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Thank you all for your opinions ^^ I would greatly appreciate it
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JBlaster5739 Featured By Owner May 8, 2017
A little bit of both in my personal opinion.

this is really only by story value for me however.

1: You could use the smoke as a plot point, like why does she even have that power in the first place, can it be blow away an show the monster, does it do anything else besides make her look human, do people outside its range still see her actual form, does technology negate the effect?

2:Where did she get the human? Did she create it, was it just sombody she killed, does it have any type of personality with out Joy? Maybe it could be someone in a deep depression and Joy is the only way she can see the 'colour' in the world again so she WILLINGLY lets Joy take over to see through her eyes. So she can literally be Joyful again.
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AK-47x Featured By Owner May 8, 2017
This is bit old ^^;
i forgot to clear this before.
im going with something different entirely 
sorry for the miss convenience haha
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JBlaster5739 Featured By Owner May 8, 2017
No problem at all, but what do ya think? And what did you go with?
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AK-47x Featured By Owner May 8, 2017
well few new thimgs what will be added in her ref when shse is fully done ^^ so all in good time heh
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Amberbratz Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i have seen a bio on #2 i want to look at it again for reference materials on an oc I'm making/trying to make...but i cant remember the name it was so long ago ;-;
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A-Dreamare Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016   Digital Artist
Overall I think 2 is creepier, but as for what fits her better, I think 1 works with her other abilities (quoting from her bio "strong hallucinations as if the world around them is constantly moving, will be in Constant panic of anxiety, and will have fast heart rate, never ending of nightmares") :)
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016
true but the only problem I have is with 1 is that is  that would mean it ( the human ) would be a delusional of the mind so when someone try's to touch, it could fade but I feel that it could be over powered? If she could do that much ? So that why I thought up 2 from it being more likely of it happening 
 I might go with 2 but I still not sure what I should do so hearing from others helps me out .w.
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A-Dreamare Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016   Digital Artist

Hmm you got a point there, the touching could be a big disadvantage of the illusion, but maybe, if you don't want her to make it an overpowered illusion ability, is a good way to balance it.
I'm just gonna say some random ideas, some might sound bit silly XD but I dunno, maybe part of them could help even a bit. But feel free to ignore me, I just sometimes like given random ideas.

Maybe how strong the illusion is depending on who is seeing it, like, there are some people that are easier to fool and even when they try to touch, their minds are weak so they can’t tell it’s not real unless exposed for really long periods. Then there could be other minds, stronger or people not so easily tricked that might see the illusion but upon touching, will fade. There could even be some that the normal illusion wouldn’t work so well, like other supernatural beings or slenders.

And I'msorry if my English came out a bit weird, it’s not my first language ^^u
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AK-47x Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016
That actually sounds pretty good but I think the illusion is more for victims, I like the sound if it for the some part I think I'll add that in , someway like it could work best on people who have a dramatic life style or have did things they are not happy about 

now I just gonna get her to know other Slenders lol XD

you did fine, I'm not good at English too ....and that's my only language ewe"""
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A-Dreamare Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2016   Digital Artist
Cool I'm glad I could help :D

Well if you'd like, I have two slenders she could met. Sulker is more or less opossite to Joy Fade (as far as I managed to understand), his goal is to make others focus in their negative feelings and thoughts.
On the other hand it could be amusing if they did met XD

Muy other slenders is Scorch, I guess she'd a bit of an outsider, she's covered in burn scars and almost half her face is permanently exposed. I imagine not many slenders would like to be around her? I just madre her so I'm just figuring dime stuff.

And well, feel cree to ignore this to XDu

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AK-47x Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016
Ohhhh sure ! 
After looking at sulker they probably could get along good ? .w. From what it says " Dark sense of humor" joy fade is all about a Dark sense of humor, and jokes in general , that's one of her main things she likes, she has a unique ability to other things what could be seen as 'weird' to other slender beings, she knows how to 'use' people and she response back clever. But I think sulker wouldn't really mind her, but not Pay attention to her has much kinda like,he be sitting there Or doing whatever he would do and joy would be looking around probably think up a joke with Dark sense of humor to it , sulker could ( don't know if he would) say " nice" or just be amused ewe

joy is most like a out sider herself from her having different ways of doing things but would be friendly around her because they could relate 
( I'm still reading on her lol )


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A-Dreamare Featured By Owner Edited Sep 5, 2016   Digital Artist
(Sorry for late reply, school and internet sucks DX)

Now that you mention it, I actually forgot about Sulker dark sense of humor XD but if Joy has a similar humor sense, it might actually be interesting to see them interact (it would be interesting to see Sulker interact without trying to kill the other in general XD).

He also respects slenders or other beings with cruel mentalities or ways of controlling others, so I bet he’d find interesting Joy illusions and all that.

Sulker would probably just be amused by her dark jokes, in an extreme case, darkly chuckle to himself, dropping a sarcastic or same type of joke himself now and then.

He probably wouldn’t be a “fan” of Joy happier side, but as long as she isn’t as bubbly or annoying, he could stand her at times.

This could be a very interesting allies thing,  I just love how different n opposite they look XD

I’m gonna go add Joy as Sulker Allies~

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Emmadagood Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like 1.
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Stargazergamer Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Student General Artist
1 seems a lot creepier to me :)
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Silverdiscord Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
2 sounds the best
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I like number 1 better. Joy using a human form to lure victims or potential proxys to her.
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Cartoongirll18 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
I really like both ideas but I think 2 may sound a bit better(?). What I mean by that is maybe it'll show Joy Fade's sadistic side(?). I'm not entirely sure myself. ^^;
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checkedhearts Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
2
its creepier
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allieglimmer Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I actually like 2 better
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steampunk112 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016
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