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Wanderers

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Literature Text

All lost in the maze,
shut eyes create labyrinths
where dark monsters gaze

upon innocent blindness.
In darkness fear usurps light.
This poem started out as a Haiku commentary on WITH EYES CLOSED by*chryssalis

To do the subject justice, I decided more was needed, so I added a couplet to create a Tanka.

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Fear usurping light is a frightening notion!