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Stairway 01 by airstyle Stairway 01 by airstyle
Here we go, anther render from my townhouse...

Anyway I reckon this one turned out pretty well - Still, any comments / suggestions is welcome :)

3ds max.
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oneMystery Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2005   Interface Designer
hey. yeah the stairs are good. but you know what i like most? the niches and the painting. :P very funky!
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subaqua Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2005
very nice lighting. Was it done in Maxwell?
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airstyle Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2005
ya dude lol
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neo-angel Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2005
WOW. I wanta staircase like that...soooocleannnn
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xshadowx Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice angle, cool architecture :)
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garetth Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks good. I would soften up the edge of the glass railing and make it a bit thinner to make it look better. Also, the lighting on the wall at the top of the stairs is way too intense. Good job overall :)
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LaGoderre Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
The photorealism is perfect!!! very good work!
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TwilightEmbraced Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005
whoa that looks sexy O.o

how many hours did it take for j00 to do that in max? hehehe, you should go major in interior design or something you're really good :] keep up the good work and hope to see lots of new renders from you!
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CanisLoopus Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005
Very nice! The radiosity turned out perfectly!

Maybe you should give the glass some fresnel-cyan reflection which would make it look a little more realistic i guess. Very good work!
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Kazroth Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005
Nice one :) But well you wanted advanced critique so you`ll getting one ^_^ :

The bump map of the floor tiles seems to be to rough/big. Maybe you should tile it even more, right now it looks like the floor tiles would have little tiny hills on them ^_^ Oh and btw. if I were you, I would model the floor tiles not just mapping a plane ;) Another thing that doesn`t look good are the holes of those pipes that go through the steps (ya know those chrome thingys there through that wood stuff ;) ) The holes just seem to have been post produced after the rendering. If thets the case, then you maybe should overdo that, if not you should reduce the chrome reflection (or enviroment map) so the holes aren`t completely black inside. Okay...the glas railing (hope thats spelled right) looks pretty nice but the upper railing has a glitch in it (a shadow maybe?) . So and my last crit would be them three hot spots or sun rays on the floor in the background part of the picture. They may be correct but do not fit there ;)

Hope those critiques help ya ;) I still think it`s a good picture but I personally always liked it when someone told me what I could have done better so I hope it helps you too ^_^
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airstyle Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005
hell man thats nice critique :D you pointed out everything i found after i rendered the image, except for those sun rays. In actual fact, the town house's roof has a massive skylight that spans accross alot of the roof space, so heaps of sunlight gets through. those "sun patches" I think could have been the cuastics gone wrong - i'll have to fix that, at first thought i thought it was sunlight, but then looking at its position it doesnt look like it is.

Thanks man, i'll post up other areas of my townhouse so you can see what i mean :)
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Kazroth Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2005
Lookin forward to see em :)
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J-Ro-20 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
nice work dude that turned out really cool! Nice lighting.
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DivineDreamZ Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2005
I like it. Looks clean and modern ^^
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