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In the Chill of the Day
Molly, what are you doing under a draped green tarp over frozen white ice with such black water flowing fierce beneath it?
Why did you cut a hole in the ice and shiver under layers of thermal clothes covering your probably beautiful freckled skin?
Why do you have a fishing line dropped with a dead-weight sinker down in that hole you stand by; why are you so hungry?
My ears are warm in a knit cap that covers my head and gets me out of the house so I can carefully slide up toward Molly.
I see her mouth smile wide in a silent "hi" and the wind just howls over this black-and-green and frozen slick white ice lake.
I shrug small shoulders in my big down coat 'cause I'm not hungry, except when I look at Molly and always blush too much.
Who arrives next and pushes me hard on the pearly ice and into black water that splashes on me and in me; who does it?
I fall and fill up fast with water-weight that rushes in my head and spreads outward in my lungs and hurts, it hurts so much.
Molly grabs my h
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if anyone checks this at all anymore, ever, you might notice that most of my writing is now in storage. if you'd like a copy of one of my old stories that is no longer available here, let me know. i'm alizalayne on gmail. 

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hello i barely use this site anymore sorry friends. viewing the olive fields of deviantart is like looking deeply into my own past except there are way more ponies here now

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ForestDwellerHouses Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks for stopping by!
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Winters-Hart Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, i love your after the end of the world pieces, Evenings even inspired this, [link] i hope you like it, i credited your story to you. they really are very good.
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Alizabith Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student General Artist
wow, thank you!! That's lovely! Wow, I'm glad I inspired you and thank you for reading my work.
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Winters-Hart Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much it means alot that you like it so much.
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xioenxing Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
hello dear. I will finally post things.
for you i will.

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raspil Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012   Writer
you are a DD machine!
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What a lovely profile, and your writing is top-notch!
By the way, the webcam comic is hilarious. ;) Love it.
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xioenxing Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
lizzie I'm posting things.
A year later... after you tell me to post things
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Writer
Thanks much for the :+fav: on "In the Chill of the Day."
If you want to do more 'lit crit,' that might be a good one to do.
I'd appreciate it.
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