At first: Thank you so much for your critique. I really appreciate it and I'm happy about every little comment I can get. Let it be positive or negative (as long as it is well explained) You did that and I'm more than happy that you like it
With the crane you was right by the way. The things were moving in the wind a little and I guess that's what makes them look like the crane was moving. It actually wasn't. Just the wind.
And well, the toning is what I changed a little. The sky wasn't that yellow like it is. But imo it's a legal thing to change colours. I just use the raw converting and nothing more. So finally you could do all these things with a photo on film, too But obviously you like the outcome and that's the important thing anyways
Oh and the light... I don't remember where the sun was at this time, I'm sorry.
But again: Thank you so much for giving this critique. I'm so happy right now
Every critique might help. I try to give some (not for a pay-account yet - in my opinion it is confusing anyway that you can only give a real critique to someone who pays for the account. Mostly they already are good in what they do) But it's a big part of learning. You can only improve things when you know what to improve, there is no other way, so keep writing critiques The ones who really like to learn will always appreciate it!
First of all thanks a lot for your critique. I really appreciate it! And I already improved some things you said and I could accept with Firstly: I changed/decreased the saturation of the plants, because it really distracted the viewer and made him keep looking on the "wrong" items. Secondly I slightly increased the grey of the sky, but not that much. In my opinion the hard contrast of the sky and the house is very important. I tried it the other way, but the result was not what I wanted to get.
And at least I'm happy you noticed that the title has a meaning, too. I guess a lot of people don't even look at the title that much, but I do and mostly I think a lot about the "right" title for a photo.
Again: Thanks so much for your critique, it's the only way someone can get better and I really want it