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The odyssey of life
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second hand suspended
I would like for you too see a comparison If you will please look at your clock Hear it click with each moment slipping by Now imagine it breaks Not truly broken Yet that one hand The one hand refuses to move You still hear it tick You can see it trying But no matter what that second little hand Just wont move Now i look at myself Time still passes by Leaves me behind Every time of day TICK TOCKING by Sounds cliche But my head against the wall Leaning back perfectly still As if i myself have been as this hand Stuck in this position never to leave again My heart still beats and my lungs still draw I gaze curiously at this languid clock Wonder
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think of everything save a title
The state of my fate Stays stern as it turns Through my passion Save my obsession and just one truth One dour path My languid pace Just to share a glassey gaze I may then be ripped apart But i can still feel complete One shift left and it will be took And much like the rook Just one straight line Am i ready to make that trek
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wish I wish you wish
In the final hours of this day I finally get the chance to say You deserve the world So let me whisper this in your ear Blow out the candles And I will scream a cheer HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! To a very special girl
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serenity in a mind
Passing by lights in the dead of night The blooded moon half in the sky Blocked effortlessly by each of the concrete monstrositys Sign says "moran" I say decrepit As the fluid fuels my incoherent thoughts  deep breaths and meloncholy feelings A goodnight whisper I will see you on the other midnight blessing
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headcolds and lovenotes
Head eroding ear exploding my heart is coding cough supresants decongestants Ill take anything I can not a fan of pills and meds but in their stead a little tenderness a soft caress ending my duress Sick in love you're the angel from above to cure what ales me
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Provocation of insperation
you are provocation to inspiration not a simple sense of infatuation but subtle shrouded elation an easily grasped perpetual motivation giving pleasure to power and meaning to pain will this really be the finest hour or prove just another stain through explicit duality ripping apart reality breaking it down showing you found one just short of fatality not of existence but mentality distant hopes trying to cope with once again feeling intimate sew seams to knit on flesh that no longer fits so torn and worn seeing the past and all to scorn seems forlorn but to these things to be adjourned with being sojourned from the norm to end them all to pa
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Art Form: Reassurance of a soul
Art Form: Reassurance of a soul She cliped my wings and left me for dead She filled my heart With regret and dread But you have removed it And in its stead I see a bed for two And some rested heads A loving glance a tender kiss And its all these feelings That I missed
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Will you?
This loneliness is mine It remains so undefined I see you everyday I see you in my head Sometimes It turns my face beat red. Will you sail away with me? Brave the ocean waves with me Grab my hand and pull me back every time I fall overboard Will you search for shore with me an island we can call our own? Will you sail away with me And be together evermore You're the specter in my dreams Those eyes of your always shine and gleam It's never forced upon me. And I will always try And I don't know why Maybe because we all need to feel loved sometimes? Will you fly so high with me? Reach up and taste the sky with me? Push me to a greater height
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Do I offend?
Do I offend? What is it about me that drives them all away Do i care to much, or maybe it's what i say Maybe its the things I do, that pushes you It never fails though all of them leave as if right on queue Right as I get filled with delight once more It comes crashing down and as the dust clears I slowly put it back together Even though I'm devastated time and again I still press on through the dark and debris filed life i lead I try to get some back and it only sends them farther. But I'm just a man I love to much and want to be loved in return Is that so much to ask for? just a little bit of affection from another?
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second hand suspended
I would like for you too see a comparison If you will please look at your clock Hear it click with each moment slipping by Now imagine it breaks Not truly broken Yet that one hand The one hand refuses to move You still hear it tick You can see it trying But no matter what that second little hand Just wont move Now i look at myself Time still passes by Leaves me behind Every time of day TICK TOCKING by Sounds cliche But my head against the wall Leaning back perfectly still As if i myself have been as this hand Stuck in this position never to leave again My heart still beats and my lungs still draw I gaze curiously at this languid clock Wonder
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think of everything save a title
The state of my fate Stays stern as it turns Through my passion Save my obsession and just one truth One dour path My languid pace Just to share a glassey gaze I may then be ripped apart But i can still feel complete One shift left and it will be took And much like the rook Just one straight line Am i ready to make that trek
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wish I wish you wish
In the final hours of this day I finally get the chance to say You deserve the world So let me whisper this in your ear Blow out the candles And I will scream a cheer HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! To a very special girl
1
1
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serenity in a mind
Passing by lights in the dead of night The blooded moon half in the sky Blocked effortlessly by each of the concrete monstrositys Sign says "moran" I say decrepit As the fluid fuels my incoherent thoughts  deep breaths and meloncholy feelings A goodnight whisper I will see you on the other midnight blessing
1
1
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headcolds and lovenotes
Head eroding ear exploding my heart is coding cough supresants decongestants Ill take anything I can not a fan of pills and meds but in their stead a little tenderness a soft caress ending my duress Sick in love you're the angel from above to cure what ales me
1
2
P
Provocation of insperation
you are provocation to inspiration not a simple sense of infatuation but subtle shrouded elation an easily grasped perpetual motivation giving pleasure to power and meaning to pain will this really be the finest hour or prove just another stain through explicit duality ripping apart reality breaking it down showing you found one just short of fatality not of existence but mentality distant hopes trying to cope with once again feeling intimate sew seams to knit on flesh that no longer fits so torn and worn seeing the past and all to scorn seems forlorn but to these things to be adjourned with being sojourned from the norm to end them all to pa
1
1
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Art Form: Reassurance of a soul
Art Form: Reassurance of a soul She cliped my wings and left me for dead She filled my heart With regret and dread But you have removed it And in its stead I see a bed for two And some rested heads A loving glance a tender kiss And its all these feelings That I missed
0
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Will you?
This loneliness is mine It remains so undefined I see you everyday I see you in my head Sometimes It turns my face beat red. Will you sail away with me? Brave the ocean waves with me Grab my hand and pull me back every time I fall overboard Will you search for shore with me an island we can call our own? Will you sail away with me And be together evermore You're the specter in my dreams Those eyes of your always shine and gleam It's never forced upon me. And I will always try And I don't know why Maybe because we all need to feel loved sometimes? Will you fly so high with me? Reach up and taste the sky with me? Push me to a greater height
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Do I offend?
Do I offend? What is it about me that drives them all away Do i care to much, or maybe it's what i say Maybe its the things I do, that pushes you It never fails though all of them leave as if right on queue Right as I get filled with delight once more It comes crashing down and as the dust clears I slowly put it back together Even though I'm devastated time and again I still press on through the dark and debris filed life i lead I try to get some back and it only sends them farther. But I'm just a man I love to much and want to be loved in return Is that so much to ask for? just a little bit of affection from another?
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I appologize for the lack of acknowledgemet for the recent support ive gained also the lack of posting
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wish I wish you wish
On the final hours of this day I finall can properly say you deserve the world So hear me whisper in your ear Blow out the candles then I will give a cheer Happy birthday
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through sickness and health I guess
Well im sick to the point I think my left ear has actually gone deaf (hopefully temporarily)but atleast theres one person by my side through it all... And I couldnt tell her enough how much I appreciate the sentiment she gives me and I will never ever think I deserve some one as good as her
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Hey.. hey you... yeah you... You're cute :heart:
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Carefull dont want our sweet couples convo to become your fans talking point
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Aw.. But that's no fun lol
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I thought of linking this here for you o3o
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Happy Birtday :iconpinkiepiecakeplz: Hug