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Age spell : PIRATES !

Still with the idea of Twilight using an age spell for one day to play with her friends like kids would do. Catching the time she never had with them. I wanted to do this one since a few weeks, but didn't take time for that.

This one is one of the reasons why there wasn't much update lately.
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PeppermintFly33's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is possibly the cutest thing ever! I always imagined what they would act like together, and you described that perfectly in this picture. And you also described their personalities awesomely. It seems like exactly what they would if they were kids/pirates.

Also you're detailing is incredible! Everything from the shading to the setting is perfect! But what is truly is amazing, is the expressions. It seems like you got it straight on. You also did the water really well. Specking of water, the texture is awesome. The hair, the flags, and the wood on the boat is all incredible! That's my critique, and I hope you think it's fair, so peace!
redfoxj's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is such a cute picture that I can imagine it would be hard to critique. I guess the one thing I can point out is that the water looks like syrup *YUM!* I assume the guns are carved wood, but it's interesting to know where Twilight got that cannon. More interesting would be how sturdy that sand fortress is.

But logic aside, I love how you do eyes. Hard to describe the method, but they add such childlike expression. [I hope you do a tutorial on how you draw them.] The soft coloring adds innocence, much like this scene is coming out of a storybook. And despite the simplicity, you have attention to details. The overly large hat on AJ and Pinkie submerged with a little flag on her snorkel are examples.

I have to add: Lil McIntosh is my favorite character in this whole scene. He's the only male in this troop and there just enough difference in his design to show that, without looking overly feminine and without losing that childlike quality. Nice work.

You are one of my favorite artists here on dA because your style is unique to me. Room for improvements, yes, but you are on track and ever growing. I recommend to everyone reading this critique to <img src="…" width="30" height="16" alt=":+devwatch:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="459" title="Added to my devWatch!"/> this artist! And if there was an Adorableness rating on this critique, I'd make it a 6 star.
Alasou's avatar
Thank you very much for your critique.

For the eyes, I've done a very quick tutorial on my tumblr a few weeks ago. It's very simple actually : [link]
redfoxj's avatar
For something so simple, it's gorgeous! Thank you for the link!
Alasou's avatar
You're welcome =)
BronyNo786's avatar
*opens youtube and plays Pirates of the Caribbean theme*
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Hyginustus's avatar
remind me of d-day
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superpika293's avatar
Adorable antics HO!!
JenYeonGI's avatar
Cute ><
Bravo ! :D
ThePhoenixKing32's avatar
This is going to be fun!
cheesanyeap's avatar
Actually I Spell awesome to awsome too last year
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Sorry , awesome wrong spelling
Iluvluna123's avatar
twilight looks cute
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Aralaas's avatar
Man, I wish I were that good at building sandcastles.

Ooh, and Rarity is dual wielding custom pistols like a boss! :D
persistant's avatar
pinkie Pie is without a doubt best submarine.
MonotonyArt's avatar
one of my new favorites. seriously amazing.
RoxieTheRockstar's avatar
How did you draw this?
lordbevan1's avatar
the d'awww level is...too much...can't find my...insulin....*collapses on the floor*
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