Critiques are much appreciated as I can not grow as a creator without them.
Since you're asking for critique, I wanted to mention that I think Papyrus' proportions might be a bit off in the last panel. I think his arms need to be a bit longer, but I'm not 100% sure. I make the same mistake all the time. A good way to check (based on human proportions anyway) is to measure the two parts of the arm and draw a line with the same length from the shoulder down. If it reaches past the hips, you're in the clear.
Actually, now that I'm thinking about it, the arms are actually the right length... maybe it's the legs? Dunno, it just looks off to me... I think maybe the top half of his body needs to be larger, but I'm not sure? I'm sorry o__o
Awww, this page is so wholesome, from Frisk saying they’re going to free Sans, to Undyne asking what Frisk said, to Papyrus being the cinnamon roll he is 😊
Such a cute page