :D
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=P i see
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:iconkotrebo:
Kotrebo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I voted artwork just to make this claim, though the actual artwork quality itself is outstanding.
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:iconxwarzardx:
xWARZARDx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Needs more SM to get encountered by the GTS while the city is getting smashed around :P
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconxwarzardx:
xWARZARDx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
As for transitions, remember That Ninja Turtles live action series, I think it was Ninja Turtles in the next mutation? Check that out and see how those transitions are, you should have transitions as B rated as those :P
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:iconalloyrabbit:
AlloyRabbit Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=P
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