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Fake -a poem- by AlchemyOtaku17

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I HAZ NO CLUE AT ALL. :noes:
I keep finding emo poetry lurking 'bout in mah notebooks. I write it late at night and find it in the morning like "WTF is this?!"

I think it's about how there are some people (like a reclusive model or something) who look like a doll, but act like one too; always being lifeless and silent. How we appreciate the beautiful things, but when it comes down to it we need lively people and affection in our lives.
<end of fail explaination>

ON ANOTHER NOTE-
This is my 361st deviation :dummy:
My art has made a full circle :meow:
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Jinxxescapethefate Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so awsome
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AlchemyOtaku17 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank you! :iconcblushplz:
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Jinxxescapethefate Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcomeeeeeeee .-. Anytime ^^
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Trinity-kh Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
That was good, i liked it :clap: :D
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AlchemyOtaku17 Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Gee, alot of people seem to like this one :meow: Thank you :dummy:
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Trinity-kh Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
That's cos it's good silly :lol: and you're welcome :hug:
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Very beautiful and deep :)
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Glad you thought so :iconwoooplz:
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Eztrella Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I AGREEE!!! LOVE IT!!!
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SNEE33 Featured By Owner May 18, 2010
Fabulous!
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AlchemyOtaku17 Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank you :iconblushplz:
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SNEE33 Featured By Owner May 18, 2010
Velllcome!!!
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