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Kisa and Hiatsu Scene- Book 1 (Fixed Up Version)

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Kisa and Hiatsu Scene- Book 1 (Fixed Up Version)

    A couple months passed by with the summer sliding into fall. Hiatsu watched from his balcony to see Ginsu outside with the siblings. “I’m gonna get you!” Alura shouted and laughed with Talon who was running away. Hiatsu shook his head lightly, closing his eyes with a turn as he stepped back inside. He shook his red head and opened his eyes.    The Fire God stepped over to his desk, opened a drawer and looked down at the top paper belonging to Nate again. His eyes closed half way as his lips thinned. A soft wind blew, playing with the light curtains and making the beads on the ends of a few skinny locks of hair click li

I'm The Friend You Need - Brony DnD Version (Pt 4)

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I'm The Friend You Need - Brony DnD Version (Pt 4)

As the cold air and dust cleared, four mirrors laid on the ground where four people once stood. Jeminya looked to the one near them and picked it up. Staring at her reflection a moment, her gentle fingers around the neck of the looking glass tightened. Her lips curled back in a snarl, displaying her fangs. "How did you do this?" she whispered coarsely.    Devion coughed and looked over to the tiefling woman. "What?" his face twisted with an eyebrow cocked.    Jeminya slowly stood and suddenly rushed him, grabbing his throat and lifting him a few centimeters off the ground. "How did you do this?!" she barked with rage, her blue eyes glarin

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I'm a writer and artist. My main series is Endless which focuses on Alura and her mission to find and end a shadow demon named Amoxious. She travels with a wizard named Marenzo and starts to learn about her parents first life. She also has an over caring Water God as a guardian who himself is learning what his brothers already know about handling mortals.

There's action, adventure, light romance, magic, Gods/Goddesses, and sadness. What I post here are the 1st revisions of the story originally wrote in 2008 and 2010. It will be further refine and improved. That version will either be shared here or elsewhere. On that I will be hoping to get opinions to know if anything still needs fixed before I move forwards in the steps to publish it.

I also have 2 books on Amazon for purchase. Dragon's Awakening and Aphelia: A Collection of Short Stories. Go check them out if you'd like and, if you do, leave a rating. You can find a Folder in my Gallery listed Published Works (Or something like that) for your convenience.

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(Update 10-7-19) Even though Wix/Deviantart has released the classic green theme, the way things are laid out is still anxiety inducing for me. Things are still FAR too big and confusing. Things are not clearly labeled, organizational abilities are missing and even complete sections are missing or are very difficult to find due to poor labeling. The rest of the journal still stands as I upload things on Artstation and Penana, with once in a while Pintrest. The green theme is easier on my eyes, not causing a migraine but the poor layout of the site, lack of clarity in what is what and where things are, and other things such as organizational a
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