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Meanwhile elsewhere in the sky, Ginsu stepped through the wooded area on the western isle of the God Lands. He pushed aside a hanging, leafy branch and sighed upon the sight of a simple shrine. Looking left and right, the blue haired god advanced forward while the leaves rustled in the gentle breeze. Ginsu pushed aside the wooden sliding door, stepped inside and pushed it back to glide into place.
    His steps slowed and he turned his head moments later to see the door now sliding closed. “Hmm…” Carefully Ginsu examined the room dimly lit by candles evenly spaced around the room.
    “Ever so suspicious. It’s so humorous your thoughts never go as far as your brother’s.” A female playfully said and quietly chuckled. “You never cease to grow my curiosity.”
    Ginsu’s steps halted and sighed while he closed his eyes. “Hello Kamon. Do you really need to be spying on me?”
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Okay! I've gotten 2 different opinions on this and so I'm curious what others think. I know what I think but I like input before I decide which one stays and which one goes. This is the dungeon scene between Sophia and Amoxious. These are the 2 versions for fine tuning I came up with in reworking what's in the original here on my DA found in Death Frame, Chapter 4 I believe. Either below leave your vote or follow the link to the poll to leave your input on if you prefer version 1, version 2, neither or both. Thank you ever so much!
Version 1:
Later that evening, a guard stepped out of the inn and made his way to the dungeons location just off the castle grounds. Once inside, the guard continued and stopped in front of the cell of a resting Sophia on the floor mat. “So beautiful. Too bad you must be left behind such metal constructs.”
    “Neh?” she rolled over and sat up, rubbing one eye with a yawn. “Wha?” Sophia blinked clear

Outside the wind had picked up and a section of shadows flickered by the house while the croen ran towards the battle. He took a breath, clinched his hands tightly and exhaled with his wings coming out. Don’t kill, Nate thought and took flight up through the trees before leveling out to resume his path towards the park.
        Once he arrived, Flora’s mixed army had just began to engage the enemy. Nate sharply inhaled before swiftly flying down and slammed a fist square in the nose of a trollish looking reptile demon. The croen kept going as that first demon fell then a second was punched and a third before he landed, while simultaneously roundhouse kicking a fourth and fifth.
        A sixth came swinging his large bladed weapon at the croen as he landed. Nate swiftly jumped back then to the right upon hearing an angered snort, turning just in time to see the other soldier bring an axe down. His jaw tightened as bla

In the spirit of Halloween, I've decided to give some details on the 3 ranks of Vampires that exist in Aphelia.
There are 3 ranks:
Lowest: Silver Biters (aka Bloodsuckers)
Middle: Crimson Noble (aka Vampires)
Highest: Solar Royalty
> Silver Biters: Being the most sadistic of the three, they are just as fast as the other two and can appear just as enchantingly attractive. They hunt during the harvest moon where a dance takes place and primarily the men are sent to one or more towns and/or cities to bring back humans. There they commonly separate the men and women with the female vampires slowly draining the men while dismembering them. The male vampires handle the women, draining them and doing as they see fit for screams and the gathering of blood. They cannot go into the sunlight. If they do then they burn into dust like soot. Quite the painful event and hard to watch sight and to hear a creature screaming out in pain as they die. They have sharp pointed ears that look almost elf l